The Inevitable Beginning: RagNa SS,EPILOGUE, Pg-132,21/1/17 - Page 17

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome ff dear...Loved d way story started wit ragna married...she having crush on him who den becam her boss n later her husband...oh i loved d way you entwine the past and present n dem reminiscing their moments together is so romantic😳😳...hatts off to ur talent dear👏

Both were attracted to each other n were hesitant to voice der feelings n gauri being aware of der love finally went to kalpi's house wit marriage proposal
loved how u showed Raghav's interest, care,jealousy n possessiveness for Kalpi thru whole party n peeyush scenario...dat was life changing moment for both as both sumwhr realised der feeling towards each other n Kalpi got to knw abt loving n caring side of him
Wow Charu...d whole raghav tending her wound scene was super romantic...can't stop blushing😳😳
Awww loved d passionate ragna moments...was having goosebumps reading it n making m blush to no end☺️
Ragna phone convo was awesome...his teasing n flirting whc was making kalpi blush...n him giving tips to get rid of hangover n giving half day off was lovely
office scene is superb ...loved how kalpi specially got ready for him n him admiring her was amazing😉...ragna were abt to share kiss n dats wen ayesha came😔 n Kalpi was remided of der social diff n was hurt n walked away...lik dat Raghav noticed the change in her demeanour
Ragna car conversation was beautiful...loved how he honestly confessed abt his feelings n strong liking twrds her n asked her to give a chance to der relationship by accepting frndship...but kalpi's denial made him angry n he kissed her n poured all his anger in dat kiss
Kalpi dreaming abt raghav was cute
Ragna moment in offc n der hug was magical😳
Finally kalpi voiced out her fear n again rejected his frndship proposal...also loved how was raghav trying to make her understand abt his feelings n strong liking but all in vain
Finally love guru gave his advice to make her accept him
Present scene whr both were feeding each other was lovely

Waiting for another romantic n sizzling hot update...pls update soon 😉😃
❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Charu,
You have turned our worlds really upside down.
We are lifeless without your updates dear.
So pls come soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ariarai

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Yay!!🤪 Me first!! Okay charupie since I didn't get to read Part 3 I'll update both Chapters Here

Part 3😳
Wow after what their did he seem pretty normal😆😉😉haaaye this Raghav he's so shameless😳 aww Kalpi's getting all Tomato Red😆☺️aaawww Raghav came staight to the point "It's Raghav calling Kalpi"😳🤢ya! this Raghav is so foward and poor kalpi😆😆 Charu I'm totally enjoying this😳😳Butterflies i'm feeling it too😳😳Is totally trying to blackmail or Force her😆Wow Raghav knows everything,what to do wow I'm speechless beautifully wriiten charupie👏👏Raghav's pretty happy she's calling him by his name😉 he has an evil,naughty sweet,caring Mind this man! He's so dreamy😳😳ohh he gave her half day leave how sweet BUT what's his reasson??Oh how sweet he's thinking of her health I thought he would do someting mischievous😳 Ohh raghav's doing all this and Kalpi's getting more and more atractted to him and he know's she lost in his thoughts and he's waiting for her can this get any sweeter??😳 Kalpi's heart is beating❤️ she's nervous who would'nt it reminds me now of the scene with RagNa after the confession where kalpi's accidently droped the files and raghav helped her and she was too nervous😳 awww she really does love Raghav😳😳 It's too cute😳 he wants to loook at her not making the poor girl sit😳😆hmmm shameless😳😳 he's so cruel he knows she's blushing away at his words and he's still talking,I'm sure she 100% uncomfortable by his gaze and words🤪Ya this guy is seriously checking Kalpi out😲😳this guy😳😳 he's watching her and she knows it😆😆hhhmmm got to know she's enjoyiing all of it😆😳 can't blame her though😛😃hmmm he got up I hope he doesn't turn into Romance mode😳😳 Kalpi all so nervous,I wasn't wrong wrong he called her to talk😃😃 aww Reminded me of RagNa moment in EMA days😭😭 Ahhh he kissed her hands argghhh charupie you're making me blush and all nervous to find what what's gonna happen he need her permission to do what he want to,what does he want to do! this guy is really something,woah he was denfinally going to kiss her there,bold he is😎hmmm who's this woman who dared to spoil RagNa romance?? Friend or Foe??awww this idiot is hugging Raghav infront of Kalpi and she's feeling sad😕OMO Raghav hugged the lady back!!😡😲He let go and it was an unwilling hugged okay I'm not pissed with him anymore! Ayesha is the name of that woman!!🤓I would've dine what kalpi did good choice Kalpi👍🏼Hmm ayesha is observing kalpi,But kalpi is the best!Ohh kalpi's feeling sad and Raghav 😭 ohh so sad 😭she's avoding Raghav and he's frustrated😆😆Woah shocked and worried and scared Raghav poped out of nowhere😲oh he's furious😭Ohh he's pretty angry here poor kalpi,she running from raghav only to found in his arms again😆😳he's angry yet he's smirking😆 you gotta love this guy😆😆woah so demanding right now she has to listen to him😆😆she likes him like that as well😆😆okay now their in a deserated place I hope he doesn't do anything ahem moments I mean😆😳he's pouring it all out 😳😳 awesome part👏👏OMO she's in his lap man he moves fast wow that part where Raghav pours his heart out was beauitful charu it's beauitfully wriiten👏👏Oh kalpi Raghav is your life and everthing she's think like that I guess anyone would think like that😒oh he's so touchy and caring towards her I love this Raghav so much,😳😳Oh Ayesha likes them together okay she's cool...for now😊Omo she said no after he waiteed😲 why?😲 oh he's angry again and holding her tighter😲oh angry kiss he kissed her😳😃
aww cute RagNa part at the end😃😃
Ahhh this chapter was so beautiful!!!👏👏👏

