Ragna SS~A Run Away Bride(ARAB) Ch-5(B) on Pg 52 on 21/12/15

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jiya

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Thank you everyone for your wonderful comments and feedbacks

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Kiaraah

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Nice character sketch and good start dear. Kalpi didn't want to marry Raghav because he's a don like her dad. So she runs away. Curious to know how she fall for him now. I know it's ragna story.

How is Prem going to fit in all this?

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jiya

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Originally posted by: Hanz91
Love the concept plz continue

Thanks and will continue soon

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jiya

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Originally posted by: Kiaraah
Nice character sketch and good start dear. Kalpi didn't want to marry Raghav because he's a don like her dad. So she runs away. Curious to know how she fall for him now. I know it's ragna story.
How is Prem going to fit in all this?

Thanks And yes kalpi didnt want to marry raghav as he is also a don just like her father That's why she run away And soon she will fall for raghav and yeah it is a ragna story and prem too will fit in the story

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rani214

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Nice prologue n interesting cs

Rags n vitthal both r don

Kalpi has invited trouble by running away...

Eager to knw hw kalpi falls for raghav as she hates him for his profession

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jiya

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Originally posted by: rani214
Nice prologue n interesting cs
Rags n vitthal both r don
Kalpi has invited trouble by running away...
Eager to knw hw kalpi falls for raghav as she hates him for his profession

Thanks rani And yes kalpi has invite trouble for herself and ver soon she will fall in love with raghav

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premap

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hello! Sweetie, I think Kalpi has run off for quite time ! So can we know what happens after 'The Bride Runs Away ? ' Update soon please .

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jiya

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Originally posted by: premap
Hello! Sweetie, I think Kalpi has run off for quite time ! So can we know what happens after 'The Bride Runs Away ? ' Update soon please .

Hi dear And yes kalpi had run off for quite time and will update soon

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jiya

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Chapter-1(b) @Road In road vitthal's goons search for kalpi everywhere but they didnt find her anywhere as she was hiding behind a tree so goons goes to other direction to find kalpi and in that time she runs from their but before she could go far all goons see her and start running behind her and as kalpi was running very fast she gets hit by a car which is of prem so prem comes out of car and tells her to come with him,he will take her to hospital and kalpi did the same and till some distance goons runs behind the car but at last they all fall on the ground and watch the car going far away from their eyes

@Hospital Prem bring kalpi to a hospital and then doctor do a bandage on her wounds then prem ask her who are you and why are you running on road like that but kalpi pretends that she had a memory loss so prem decides to call police and inform them about kalpi which makes her worried and she starts thinking that know you have to do something before it gets too late so when doctor and prem left the room she just run from their also and when they both come back they didnt find her anywhere and then they search the entire hospital but kalpi was no where so prem decides to go out and search her

@Road As one side goons are trying hard to search kalpi other side prem too is searching for kalpi but no one finds kalpi and in meantime kalpi reach near a lake which is her favourite place and sits down on the grass to rest for sometime and before goons comes their and see kalpi prems comes their and scolds kalpi for her behaviour and then ask the reason that why is she then dont know why but kalpi trusts him and tell him the entire situation then prem tells to kalpi that till matter get solved you can stay with him and kalpi accepted it because she needs a place to stay and then both went towards prem's home in prem's car

@Prem's Home Prem's home was not a mansion but yeah a confortable and prefect place to stay then kalpi see prem's entire house and admire the house a lot as everything was on their place and the home was so clean then prem say to kalpi that you can stay in guest room and after saying that he left for his room and kalpi makes herself confortable in his new room

@Rana's Mansion All the goons come back to mansion after seeing them vitthal ask them about kalpi and they say that they didnt able find her and after listing these vitthal start beating his man's but from when these drama had start raghav was all quite,he didnt even utter a single word

@Night In night kalpi makes a special food for prem by her hands to thank him for helping her but prem doesnt eat the food and nor for once he looks at food and then he prepars a noodle for himself and eat it as prem had a very bitter past and just because of his bitter past he avoid making friends or going close to anyone but he doesnt aware about his destiny that kalpi had comed in his life to change it forever and even for changing him too.

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