An OS : Yes I Do !! (R POV 3) 9/12 - Pg 19 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: mariee


baat toh sahi hai ...i write something & usme ragna na ho ..ye toh ho nahi sakta 😆
kalpi ne bhi toh usko 6 months tadpaya ...(oopsies ...did u read the edited part !! i edited it later when i thought something was missing ..so sorry, my mistake !🤢🤢)
"n of course if Marushkaa creates Raghav Singhania then by default he has to be unique"
hahahaha(proud wala laughter) itnaaa bharosa ?? Kya baat hai ...😆😆😉


Yap i read edited part after this comment in fact read it all once again n
must say i fell in love with it all over again😆

bharosa tho hai after all we are all crazy fans of THE RAGHAV SINGHANIA so it make quiet obvious to understand each other atleast i think so

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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
Wow...it was such a beautiful OS!!! 👏So talented you are, typing it and expressing it all so fantastically on phone! Loved it to the core. "Yes I Do". 😃 Loved Kalpi's Spa time and shining herself. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
Mariee Darling!! i know i'm late, but today i have taken out time to read & reply for all pending FF's & your OS.

Did you check your lappy and phone properly, may be we will have many OS or may be you might have not posted thinking them of scrap, but... will be a treat for us reading Ragna.

Coming to the OS, you made Kalpi arrange all the things for her own proposal!! Raghav gave her so many hints even then she did not know that the proposal is for her, dumb girl she did not think Raghav would ever love her!!

Nice OS!! Thoroughly check your phone & lappy again, you will find many like this!!And...and don't forget to post it here..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: chahat4u

Wow...it was such a beautiful OS!!! 👏So talented you are, typing it and expressing it all so fantastically on phone! Loved it to the core. "Yes I Do".😃Loved Kalpi's Spa time and shining herself.😃


Thank u so much charu ...
Super duper happy dat u liked it

MARUSHKAA
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: hathway

Mariee Darling!! i know i'm late, but today i have taken out time to read & reply for all pending FF's & your OS.

Did you check your lappy and phone properly, may be we will have many OS or may be you might have not posted thinking them of scrap, but... will be a treat for us reading Ragna.

Coming to the OS, you made Kalpi arrange all the things for her own proposal!! Raghav gave her so many hints even then she did not know that the proposal is for her, dumb girl she did not think Raghav would ever love her!!

Nice OS!! Thoroughly check your phone & lappy again, you will find many like this!!And...and don't forget to post it here..


Hahaah ...now dat u have told me I wud definitely make it a point to check my phone carefully ...lol.
Hopefully I wud find more ... 😆
Glad to know dat u liked the os ... 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
haila hw i missed this cutest os😲
chalo koi ni der se hi sahi bt read to kiya😉
maaru🤗 amazing os
superb duper proposal, ekdum marushka style. 😃
ye to pehli baar hua, ladkine apne khud k proposal k liye, room decorate kar di😆 aur ye sirf maaru hi kr sakti he.

Aww poor kalpi, i ws just praying, she didnt get heart attack by watching dis heart breaking scenes😊. Raghav played realy smart, bt thank god upto proposal kalpi doesnt run away😆

the most beautiful no no most spicy n dramatic proposal i evr read, its fabulous. I love it. Specialy dis line "I think i have had
enough of apartment sharing with
Sammy ...i need some more spice in
life u see !!" 😳

Yes i do love ur os maaru❤️ Superb written
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
As usual chakuli ur priyeee is late lateef in reading ur updates!!!!
But wow!!! Beautiful OS I must say! And what torture!!! LOL

And and and...did u or did I misunderstand like Kalpi!!!!????

(K ...now this is specially for my beloved priyeee😆😆😆)
Her tiny fingers clasped the front of his bow-tie as she pulled his face towards hers. Then getting her lips close to his she slightly brushed them against his
K :Yes ...I Do !!

for meee????😃

☺️ Awww how sweeet!

And if that was not supposed to be me then dont say it!!! I like it this way!!!!