Chapter 4😳😳

Ohh kalpi's dreaming ohh wait Kalpi's mother name in Vimla🤣 charu I'm sorry for laughing but it;s sound like Vitthal and Kamla-Vimla😆😆 so sorry😊
oh kalpi in blush mode😳😳 at raghav's touches🤪hmmm Raghav's so 😈 he might as well buy her lips as his own 😆😆 ohh such a cute scene therei can surely understand kalpi's words there👏👏 she loves him but can't bear the pain??I guess every girl sometimes think like that right😉Oh she bounced into Raghav while she's avoiding him,Kalpi can't avoid raghavv😆😆awww he rest his forehead on hers😳hmmm really deamding this guys but cute😳☺️ohh he's making it so much worse she getting more attractd to himawww what a cute hugg😳omo sammy's seeing them😲😲oh sammy😆😆 way to ruin that sweet hug😆😆 sammy😆😆 oh kalpi's tomato red again😳😳ohhh their hugging again😃😃 it's love Raghav LOVE😳😳beauitful RagNa scene👏👏Oh she gave him answer oh she still think the same😲ohh raghav's angry at her😭😭oh such a sad part 😭😭 oh😭😭 she's avioding him again oh he's angry and pouring his heart out another beautful scene again 👏👏👏oh kalpi's shocked by his words👍🏼ohhh he's right and Kalpi's oonly hurting them both😭😭 that was beautifully wriiten charupie👏👏👏Sammy what a beauitful idea😉 sammy's so awesome!! Love Guru❤️ Oh that Evil Mischeious Raghav is back love him😉 Beautiful short aprt with RagNa on the end👏👏👏

Oh yohooo Charupie beautuifull chapter both of them!!👏👏👏 I'm so sorry for writing so late,Beautifully written as always
AND YEA I'M FIRST🤪


I really didn't thought of Vimla while writing that way! 😆 n now it seems too funny 🤣 Sorry for short reply, but you know I cherished this a lot, a lot and a lot. 😃 🤗


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: switymango


awesome update Charu...👏
kalpi in dream 😛 she is blush 2 remember her & raghavs romance 😳😳 she with rag & he is kiss her 😉 her lips on own his ...😳😉 i love this movement..
but she is not want more memories ..bcz of not handling pain..😭she is not ready there friendship.. office scene was so beautiful...Ragna hug in office ..😳 oh sammy see them like this...😳😆 but kalpi say she still think the same..😲 hereing that raghav got angry & he say she is hurting her & he ...they both r sad..😭😭...sammy such a true friend 😃..he give idea 2 raghav👏...that raghav get back his love ...😳😆
charu u r a superb writer dear...loved this part...
update next part soon...


