New Ragna os:Maine thumse hi pyar kiya part 59 updated on page 152

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charvi3

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Posted: 10 years ago

#711

Update next part dear...waiting for the update

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charvi3

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Posted: 10 years ago

#712

Happy makar sankranti dear😊

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kark12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#713

part 50:

raghav tok her in arm and make her to sleep on bed.. with a smriking smile on face he comes near her places his hand in her hair..

kalpi:raghav. ..

raghav places his finger on her lips stopping her to say furtur.

raghav:ab aur nahi kalpi..bas katham huva inthazar..

kalpi got shy and turn her face other side..when she turn raghav smikes and places a kiss on her cheek and made her face to turn with his hand making her to see his face. .

raghav:I love y kalpi.. and he started to kiss her everywhere on face neck n all.kalpi was becoming like melt by his touch she holds his shirt on chest tightly..

after finishing kiss on her face raghav sees in her eyes the need for him was clearly visible for him.

raghav:kalpi thank u so much...

kalpi"; y..

raghav:for comming in my life..

kalpi:no raghav thank u so much for comming in my life when I was alone..

raghav places a kiss on her forehead. .

raghav become more naughty now he holds the pallow of her saree on her sholder n tries to remove it.kalpi eyes widened she holds his shirt tightly .. raghav slowly slids the pallow from her sholder kalpi was enjoying this unknowing she opened the button of his shirts fully..

raghav:ur too beautiful kalpi.. kalpi blushes she feels shy to be infront of him like that even though she waited for this for a long time n she knows only he is having the rights to see her like that..

he was about to place his face on her neck kalpi slides from there and got up from bed..

raghav:kalpi u cant defeat me in this n he holds the end of pallow n grabs that fully now she stood a little way from him blushingly..

raghav got up n came near her hugs her from behind putting both his hands on her waist as she already removed his shirt buttons his bare chest touching her back n he holds her waist tightly by this she feels a current passing through her body she moans "ra rag ha"..

raghav like this moaning he brings his face near her ears making hair on otherside with his face only.. as he has littl hairs on his face I while doing this kalpi says "ouchhh:".

raghav :kya huva kalpi dard huva... ek min mai abhi use dur kartha hoo..

kalpu:ha..

raghav now started to place kiss om her bare back.. kalpi melts by his lips touching her back.. kalpi holds his hands which r on her waist tightly. ..

kalpi:raghav. ..

raggav brings his face near her ear n bite her eaar loab this was enough for kalpi she turned suddenly n srarted to kiss himm after 10 min kalpi sees in his eyes..raghav got wt she mean..he took again in her arms n this time made her to sleep on bed n he to ...

guys furture u can imagin k.?????? for this much only I read others ff n tried something. .I knw its nt good but then also tell me how much u like means give poings out of 10 k I will be waiting. .

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kark12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#714

Guys I asked u to give feedback

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Saumya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#715

😳 dear its hot.. Thnx idher north india mei bahut thand hai... Kuch hot to banta tha 😉 nd dear it was fab... Mei to ek kiss ke bare mei bhi nahi likh pati... Aur in any case likh liya to khud ko super hit writer samjhungi.. 😃 wese iske aage kya hua hoga i'll imagine 😳

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MagicalMadness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#716

Well ms ishaani I give u 13 out of ten if u had gone all the way I would have given u 50 out of 10 and who said ur an amateur u have written this romantic part beautifully. 😉 Lekin update length kay liye I give u a 2 out of 10 u always give chotu update. but waiting for next update eagerly as always 😛 🤗

Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago

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sweet1308

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Posted: 10 years ago

#717

Fab update awe ragna is in full mode n so sweet kalpi feeling shy

Really lovely

Update soon

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kark12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#718

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari
😳 dear its hot.. Thnx idher north india mei bahut thand hai... Kuch hot to banta tha 😉 nd dear it was fab... Mei to ek kiss ke bare mei bhi nahi likh pati... Aur in any case likh liya to khud ko super hit writer samjhungi.. 😃 wese iske aage kya hua hoga i'll imagine 😳

preetu thum bhi na kuch bhi... chalo theek hai..aise sirf north me me nahi south me bhi bahooth thand hai ...

Chalo sweetu ab sach sach bolde kithna points doge out off 10...

Aise achalaga ki aaj thum first comment ki ..

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kark12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#719

Originally posted by: sunyy
Well ms ishaani I give u 13 out of ten if u had gone all the way I would have given u 50 out of 10 and who said ur an amateur u have written this romantic part beautifully. 😉 Lekin update length kay liye I give u a 2 out of 10 u always give chotu update. but waiting for next update eagerly as always 😛 🤗

thank u so much sunny... I am updating next part of other ff today if got time ill update next part of this today r else u have to wait till tmrw..