16th Shot - Had he finally left ? Pg 130 30/10/16 - Page 84

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update Maru, awesome description of Raghav's emotions. I still feel for him though. What eh did was wrong; but people who are afraid of emotions, afraid of getting hurt again because of emotions tend to become heartless for their own protection. I feel bad for him. Kalpi, everyone will understand because she is obviously the victim and the wronged one. But sometimes the wrongdoer needs just as much emotional and psychological counselling, company and understanding. Looking forward for the next part. And Hey, take care sweets. Hope you get well soon. 😊🤗❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
DAMN !!!!!! How can I miss reading this shot...anyway better late than never...

Di...it was FAB!!! I hate repeating same words again and again but u leave me with no other choice...


Eagerly waiting for the next shot...update soon di...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice chappy Maru.. Plz update nxt chappy soon.. Waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fab update but you have left us 'hanging by end of the cliff' !
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mariee Darling, i don't take it has shot, it's just a teaser.

Get well soon and give a lengthy update!! Untill then no comments...😊
Edited by hathway - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Why did he go to the hospital!!! Now she will figure him out!! First mistake RS did!! If he wanted to hide his feelings he shud have stayed away! It will only get worse for him because she will find it strange he came LOL guess RS is not that smart after all ;)
I can't wait for their encounters n accusations!! Gosh this is gonna be great!! Can't wait to read what he have to say LOL poor RS how is he gonna hide his feelings?! I love it Marie you're awesome !!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Plz scroll through the previous chapter on pg 117 for a better link. Hehehe...I would reccomend that strongly since this chapter isn't upto the mark (*sigh*) I feel. Anyways give it a try.😊

14th Shot - The darkest hours

Dhad !

It was a familiar feminine frame he had accidentally dashed into. His hands had instinctively forwarded to grab onto her waist when he noticed her lose balance.

"Stop" she ordered , gesturing the same with her hand & stumbled against the wall of the elevator as also avoiding her fall in the same process. Withdrawing his hands away from her he stepped back giving a nod. He further saw her push herself off the wall of the elevator & stand upstraight in front of him, her eyes making no eye contact with his throughout.

Silence within the contours of the elevator was only amplifying. Raghav knew he had to get to her , but what was he going to say to her then ... He was clueless. What would he say ? I have planned onto doing somethin with ur brother which u won't like , now I don't feel like doing it ...help me undo it all ? As if that would work ...

But he knew he had to start somewhere before it gets late, so he initiated - "Kalp..."

"What-are-you-doing-here ?" were the words that cut his statement & the silence around like a venomous dagger would lance through the enemy's chest. So long the eyes that made no contact were now penetrating through his like that off a tigress'.

"What do you want now ? Prem is literally on his death bed & you still have the guts to come here ? Ab kya usse maar ke hi saas loge ?"

Raghav was stunned for a moment. He'd never witnessed her react this way before ...the day since he had stepped in her life , he had made it a point to make it as miserable as possible...she would get angry , she would be irritated & fearlessly express the same as well...but never somethin like this ! This time she looked - BROKEN...not the bechaari , damsel in distress broken ...instead the fierce & rebellious broken ! The only word that would define her perfectly was 'dangerous', so much so that even Raghav was rendered blank & even more wordless than he already was.

It was only when the elevator doors opened followed by the ping that broke his trance than he noticed Kalpana walk past him. Once outside he saw her stop, then turned around slightly "Go away ...go away from this place Mr Singhaniya " this time her voice seemed choked yet clearly audible - unlike the words that followed "Go away from my life !"

With that being said he saw her walk , rather run in the opposite direction while rubbing her cheeks with the back of her hands. He didn't know what & how but something was aching in his chest. But he'd always claimed to be heartless, how was that possible ?