My chakuli is just awesome!!!! Now reading your new ff turning tables and I am sure I am gonna love it too!!!! Actually already loving it!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Sh0Nali

haila hw i missed this cutest os😲
chalo koi ni der se hi sahi bt read to kiya😉
maaru🤗 amazing os
superb duper proposal, ekdum marushka style. 😃
ye to pehli baar hua, ladkine apne khud k proposal k liye, room decorate kar di😆 aur ye sirf maaru hi kr sakti he.

Aww poor kalpi, i ws just praying, she didnt get heart attack by watching dis heart breaking scenes😊. Raghav played realy smart, bt thank god upto proposal kalpi doesnt run away😆

the most beautiful no no most spicy n dramatic proposal i evr read, its fabulous. I love it. Specialy dis line "I think i have had
enough of apartment sharing with
Sammy ...i need some more spice in
life u see !!" 😳

Yes i do love ur os maaru❤️ Superb written

tysm sho ...maaru kuch bhi kar sakti hai jaaannniii...😆😆
very very glad dat u liked d os 😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: priya_remix

As usual chakuli ur priyeee is late lateef in reading ur updates!!!!

But wow!!! Beautiful OS I must say! And what torture!!! LOL

And and and...did u or did I misunderstand like Kalpi!!!!????

(K ...now this is specially for my beloved priyeee😆😆😆)
Her tiny fingers clasped the front of his bow-tie as she pulled his face towards hers. Then getting her lips close to his she slightly brushed them against his
K :Yes ...I Do !!

for meee????😃

☺️ Awww how sweeet!

And if that was not supposed to be me then dont say it!!! I like it this way!!!!

My chakuli is just awesome!!!! Now reading your new ff turning tables and I am sure I am gonna love it too!!!! Actually already loving it!!!!


aur tuuu ...kitna jaldi dekha na tune mera os😡😡
& that last wala part was for u ofcrs ...main kisi aur ko priyeee bulati nahi 😉😉
put in dat part ...coz i remember u wanted to see such a scene in RRVSMI ...but it somehow wasn't fitting in well ...
so socha ...aakhir priyeee ne demand rakhi hai ...complete kaise na karu 😉😉 Phir kya add kar diya wo part end mein 😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Ok i know poll mein coincidences has won (against my expectations )...ull wud soon get its update😃 The reason for me delaying it is ..i kindaa myself have forgotten the story so i wud have to go thru it b4 restarting ...& all of it is full on planned on the 15th when my mom wud be busy gossiping with my maasi during the travel 😆😆 As of now take this R POV of Yes I Do as a compensation !😉😉
Note -: While going through d os i actually noticed that while trying to maintain a suspense, Raghav & his POVs have been totally neglected ..so here goes it ...An OS : Yes I Do !! from Raghav's perspective 😃😃 Have kept it short due to time restrictions ...actually speaking jab tak mujhe neend nahi aati this part will go on 😆😆 & this 1s for Di who was asking updates even during our exams ..I did my bit ...have u ??😆😆

Yes I Do !! R POV (1)