Thanks a lot Swati dear. 😃🤗 sorry for short reply.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Charu r u updating? Please update already so desperate this stalker reader if urs 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: eishe10

wonderful update 😉


Thanks.😊

Originally posted by: sunyy

Beautiful update. Stubborn kalpi and desperate rags 😆 lol both want to be together but one only pushing for friendship and the saying no because what if he decides that what he feels isn't love. Awww poor kalpi she already knows she loves him and doesn't want to get hurt. Continue soon 😛

Thanks dearie.😃

Originally posted by: DiVirgo

What a story!! I have to tell you!! 'If we go to hell then we'll make our heaven there' charu!! I love this line!! What a way to express the love they have for eahother!! On one hand Kalpi was scared to loose her love, and tried hard to ignore her feelings and on the other, raghav asking her is she will be able to feel another mans kiss and touch, that was awesome!! Now, I need to know more 😉how they reach where they are now?! Waiting 😉

Wow, you praised my story! 😃 n that comes from heart because you seldom say such thing. Muah for this. 🤗 Thanks a lot Di. ❤️

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari

suprb update Dida nd thnx for updating.. Plzz plzzz plzzz update nxt chappy soon... M waiting...

Thanks dearie. Muah. ❤️

Thanks. 😃 🤗

Originally posted by: ssna

Wow

nice update dear loved it.
poor rag ab pta nahi kya hoga.

Thanxx for d pm.

Thanks dearie. n no mention.😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sunyy

Charu r u updating? Please update already so desperate this stalker reader if urs 😳


LOL, yes I am. 😃 feels good to have a stalker. 😆 trying to finish with replies though!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lolor

wonderful update...
now waiting if kalpi will accept this new friend????& r AAi baba going to be haddy ...waiting waiting ...
pls update soon


Thanks dear.😊

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Wow wow wow!!! With each update the story just gets better and better the feelings more intense and the love more crazy!!!!

Charu ufff the struggle that Kalpi and Raghav had gone thru trying to stay away from each other!!! Too much!!! I was so engrossed that I never realised when the update ended and I felt bad!!!

Oh wow Priya!!Thanks a ton for this super-lovely comment. 😃 🤗 Muah. 😃 ❤️

Originally posted by: Aru18

awesome update chru

kalpi reject raghv's offer and he feel bad..me also feel bad for him😭😭😭
sammy is cute here..this sammy remind me the real sammy of show..he is just like him..😉
kalpi is right at her place..her fear is right..and u show her feeling so well..hat's off to you..
you are really wonderful writer..👏⭐️
humm so what's the plan for next 5 day's??..upate soon😃

Thanks Aruhi. 😃 😳 ur compliment is treasured truly.😳😃

Originally posted by: Aru18

awesome update chru

kalpi reject raghv's offer and he feel bad..me also feel bad for him😭😭😭
sammy is cute here..this sammy remind me the real sammy of show..he is just like him..😉
kalpi is right at her place..her fear is right..and u show her feeling so well..hat's off to you..
you are really wonderful writer..👏⭐️
humm so what's the plan for next 5 day's??..upate soon😃


😳 ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet1308

lovely awesome update

once again romance queen u got the talent i must say
kalpi in the aftermath of the passionate night wiz rag that she felt disturbed being woken by her mother n she wanted t be kissed by rag let her sleep might again see the dream 😆 naughty kalpi
oh she touched herself t feel the amazing touch of rag n dress in pant so that her resolve does not break wiz rag touching her bare skin😆
they came t office early n kalpi so lost in thought that she did not see rag in front of her
well her start of the day was good in the arm of her handsome boss n then swift in his chamber tightly on hug really love ragna😳 kalpi not want t lose that opportunity t see rag hmm though losing him as a lover
sammy naughty guy 😆 i just love his sense of humour n the ways he explained rag how t make kalpi miss wat he is missing n their food sharing definitely will increased their immense love they have between them
thank you for ur update its marvellous i eagerly wait for all ur updates as i just love ragna in ur stories
thank big huggies wiz hearts for u charu marvellous writer 🤗
update soon
n my name is humairaa


Hello Humaira. 🤗 ❤️ Wow, wow, wow, Romance Queen! 😳 Thanks a ton darling. Muah.🤗 Sorry for short reply though! 😭


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chahat4u



LOL, yes I am. 😃 feels good to have a stalker. 😆 trying to finish with replies though!


what? R u serious charu? U r giving update nw? Dat to aftr repy. Dear its already 1.20am, hw much tym u r going to awake?
Dnt stress urself darling.

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