16th Shot - Had he finally left ? Pg 130 30/10/16 - Page 68

Originally posted by: ban18

I want a long update.

Originally posted by: zindgidilse

inteha ho gayi intazaar ki

aayi na kuch khabar meri marsh ki.

yeh mujhe hai yakeen

bigar update vo nai

phir wajah kya

intazaar ki 😆

😆 😆

Originally posted by: mariee

6th 7th saath mein ... That will avail ull to see the changes in Raghav

So ab sirf intezaaarrr😉😉

chalega
intezaar ka fal mitha hota he 😉

Originally posted by: vyshuu..

Heyyaa mariee!
Such a short update..? As I expected it be a longg one..
But its ok.. update was too good one! I loved d way u r pkayng with the words.. 😉 lyk im reading sum diffrnt version of ur writng style 😆
So he is back..?😲 but wat made him cum back..? 😲 maybe to take badla on kalpi or gauri's rant or prem's pleadng.. but still! Ohhh poor kalpi have to handle this khadoos raghav and her nikamma brother!😆😛
And yes! Frst remove the thought dat "should I continue the story n all" 😡 dare if u say dat again.. 🥺

Originally posted by: ban18

Ladki revital kha liya kya tune?😛

RES 😉

Originally posted by: ban18

Thik wase hi tune ek analgesic ko health supplement me badal diya

Irshaad irshaad😛

Thik wase hi tune ek analgesic ko health supplement me badal diya

Jase maine ek kaam wali bai ko bombshell me badal diya😆

Jokes apart, yaar please teach me something or give me some tips on how to write as beautifully as you do. Whenever i read ur nd othets update i feel myself as a very tuccha kinda writer

Writing a story is seriously not my cup of tea or not my forte.😕

res
unres😛

awsome update maaru 😳

its sad to see kalpi is sadd for her brother, but y she cancel his ticket? there must be strong reason or there is fear of lossing her only family her beloved brother 😕 though rohish is sleeping still he can feel kalpi's sorry and love for him and got relax, amazing bro-sis scene 😊

at 1 pm he raghav came to kalpi saying he is not sleepy,I was like you expecting kalpi sing lullaby for you or she supposed to pat your head untill you sleep 😲

and here the great Raghav Sighania is in mood of night walk, is he man or owl 😆 and to worsen the situation here start Maaru's special baarish 😆

lol lol maaru added one more lip exercise for Raghav 🤣
long pause 😲 maaru thoda wait kar lo iss long pause ke liye, 😳 fir toh just...(long puase)

kalpi is smart na, she knew very well raghav will never give her only umbrell for shedding herself and here he go, ordering her use it for him shedding from rain drop, how mean😡😡😡😡😡 heartless monster, if she got ill r u taking care of her 😡😡😡 and he is making her do marathon in mumbai's street at 1 am, he is such a monster 😡😡

what kind of revenge this heartless monster is taking from this angel 😭😭😭😭

whoa this is amazing rain with night walk at 4 am having goons around with drunk and weapons and lastly in all that the mighty raghav sighania is helping them by pushing kalpana on their side 😆😆
and here start filmfare award winning frama 🤣 daayan, don, serial killer and lastly hs phone also buzz on time to making their drama realistic 😆

so raghav was exeperience in this drama with sammy thats why he easily handle but kalpi again she proves she is smart than raghav 😳😳

superb update ⭐️
start with sadness while end with rofl and lastly silence, fabulous maaru 👏👏

Originally posted by: mariee

Haahahaha...kaam wali bai ko bombshell ...wah wah !! Lol...

And usse bhi bada joke were the lines u wrote afterwards. U being a tuch writer ...isse bada joke Maine aaj tak nahi suna...

Tere shots padhke I used to be like "Baap update Hai boss !!" ...& I use this word only when I seriously seriously like something. Ainvayi thodi Maine tere saari stories 1 go mein padhi ..badi aayi not my cup of tea wali. Toh itne saare chai piya uska kya (OK , I know it sounds ajeeb in Hindi , par bhaavnaayein samjho)

Toh I say faltu ke naatak band kar & likh basanti likh 😆😆

Originally posted by: ban18

Lol!! That is why i earned so many likes 😛😆

Originally posted by: mariee

Toh iska matlab main kya samjhu ?? Does it mean u r writing ur 6th story ??