Seeing her farthen with every passing second, he shut his eyes 'He had to tell her ' & opened them again - this time feeling a tat bit more determined as he started speaking

"My company every year carries out numerous photoshoots so that the pictures can be printed on our year manuals & calendars we distribute in the market for promotions. This year the theme for our manuals & other stuff is India - for which numerous photographers have been hired. One such photographer we have hired is also going to Kashmir who leaves tonight & has a flight for the same in ...like an hour ... - "

The simpler part of the narration was done , he only was raising his voice so it could be heard by Kalpana who was still running in the long alway of the hospital in the opposite direction. Mentally preparing himself for the difficult chunk he opened his mouth to speak.

He gulped.

"He has to be stopped Kalpana. And for some reasons it isn't in my hands to stop him & that's why I'm here. Its only you who can now stop him ,for that photographer is your brother - ROHISH Kalpana "

He had finally said it , yes he had ! Licking his now dry lips he waited for her to react. What would she do ? Maybe she would come back to him, question him why did he do it all , yell at him , curse him to death or at the least tell him the kind of ogre he was.

A second passed by & then a few more but nothing of that sorts happened.

There was absolute Silence. The thickest version of it.

(Note -: For the ones who have forgotten , re-read 4th shot - The Sister where Kalpana for some mysterious reason was highly against Rohish going to Kashmir which was overheard by Raghav then. Raghav himself doesn't know why does kalpi have a problem with Rohish going to Kashmir, but just because he had seen her bein greatly affected by it , he planned this entire thing which is - as ull can see now backfiring !)

Her back was facing him , so he couldn't even see her expression changes to gauge what was in her mind like he always did. Worried, he took a few hasty steps towards her but stopped advancing when suddenly he noticed some movement on her part. Her upper body shuddered slightly as if she had just breathed out , hands quickly wiped somethin off her cheeks & in one swift turn to the left she bolted down the stairs with a lightening speed.

"Kalpana" he called out & quickly raced upto the dimly lit stairway in order to catch up with her. Once there all he came across was emptiness for she was gone. Running a hand through his hair he hopped a few stairs down in the darkness & sat on one of the steps ,bewildered. Bloody what had he done ? Did he make the correct decision by telling her all of it ? Or should he have tried more on his part to stop her brother...but time constraints !! Why did he have to drag her brother & Prem in all of it in the first place ? His guilt was now at its zenithy zenith, especially after seeing Kalpana's state as flashes of her literally haunted every single sense of his . Nothing seemed important now...neither the baseless revenge & nor proving Sammy wrong. The only thing that mattered was her ...the regular her who would fight against all the troubles that came her way single-handedly (remember he had read her diary ? So he does know that she had faced many hardships in her life) , not this broken kalpi.

Something clicked as he determinedly got off the step he was sitting on "i know i myself am the trouble maker & the reason behind all of it but i promise you kalpana , this time you arent alone !"

Thinking he might still catch up with her if he used the elevator he retreated immediately. Its time to fix things.


"Nobody looks good in their darkest hour. But its those hours that make us what we are"

- Karen Marie Morning, Faefever.


Halt halt halt ! Raghav pov bas ho gaya ab. Woh har angle se bhondu hi lagta hai mujhe. Iske baad toh it has to be Kalpu's POV. The next shot would finally wind up this part of the drama before I finally strt paving a way for hardcore ragna. 😳

MARUSHKAA

Edited by maarushkaa - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Like on post is for the fact that you are updating in today! 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Both upd were superb
Hmm so Mr. Raghav Singhaniya already feeling guilty abt his deeds n sammy added more wen he told rags abt prem psychological condion
M curious to knw wat happened dat rags bcam so heartless n emotionless
So finally aftr a long debate on lonely road (wit company of Street dogs😉😆 ) d almighty khadoos singhaniya realised his mistake...but itna bada ego hai to sorry kaise bole
Omg rags has planned to hurt rohish too😡...n now his conscious dnt allowed him to hurt her more n went to meet kalpi to get help ...hope she listen to him n he will b able to save rohish before it's too late

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update!!..loved it.
Thanx for update...waiting for next part

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