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Posted: 10 years ago
woderful story neha dear..I love it..

Read all parts in one go..
I love this possessive raghav.
Love th way he cares for her
Kalpi unkowingly started feeling for him lol...

Thank u so much for giving such a brilliant updates.
Acha ab 2ait nahi hoga next part dedo na plz
Ha thoda romantic wala..
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Posted: 10 years ago
i'll update this till night
and try to add some romantic moments
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...neha


i'll update this till night

and try to add some romantic moments

Waiting for tonight... 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Please add romantic moments after all they r on honeymoon so some love making is needed. Have kalpi wear one of the short dresses rags bought for her. 😛
Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Eagerly waiting for sweet,cute ,romantic moments without any gussa,mukka

and rona dhona.
PAKKA NAA DEAR.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waiting for possesive raghav 😳 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Neha waiting for ragna romance
this time I want kalpi to reciprocate
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 17

Kalpi open her eyes she look at raghav who is sitting beside her staring her .
R- u wake up . Go freshen up i'll prepare lunch .
and kiss her forehead
K- wo
R- what happen
K- raghav i'll prepare lunch
R- why i'll prepare it
K- woo raghav
R- u don't like what i cook??
K- no , it's nothing like that . Wo i don't like pasta
R- u don't like pasta but i only know to prepare pasta, toasts and some soups .
But don't worry tonight i'll prepare what u want
k- no raghav i'll cook
R- i said i'll cook and that's final
K- but raghav u don't know how to cook
R- it's not a big task u guide me and i'll cook .

Kalpi know it's of no use to argue with him so she nodded her head in yes.
R- ok come .
and he scoope her in his arms
K- raghav i'll walk .
R- i know but i want to carry u .
...
Kalpi sit on chair which was arranged by raghav and she look at him who is busy in preparing atta for parantha
K- raghav i make it
R- i said na i'll make it . And he add water on flour
K- raghav stop u add lot's of water in it .
Raghav look at flour . He take flour in his hand but it drop on plate
R- now what i do?
K- add some more flour in it
Raghav add flour but this time also he added extra flour . He look at it .
R- it's easy to prepare a presentation then making this .
K- raghav i'll make it please .
Raghav look at himself it's not easy to prepare atta for pratha. His hands , face and head etc are covered with lot's of flour .
R- ok , i'll cut vegetables. Tell me which vegetables i need to cut .
Raghav cut vegetable and kalpi prepare atta .
Kalpi start to prepare paratha but raghav dtop her
R- i'll prepare it
K- but
R- i'll prepare it
He take chappati roller from her hand and start preparing it but they are not coming in round shape .
and on other side kalpi trying hard to control her laughter raghav look at her
R- is it nessesary that paratha always needed to be in round shape . We also eat this .
Kalpi forst nodded her head in yes and then no and start laughing
R- what
K- nothing
R- now nxt
K- we need to cook it
He put pan on stove and then paratha on it
R- why it's not cooking
Kalpi look at stove
K- we need to switch on it
Raghav first look at kalpi and then stove . He switch on stove and start cooking it . Raghav rotate it otherside .
He look at kalpi who was looking at him . They have eyelock .
They come in senses when they smell something burnt and look at burnt paratha .
Kalpi hurrily took it and they prepare new one . Finally they finish making paratha .
R- now nxt sabji
K- now u go i'll prepare it
R- no i'll prepare
Kalpi guide him and he do as she say but accidently his hand hit hot pan
R- ouchh .
Kalpi what happen she take his hand in her . Tears start forming in her eyes
K- u are so careless . Come with me
R- it's nothing kalpi now let's finish this fast
K- i said no i'll prepare it but first u come with me .
She drag him with her and put oilment in his hand
R- it's ok kalpi . Come now
K- no i'll prepare it u go freshen up
R- but
K- i said i'll prepare it and look at urself ur face and hands all are covered with flour go freshen up
R- ok but be careful
Kalpi then prepare lunch while her thoughts are consumed by raghav
He strain himself so much for me . Y i hate him when he love me so much??
After that they both finish lunch.
..
Raghav and kalpi both lying on bed raghav hugging her keeping her close to himself
K- raghav
R- hmm while kissing her on her lips
K- woo can we go outside from this house . Woo near ocean
R- u like to play in ocean
K- i like it so much
R- then we go
K- now
R- it's looking hot outside we'll go in some time
...
After some time

Kalpi sit in beach sand looking at ocean . Raghav come and sit beside her .
K- raghav can i go and play in water
R- i'll come with u
They went to ocean kalpi start play she splash some water on raghav accedently but get worried how raghav behave on this but her worried soon vanish when raghav start playing with her .
All the while raghav was holding her hand tightly . He is sure that they don't go deeply and she remain safe .
R- come kalpi now it's getting late we need to go inside
K- ji

Raghav lock main door . He turn and look at kalpi her wet dress stick on her body showing her curves water dropping from her wet hairs . Kalpi turn look at raghav who was looking at her intensly . She know what is coming further . He come near her tuck her hairs behind her ear she closes her eyes .
He caresses her cheeks kissing her cheeks he lean kiss her lips .
Kalpi clutch him . He scoop her and take her to bedroom make her lay on bed . He come above her his hands travel inside her clothes . He place a kiss in her crook of her neck , her shoulder . He remove her and his clothes one by one and start kissing her . His hands travrel on her bare body and soon he claim her his again .
...
Hush finish sorry for mistakes or if i dissapoint u
Edited by ....neha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nice story neha.😊
Edited by ban18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Neha add some kisses missed and other romance please like shower together. 😳
Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago

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