new ragna ff :pyar hai thumse part 8 udated 17

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kark12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

hello friends did u remember this story

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swati

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: ishani12
hello friends did u remember this story

I remember. ..This story... Waiting 4 RagNa dance. .

Ishani when will you updat u r all ff ss...Update soon. ..Waiting. .

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kark12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

hello friends I am updating next part plz read it and give feedbacks .

part 6:

raghav:I have to dance with this girl oh god.
Kalpi:hello muje koi shawk nahi hai ki mai thumhare saath dance karo.ab ham dono partner ban gaue hai tho karna hi padega.
Raghav:ha patha hai.isiliye tho yaha par hoo.
Kalpi:ek bath tho muje patha chal gaya.
Raghav:kya.??
Kalpi:yahi ki hum dono pehele hi round me har jayenge vo bhi thumhare wajaha se.
Raghav:ou hello u are saying it as ur the best dancer.
Kalpi:i am nt that best but atleast i am better than u.
Its the challenge for him now.
Raghav:ab dekhlena ye comoetition hum hi jeethenge vo bhi mere karan.
Kalpi:i it.??
Raghav:ya.
Kalpi:lets see.
They anounces that everyone should take their place.
They played the song ishq wala love .as the oaper was enough for them to stand comforably they danced well. Only few member removed in first round.
Second round stared they folded the paper now the place is only enough for two persons to stand .in this kalpi and raghav fight for the place .
Raghav puts his hand on hrr back and pull her more close.kalpis eyes widened by seeing this..
Raghav:mhu band karo apna.place nahi hai isiliye pakda hu.. agar hath choa tho gir javogi. Chodu.??
Kalpi:nahi nahi..
The song start playing thum hi ho.. they danced well so many people got out in this round
Next they come and fold the paper and onlu two couples left paki karan and raghav kalpi..
They folded the paper now there is only a small place left where only one person can stand .
Kalpi:ab kya hoga? Muje bhi jagaha chayiye.
Raghav:hup bak bak band karo let me think...har waqt bak bak sw kaam nahi chalega
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riaka

@riaka

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Nice update. Raghav took the lead.sure ragna going to win 😉

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MagicalMadness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Kya baat hai yaar. Ragna paper dance ... Loved it. Rags so mean to kalpi... Gawd kitna bau khatha hai yeh ladka!!!! Aur kalpi what an attitude queen. 😛

Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago

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charvi3

@charvi3

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Lovely update dear

Ragna paper dance😉...loved it

Update next part soon dear

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abxetz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Ishu tu ff likhnai ke saath saath black mail bi shuru kiya hai kya 😆 😆 ragna ki itni achi paper dance tune itni ache jaga pe finish marli. 😳 😳 girls jalthy sai like dedo varna ishu update nahi karenge 😉

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kark12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: abxetz
Ishu tu ff likhnai ke saath saath black mail bi shuru kiya hai kya 😆 😆 ragna ki itni achi paper dance tune itni ache jaga pe finish marli. 😳 😳 girls jalthy sai like dedo varna ishu update nahi karenge 😉

nahi yar black mai nahi par thu hi dekh na u preetu sunnyvsteeti ovee ria sweet charvi and two three more people will read my ff .. I feel bad to have only few readere anyway I am nt blackmailing u . Becz of u only I am continuing my ffs or else I wolud have left it long before

Edited by ishani12 - 10 years ago