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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter. 28

Kalpi was standing near her window room thinking about raghav behaviour , when Rk comes as he know she was disturbed by roday event
R- hmm thinking about morning
Kalpi look at him
K- no it's nothing like that
R- u are lying .
I'm ur best friend and i know u very well . U've no need to lie .
R- do u want to forgive him
Kalpi look at him
K- no , it's truth that i love him but he broke my trust .
R- so why are u upset ??
K- i don't know but i want to go from here
R- u remember kalpi when we meet first
K- hmm
I'm too much injured that day and more than injured i'm broken that day .
I come to know about whole thruth as it that goons was send by sahil bcoz he come to know i'm going from kapoor mantion to meet raghav but when i come outside from singhania mention that goons gidnapped me and take me to an isolated place where sahil & neetu was waiting for me .
They don't want that my name attach to there family and hence want to kill me but when i ask them why are they doing this then they think it's my last wish so they tell me whole truth but it doesn't make difference does it??
I try my best but he didn't trust me do u still think that i go back to them never .

R- remember kalpi when u meet me u are burnt 20 % .
K- yes bcoz sahil & neetu leave from there they order goons to burn that place they tied me with ropes and after that they burn that place .
But i'm lucky at that time as somehow i manage to leave but in this process i injured my self and when i come out from that place place i was badly injured but that goons see me in order to procect myself i keep runing & running but i fall unconcious , and the nxt thing i know i was in hospital unconcious from past 2 days .
R- bcoz that day when me & bittuji was coming back from lonavla i saw u unconcious on road and some goons try to take u from there but when they see me and bittuji they run from there as vinay was with me that day ( acp see ch 14).
K- if u are not there that day then ..
R- don't u dare to say futher .
k- but why u want me to remember all this .
R- bcoz i want to make u understand that u won't go back until u prove urself innocent . That day inspite of being broken & injured u fight for ur life that day no one was with u but still u fight .
R- kalpi think that day why u meet me?? do u think that why ur bappa save u that day??
Kalpi look at him
R- bcoz they want u to prove urself innocent .
Bcoz they want that culprit get punished but if u become weak like that then there is no use of fighting for our right . Remember that no matter what i'm always there for u .

K- u know u are the best bcoz u've solution of all my problem
R- i know .
But now take rest .
Good night

K- good night

Saying so he leave from there.
...
Hush finish
Plz tell me how is it ? I don't know how many of u going to support it but plz tell me honestly how is it ?
and if u want any changes??

Edited by ....neha - 10 years ago
MagicalMadness thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Great update. Loved RK motivating kalpi.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update...
RK motivating kalpi...she should take revenge...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Ya dear I have one question so r u going to continue ragna story also or not because I want to see ragna as a pair so😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: artiodedra2007

Ya dear I have one question so r u going to continue ragna story also or not because I want to see ragna as a pair so😃

i'm not going to discontinue anyone as i said before i'll make ragna as a couple in original version and in this one i'll make rk- kalpi a couple
so i'm going to update both version
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Both ch 27,28 are awesome.
I like this strong kalpi.
How she reply to raagav was amazing,
wowww raagav hire 10 bodyguards for kalpi.
How cutely kapi scolded rk.
Paakhi was in shock plzzz give more shock to her.
Rk and kalpi talk was amazing.
How well rk undestand kalpi.
Want rk and devil romantic scene.
Thanks for lovely updates.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great. I am happy that Kalpi has developed a 'shell' around herself. No amount insults or abuses will affect her ,now.!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Neha,
Absolutely wonderful updates.
Though I am die -hard fan Of Ragna ,I don't want to support Raghav of this ff at all
after what he had done to his love and Kalpi.
OMG,those evil-minded souls,literally wanted to kill her.Good,that she was saved by Rk
and Bituji.
I ,totally agree with Rk's words,that the culprits including her parents should be punished and
she should prove her innocence soon.
Let's see,how Rk ,makes her to take this friendship to the next level!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
First of all i want to say thankyou
u have busy schedule but because of us u decided to write a 2nd version.
Now come to ur updates
Both parts are lovely.
Rk care so much for kalpi
omg 10 bodyguard for kalpi so cute
rk was afraid of kalpi how sweet
rk and kalpi scene was amazing
want to see rk romantic side
Do continue ur story.
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
amazing updates 😊
Rk is so protective towards kalpi
I love this kalpi
she is so strong without any fear
neetu sahil was so heatless 😡
But no fear when rk the saviour is here
want rk devil masti and love scene
plzzz i want pakhi jealous to see rk devil happy.
When will u update next ch
thanks 4 pm

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