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Posted: 10 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: _Santhi_



u already r writing 2 wonderful stories so experience😛advantage u see😆all of them are amazing writers n i like there work so was thinking unke samne u know😕😕


ya I understand dear
likhane se pahale muzebhi aisehi hesitation hota tha in fact Abhi bhai hora hai 😲
but try Karane me kya jata hai to bhagwan ka nam lo aur ha bol do
Edited by swaralohakare - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Marie!! Was busy, saw this! Hey I'll be partner! but I'll read first ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: DiVirgo

Hey Marie!! Was busy, saw this! Hey I'll be partner! but I'll read first ;)


Gimme 10 more mins b4 i put in the 1st part 😉😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
And finally I start off with this thread ...finally !! 😃
Just some stuff which i wished to clarify ..if anybody has any any probs , please don't hesitate to tell me !
So here goes it

1] In order to maintain a coordination till this thread is well established I am setting an order as to who will update 1st & who'll go next. (its just any random order which will pertain only in the initial days with the ppl who have agreed.) Once the thread is on track , then this order thing will be discontinued & the thread will work like any other joint ss does. List at the bottom of the update.

2] Writers are free to write / experiment whatever they wish too. Bashing of any type from any reader will not be accepted.

3] & now ...most importantly !! ENJOY !!!
Drop in loads of comments & likes for the updates. 😃


Chapter 1


If someone asked Kalpana Vitthal Jadhav as to how had she fallen in that situation , her only answer would have been ' I have no damn idea ! '
Churning the pancake batter more vigorously she spurred it on the frying pan. Till yesterday she was a free bird , hopping from one branch to the other ...well not literally ..but yeah , she was free ! And today ? She was making pancakes for a man she had met a couple of hours ago . Adjusting the flame perfectly , she hopped onto the kitchen counter as she drove a quick glance at the lavish surroundings around. Everything was incredibly perfect ...Unlike her life !! She had no job , no degrees , no love , no family ..laughing hysterically at that last declaration of hers

"Family ? Should i even call them that ? A family who trusted that Paakhi over me & abandoned me out of the house ? How could my aai- baba even believe that i was trying to hit on that jug-headed Prem ? ...HAa why should i be surprised , i expected it someday ...but i never felt it would be yesterday !"


She was jerked out of her thoughts when she felt someone's uncomfortable presence around her.

"Just for ur info ...I hate burnt pancakes !" an ultra sexy voice murmured those words in her ear in a sexier tone & in the sexiest way possible !

Kalpana turned around reflexively as she came face-to-face with a brown eyed wonder-boy ! Dark brown - stark eyes looking back at her in a piercing gaze. Getting off the counter immediately she flipped the pancake & faked engrossment in making them. She had to somehow manage her trembling hands which had hackles raised on it.

Raghav on the other hand was highly amused on seeing this dusky beauty in his kitchen. A feeling of warmth had spread across his chiyaalis ki chaati (hahaha...i couldn't incorporate sola ka dola 😆😆) the moment he had seen her in his kitchen cooking breakfast for him. He knew she wasn't doing it willingly, but to repay the money she owed him. Nevertheless her presence in his house made him happy ...for some unknown reason !!

He now walked upto the kitchen counter & made place for himself on the nearby stool. Her back was to him. She had tied a bun of her hair with delicate ringlets escaping it. The curls had further entwined around the long line of her neck artistically. She had worn a pair of grey sweatpants & an extra-baggy green sweater. Raghav was observing her keenly. Her attire was so different from what he had seen her in the night prior.

But her eyes had that blaze... the blaze that had caught his attention in the buzzing crowd the previous night at the club where she was dancing gracefully. The blaze which had unknowingly connected him to her & forced his conscious & sub-conscious mind to give into the decision of helping a bankrupt & homeless woman , by giving her shelter in his house for 'some days' , till she found a new residence !

& the funniest part being , he was helping her in the veil of a threaten of she owing him some money . (Yeah ...so my 150... or more actually words are done ! Now let neha take over 😃😃)
But do u think it would take time for this 'some days' to transform into forever ?



MARUSHKAA

Now the order (its random & if anyone disagrees /dislikes this order thingy of mine , do lemme know !!)


1)neha
2)_TheBlackRose_
3)ishani12
4)ban18 (I know u have kpt urself as side kalaakar , but yet i am including u as i think the readers wud get some mast wala story if u & priya come together)
5)priya_remix
6)swara
7)jiya007
8)rkonly
9)_Santhi_
10)zindgidilse

I repeat , the order is completely on random basis ...no hard feelings !

Edited by maarushkaa - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
Oo..!!! Ye mere kaam ki cheez nahi.. Hum to bhai reader hai... Likhna mera kaam nahi.. Bas update plzz hi likhna aata hai.. Wo likh deti hun... Aur maru meri jaan FB pe mera likha hua perdha hoga... Meine iss kaam mei tera saath diya to tere pe sab egg aur chappal ki barish ker dege... Holi aane wali hai colour ki barish achi lagti hai in sab ki nahi...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
Very good Maru.. But u forgot charu di in this list.. Plzz unko bhi daal do... Aaj kal bahut baag rehi hai Dida update dene se...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! So you've already started this thread. But you included my name😆.
When it comes to team work,I'm crummy😛 and people over here never like my take on ragna.😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
brilliant update mariie
Kalpi was bankrupt and homeless too
nice start who is going next
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Was wondering if you prefers the join SS to be for virgin ears ?😉😆

Edited by GUYCAN - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice start.,..
nd thank to u for keeping me at the end in the list.. There was a big grin on my face seeing my name at the end..😃.muaw..😆 Ab jab itni badi meherbani Ki hai toh ek aur sahi.,read my ps...


PS or Request...pls remove my name from writers list...pls.,pls..pls.. Coz as per rishu's dialogue.,.THIS IS NOT MY CUP OF TEA. 😒.
pls marsh.,iss nannhi si zindgi ki yeh fariyad sun lo..

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