Raghav was highly worried as he paced to & fro in his living room. He was listening to Sammy & his stupid plan of making kalpi realize his extreme importance in her life. Raghav & Sammy had successfully figured out Kalpana's budding emotions for Raghav. Raghav was more than happy to know that ...but he also knew what was stopping her from accepting those feelings...those were the social & financial differences taht sustained b/w them. Thats when Sammy had suggested Raghav to push Kalpana towards her acceptance in a way which wud force her to think beyond the socio-economic factors & solely think about the thing that mattered the most ...LOVE ...their LOVE !!
Sighing a bit, Raghav glanced at the nearby wall clock. She was late !! Hoping that their plan doesn't backfire, Raghav got his phone from his pocket to dial her no. No sooner had he done that his door bell rang "Ting Tong !" Quickly rushing to the door, he opened it. He was more than overjoyed to see Kalpana there as he unknowingly gave his broadest smile. Experiencing a sense of relief on seeing her in front of his eyes & the fact that she had't caused any harm to herself might have been the reason behind that beam which adored his face ! She questioned something to him ...but had he heard it ?? Naaa ... He wanted to get her in the secure premises of his house asap.
But b4 he cud do so she had already left for some XYZ reason(glance thru the part on pg 1 if ull have forgotten d story😃) A worried Raghav waited for her to return. Though Raghav knew Kalpana wud never do anything foolish ...but she was too important for him ...so much so that the ever-confident Raghav Singhaniya doubted his own intution-cum-knowledge.
Heaving a sigh of relief when he saw her come back with a beautiful white carnations all around. She looked no less than an ethereal angel walking towards him amongst those garden-fresh white petals. His self-control was gonna be highly tested today was the first thought that struck his mind ! Immediately pulling her inside, Raghav took her to the room where he had planned to propose 'MAYA' as he himself chuckled on those words. Then torchering Kalpi with a set of scarring words he observed minutest of her facial changes ..indeed Sammy was right ! She was getting severely hurt ..How he wished to stop all that game there & then on seeing those moist eyes which were trying their best to inhibit the tears from letting loose. Unable to see her in pain he smartly excused himself under the veil of his playful words.
The moment he was out of the room he called Sammy. The moment he had answered
R : Sammy ..I cant do this any longer ! I ..I ...am hurting her! I am going inside & telling her the truth right now.
S : NO Raghav...If u want her by ur side for ur entire lifetime u will have to be strong. & i promise ...by the end of this day she wud be in ur arms willingly after conquering her inhibitions.
What else cud Raghav do other than nodding as he walked to his room afetr disconnecting the call. Sitting on the bed with a thud he mentally apologised to Kalpi. In order to distract himself from his negative thoughts he headed to his cupboard. Then withdrawing a huge handbag bearing the name 'Valentino' he dropped its neatly packed contents on the bed. Getting rid of the multiple packings he finally got hold of the custom-made gown. The last time he had been to Italy his eyes had fell on this particular gown...though he had liked it ,but he felt something was missing. Thats when he had gone ahead & decided to customize a gown by his ownself. Silently chuckling as he remembered the time when he had done that ...it was almost 8 months ago...when he felt that there wud nothing be anything else than hatred b/w him & Kalpi. Then why was his mind obliviously imagining her in that gown all the time he was making it for an unknown person ? He had an answer to that Q today.
Then neatly folding it he got another paper bag from his closet as he slid the gown in it. He very well knew that Kalpi wud never accept a gift from him ...especially if she gets to know about its cost. He didn't wanna hide things from her ,but his strong urge to see her in that piece of delicate fabric on their special day made him overcome the slight tinch of guilt within him. Then rushing back to the room he handed the packet to her under the pretext of some crappy stuff which he himself didn't wanna remember ever. Then nudging her outside the house he redialed Sammy's no. as he requested him to get something ...that something which was fav to kalpi & without which their confession wud be incomplete. Those were marigold flowers...
The moment Sammy arrived he took charge of the entire room as he ordered Raghav to get ready.
S : U shud go get ready Raghav ! Warna u wud seem like a pauper in front of Kalpi today.
R : That toh i always am Sammy ...afterall she is the only wealth i possess.
S : Oh Romeo !! U don't possess her yet ...now go get ready before I get to hear another loverboy dialogue from u.
After making some changes in the room which wud suit Kalpi's taste he thought of checking Raghav. The moment Sammy entered he was higly astonished to see Raghav's suits scrambled all around the room with he toggling amongst the 1s in his hand.
S POV : Ishq ka fever asar dikha raha hai !!😉😉
Then walking towards him Sammy finally helped Raghav settle own on a dark black tuxedo. Raghav might have stood for complete 45 minutes in front of the mirror in order to decide whether he was looking good or not. Finally bugged up with his lovestricken friend's constant Qs Sammy put around a bow round his neck as he purposely tightened its buckle ...clearly giving an indication to Raghav to quieten. That's when Raghav realized the way he was behaving since a few minutes as a flush of embarrassment spread across his face. Sammy decided to tease him a bit as he turned Raghav so as to face him. Then brushing a finger across the lower boundary of his eye he forwarded it in the direction of his neck
S : Kissi ki nazar na lage !!
R : Sammyyy...
His words were cut short when he heard his phone buzz. It was a phone call from the spa ...


Ok guys ... I am sleepy now !! Gn ... shall continue soon provided ull like it 😃😃 Sooo...what says shud i continue & move on towards the commencement or leave it here itself as the story seems to be a repeat ??
Edited by mariee - 10 years ago

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