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heyyllooo mariee...

waitng fr my comment..?😉😛

finallyy im here to unres😆😆 and nw i got to know dat this OS was a rishwaat😲 which is illegal 😆 but i accept this..(who d hell can say no to this😆😛)

frstly mariee.. dunno whether am i ryt or no.. but i felt that u improved a lot in writng skills(in a good way) each n evrythng u wrote it in a detailed way, which i lykd it😉.. okay nw abt the OS.. though the OS is purely fiction or in ur lang "with illogical aspects"😆.. it was sooo good to read sumthng diffrnt!😃 the whole story u depicted was superbb w/o any flaws.. evrythng made a sense(but in reality it wouldn't/may happen😛) raghav's search for his magazine cover and then getting lost into the forest.. and there his fears "He may deny but deep down he was frightened. Afterall, the wild animals aren't his employees to be scared of his angry young man look" lol these lines sounded too funny! 😆😆.. and then his encounter with junaid.. nah nah with kalpi 😛 it was good.. wen u described kalpi's dressing style.. lyk loose shirts n pants.. then nlyy I wondered sumthng is fishy.. bt dint expect dat u would give twist to it in a diffrnt way.. 😆 and then all the scenes were too good.. both getting along with similar interests towards photography, and raghav's changed behavior.. u knw.. it really sounds good wen an arrogant raghav turns into a fun-happy raghav..😃 which even surprised raghav abt it! And then here cums the surprise/twist.. for which I became too surprised.. and I love surprises😆😆 wen I read dat it was kalpi.. I was lyk😲 and then😃🥳 hahhahaha!! And she had already fallen fr him.. and the story behind here to be a guy, to show them dat even girls r no loess to do the project was a reasonable one.. and then u gave exact reasons to make raghav suspicious about junaid.. and cleverly he tried to knw the truth and succeeded.. but in return he got a biggg jhor ka jatka.. and nw he too strtd havng feelings fr her and dint want to break her heart.. hayeee..

though love has many definitions.. u come up with a new one in each n evry story of urs.. which I lykd it😉 and the last part wen he realized dat he too loves her, wen she left him... all those scenes and dialogues and "our fav scene".. hayeee hayeee hayeee hayeee hayeee hayeee hayeee hayeee hayeee hayeee hayeee hayeee hayeee hayeee hayeee hayeee hayeee hayeee hayeee hayeee I dint lyk it.. indeed I loved it!!!!! It was sooo perfect and romantic proposal ❤️ mariee.. i have no more words as last part totally made me speechless!!👏👏

thank u so much fr dis beautifull and lovelyyy rishwat..🤗😉

ps: and yeah fr the frst tym u spelt my name correctly "vyshu" karke.. 😆😆