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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet1308

oh emotional update pari misses her dad n rag n gauri get shocked of life their brother n son is no more

update soon
is pari related t abhi


thank you dear😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: charvi3

Lovely update dear😊

Dear I'm little confuse ashish had tumor so he is not married then who is the parents of pari & why rags feel connected to her😕


no dear Abhi has tumor not Ashish and Pari is Raghav's niece so he feels connect to her 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

thank you eishe😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Cute_Kate

Lik most I have same question..!!! Who is Pari??

Seems either Kalpi was married to this Manish guy or?? She was adopted by Manish/ Abhi??


manoj is kalpi's father and Pari is her sister daughter thank you dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
please forgive me for spelling and grammatical errors.

Part 13 A

' Abhi... My Abhi.. no he can't leave me Raghav ..he can't leave me' Gouri broken down in Raghav's embrace. She fell on the couch, raghav hold her but she sobbing like hell. Raghav also not understand how to react on the situation which brother...he thought responsible for breaking his father's death and family loss that person was on this big trauma. The tears he hold from the time was burst into the cry...the great business tycoon Raghav Singhania is crying with his mother. Sammy and annanya tried to control them but all in wastage. Ashish sit near Gouri...
Ashish: aunty... please calm down... Abhi never wanted you cry like this.. He loved you so much..
Gouri: no Ashish ho never love me that's why he leaves me alone... Why I am alive... no I also want to die... She cried by hiding her head in Raghav's chest.
Ashish: no aunty... You have to be alive for Abhi and his beautiful gift which he leaves for you... Raghav and Gouri look at him surprisingly.
Gouri: gift...
Ashish: yes gift... He loves you more than him...so before leaving this world he left a gift for you... His daughter Pari... Everyone in that hall except Ashish and Kirti widen their eyes..
Kamini: what the hell are you talking... You said Abhi was single then where from his daughter came now... Kirti gave her irritated look.
Ashish: I am not talking anything wrong auntyji.. Yes he was single when he left Singhania mansion but destiny planning something very nice for my yaar... When he came to India for his treatment., I admitted him under the supervision of my father's friend ...Dr.Manoj Jadhav who was a best neurologist in Mumbai...
and where he first time meet Anagha ...Manoj uncle's daughter, her nature and beautiful heart... my friend did not control himself to fall for her... And Anagha...she started to like Abhi. With the time they started to love each other... Abhi was afraid because of his disease but Anagha.. she was so much in love with him that his disease didn't bother her. She wanted to marry him...wanted to spend her life as his...but Abhi refuses and finally he gave up in front of her...Manoj uncle was not agree for their relationship but finally he also lost in front of their love and they got married... You know aunty when Abhi knew he was going to be father.. he was superb happy... wanted
to tell you first but stopped himself. Life was so beautiful...everyone was forgetting the reality behind the happiness... but truth is never hide it come in front of as long as time... Tears started to flow from his cheeks, his voice freeze in his throat...
Kirti: one day Abhi's condition was going to be critical with each passing second that time Anagha was seven month pregnant... Manoj sir, me and Ashish to much worried ...
Ashish: and Abhi wished before die he wants to see his child's face...but I think destiny much stronger than us... Anagha started labor pain... and she borned Pari...she was a premature but a healthy child... It looked like Abhi got the greatest treasure in this world... his eyes shows the happiness of his child's birth as well as the sadness he will not see his daughter growing. And that day Pari borned...my best friend took his last breath... He left this world with his love... Gouri and Raghav and others look at him surprisingly.

Kirti: Anagha also took place last breath with Abhi... Her heart didn't allow her to live without her life so she also went with him... My best friend left everyone... Gouri's face start to become pale with each second.

Annanya: where is bhai's daughter.

Ashish: Pari is with her masi ...Kalpi. Manoj uncle and kalpi take care of Pari very well..but before two years manoj uncle also left them alone and from then Kalpi look after Pari as her own daughter... In fact they really forget which relation they borrow. Kalpi and Pari love each other lot...Pari is a very nice kid aunty...you will be proud of your... Aunty. Everyone turn to her...she was going to fainted' why god why my children my husband you took everyone...and that not feel you enough you make my little child orphan...don't you and any mercy...Raghav take her in his embrace' mom for god sake stop crying mom' he implore her...she look at him teary eyes 'why Raghav ? Which punishment he given to us Raghav... Mere bachhe ...itana kuch akele sahate rahe aur muze kuch bhi pata hi nahi...kitani buri ma hu mai( my children suffers a lot alone and don't even know.. I am a very bad mother) Raghav' she said with sobbing heartily.

Raghav : no mom you are not...Pari is not orphan mom...I promise you I will fulfill that every responsibility as bhai wants.. I promise you Mom..

Gouri: Raghav... And she fainted in his arms. Raghav take her to the hospital...


Done...I hope I am not disappointed u guys... As you know the relation of Abhi Pari and kalpi.. Now onwards how Kalpi accept her Mr.Attitude's relation with Pari. And can she allow Raghav to take Pari with him???


