RAGNA SS :MY DESIRES FOR YOU-part16-pg:124 updated 15/5 - Page 4

😃😃😃 This is happy me !!!!! STELLA I am loving n loving this story so very much !!!!! Very beautifully sensitiv update 👏 And I like this Always Unclad Raghav 😉 Great going gal !!!!

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Nice one Stella 😊

So Kalpi was admiring Raghav wow...not bad doosri mulakat mei bhi he is not in proper clothes Lol 😆

Kiara, the girl whose fate cheated her now has Kalpi and Raghav with her. It was really emotional when she hugged Kalpi try to seek in comfort, love and warmth. It was beautiful 😊

Waiting for 3rd Chappy. 😊

And ya read the comment that you like my work. Thank you so much 😊

just read both the parts... its a lovely start... waiting for more

beautifully written, poor kaira, just curious how did Raghav know that Kalpi was right for the job, and what connection do they share

Such a beautiful Update. Kaira was certainly the star, innocent & sweet child craving for love. It was touching to see her and Kalpi's instant bond. Curious to know how was Raghav so sure that Kalpi is the right choice for Kaira? Kalpi has a tough road ahead, with that deadly attraction for Raghav. Loved that swimming pool scene and Kalpi couldn't help drooling.😆

Wow!! The way you described his Home wow he is damn rich!! And Im telling you one day I'm gonna own myself a jaguar ;) my dream car;) one day!!! Hmm I'm curious!! Rags knew that Kalpi was the one?! Did he research her?! I'm having this feeling! Me and my ways!
And you had to bring him in A white shirt!! Damn!! Already you have me thinking 😉 he really don't take long to get dressed 😉
That moment with Kalpi and kaira was too emotional, my heart went out to the little one!! How can anyone resist those blue eyes that as a doll!! Little kairas description is of a little doll!! And the thumb in her mouth ohh tooo cute 😉
Kalpi didn't bother to ask any further question about when? what time? How many days? Now I'm too anxious to hear what rags have to tell her concerning her working time! And if she's live in or what?! This is awesome!! Wonderful creativity!! Love it!!

Originally posted by: lolor

Wonderful update...

The way Kiara hugged kalpi...i got emotional...

Waiting to see kiara-kalpi bonding & ragna also...

Hii Stella...
Ur ff is super duper awesome...kiara nd kalpi bonding was mind blowing...I was touched when dey huggged...seriously it was THE BEST SCENE ...
When raghav said,when I saw u,I knew u r the only one 4 kiara..it was awesome... how kalpi was drooling over raghav..I was blushing while reading it.. kalpi wud hv go insane if 4 some more time she stayed deir... w8ng 4 next update ,plzz update it soon..
If possible plzz pm me ur updates

hey hi I'm raka love ur ff the way u expressed their emotion superb pls pm me from onwards & pls accept my buddy request...