Edited by swara2504 - 10 years ago
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Part 13 B

Raghav was sitting at outside of the special ward where Gouri was kept in...lost in his thoughts, his face showing the jolt of his heart, his eyes want to bemoan but attitude of mighty Raghav Singhania doesn't allow him to cry. Sammy, annanya, Ashish and kirti was feeling sad to see him in this state, they very well know from which trauma he was going on but they was unable to do anything.
Raghav POV: I am sorry bhai... I am so sorry... I was not understand you...I said myself as your junior but your junior felled to understand your eyes...bhai.. Why...why you hide your problem from us...dad definitely made some solution...he definitely do something... but... you didn't think us as worthy to share your problem... you didn't want to give us pain but what about the pain you give us... you did the wrong thing... I always hated you for that reason which never exists. And Pari... What is the fault of that innocent child which you stay away from us or that persons who keep her away from ours...I promise you bhai I take of your child as mine...I never put her away... She is the princess of Singhania empire... so she will get that everything she deserve...I promise you bhai...from today and now she is mine... And I will take her US. And he get up from his seat moving toward the Ashish..
Raghav: I want to meet her...now..
At New Era Kindergarten School,
Raghav: hello myself Raghav Singhania... I want to meet Pari Singhania..
Principal: oh Mr.Singhania nice to meeting you... I always wants to meet you but never got the chance... Anyway I calls Pari. She rang the bell and peon came there. ' call Pari Singhania kg IA urgently and tell teacher Mr. Singhania wants to meet her..' Peon went to the class while principal gave him the pari's progress report... Raghav was surprised to listen her progress report... a sweet smile came on his face.
In class room,
Peon: madam... principal madam calls Pari Singhania in her cabin.. Mr.Singhania come to meet her.
Teacher: Pari come dear...your father came to meet you dear...
Pari: papa...teacher really my papa came..
Teacher: yes sweetie come on let's go... Teacher take her to the principal's office.
Here Raghav impatiently waiting for Pari...' Mr.Singhania you wait here..
I have some work...so..I will come in few minutes' principal said and leave the room.
' Pari go dear and meet your father, I will be back' and teacher returned from there. Pari stop at her place, the little child want to see her father from when even she don't know but today her legs hesitate to go in... She looks at him bending over the corner of the door. Raghav was sitting at the chair, his back is still toward her and that's why he didn't notice her.
' Pa...pa' she call him...Raghav's heart beating like a runner... he turn his head toward the voice and he got the another biggest shock of his life...his angel is just in front of him...he feel like his body frail in the air and collapse now... Here angel was shocked to see her good uncle is standing in front of her as her father... She looks at him questioningly...
'Are you really my pa...pa?' Her sweet voice take him out of thinking but his voice is chock up somewhere.

'You are my papa' she move forward...while Raghav still watch her steadily.

' tell me na you are really my papa... ha' Pari said little loudly this time which gives the voice to the Raghav's throat.

Raghav: yes angel ...I am your Papa...

' then why don't you tell me that day..hmm' she asked him angrily.

Raghav: I am sorry angel... Papa thought when he came back he told the angel this..

Pari: but angel is very angry on you.

Raghav: I am so sorry sweetheart. He bend down on his knee holding his ear..' Can angel forgive her father' Pari nod her little head negatively..'can pari hug her papa...' She again nod her little head negatively.. ' please...' She looks at him with narrowing her eyes.

'Pa..pa' Pari ran and hug him tightly , Raghav also hug her like a no day after tomorrow. Her little hands encircled around his neck..

Pari: why you came late papa...you know how much I miss you ...muma also miss you so much... I love you papa... She uttered in her sobbing cry.

Raghav: papa loves you too sweetheart..

Pari broke the hug' promise me you never leave me alone'

Raghav: never..Papa never leave you angel..

Pari: and muma too...

' yes...muma too' Raghav hesitate for a while but to see Pari's innocent face, he said. He hug her again.

Same time at kalpi's bedroom,

Kalpi sit at the corner of bed handling the photo of Abhi and Anagha. Tears are flowing from her eyes...

Kalpi: sorry di...sorry jiju..

I am failed to fulfill my responsibility... I am failed as a mother... I am taking the place of pari's mother but I failed to take her father's place... That's my fault... I keep her father alive but what should I do... how can I tell that little girl... her parents are dead...they are dead when she born...how can I tell her di...Sorry jiju...sorry to embrangle your child on the name of you... But I love her more than mine di..and as a mother I will fulfill my every duty toward her...I never allow anyone to take her away from me. I promise you.

Raghav: I promise you bhai...as a father I will fulfill my every duty toward her...I never allow anyone to take her away from me now. I promise you.

Kalpi: she is mine...

Raghav: she is mine...


I hope you all like this track if yes then pls press like and your comments.




Edited by swara2504 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update Swara... Waiting for 13 b update soon... Wanna kno RagNa's reaction abut this ... Update soon plzz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update Swara.. Both the chappies were suprb... Pari called Raghav papa... Nice... Plzz update nxt chappy soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
girl u made me cry in part a
and i'm still crying but i can't fo anything with this as i'm an emotiinal fool
and 13(b) it's awsome
both part are amazing
update soon

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