Ragna new ff - Dill Mill Gaye [ch-21(C)on pg 144] on 18/10

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jiya

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari
nice update Jiyu.. Plz don't seprate RagNa after reveling Kalpi's truth.. Waiting for nxt chappy.. Update plzz

Thanks bricka and what if ragna got seprated before the kalpi's truth come out and will update next chappy soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari
Jiyu plzz update nxt chappy dear.. Waiting..

Will update next chappy soon dear

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jiya

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: ReezaFathi
excellent...👏

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jiya

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: riaka
I hope kalpi tells Raghav about her real identity soon.
don't want them apart. Lovely update dear

Thanks ria and will kalpi tell raghav about her identity or not only time will tell and may be ragna can get seperate

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Posted: 10 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: rani214

Hi jiya...hope u had a blast n enjoyed ur b'day 😃
Nice update
Loved how rags decorated office n celebrated kalpi's b'day😳
Kalpi is afraid to tell rags truth coz she dnt want him to hate her or leave her...n now he is determined to find it on his own...curious to knw how he will react wen he finds out
Cont soon

Yeah dear I have a blast on my birthday and thanks rani and even I too love writing that office wala scene and yeah kalpi is afarid to tell the truth to raghav because she doesnt want to loose raghav and yeah now raghav is determind to find out the truth by his own way and will continue soon

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jiya

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Thank you everyone for your wonderful comments and feedbacks

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jiya

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Chapter-10 Next ten days raghav tried a lot to find about the matter which was kalpi talking about through his own ways but unfortunately he didnt find anything so he thinks that their is nothing and he must be over thinking and in these ten days he doesnt talk properly with kalpi nor spends a time with her which makes kalpi very upset so to cheer her he takes her to restaurant of her choice for a dinner and their both of them spend their equality time with each other with chatting,dancing etc which makes kalpi believe to be cloud9 then while in their way back to home kalpi tells raghav that kamla maa had shown their kundil to priest and also had talked to him about our marriage and priest told them that day after tomorrow is a very auspicious day so she told me to ask you and your family and even she will herself ask them that can we do a ring ceremony day after tomorrow,if it is ok with you and your family to which raghav reply that I no problem with this but I need to ask my family also to which kalpi reply ok ask them and after asking them do tell me their decision to which like a obedient child raghav nods his head and say ok then when they reached the chawl raghav bides her bye and tries to kiss her but she push him away and run inside the chawl and raghav smiling goes from and kamla and vitthal who were watching all these from upstairs feels happy for kalpi and prays to bappa that always keep her happy and kalpi who saw them runs towards them and hug them tightly and say today I am very happy aai,baba and after hearing aai,baba they both feels that they were seventh heaven as it is the first time when kalpi called them aai,baba and today in kalpi they both got a sweet and cute daughter after that everyone was about to sleep kamla told kalpi that today I will make you sleep as dont know after her marriage when they will get a time like this which brings tears in everyone's eyes but kalpi controlled her tears and say none of you will cry in my marriage to which pakya reply yeah we should we happy as after she left the house I would get the whole bed and her cupboard also and moreover I will get aai,baba undivided attention to which kalpi reply dada dont dream too much as your dreams will never get fulfilled and soon a pillow fight starts between kalpi and pakhya and on tge other hand kamla and vitthal gets very happy after seeing their childerns happy and smiling faces after that kamla puts kalpi's head on her lap and sings a lovely lullaby for her and after hearing a lullaby within a minute or two kalpi falls asleep and kamla cares her face abd hairs then she kiss her on her forhead after that she too falls asleep. next morning kalpi wakes up from raghav's call and raghav tell her that his parents had agreed for ring ceremony day after tomorrow and after listing kalpi start screaming and jumping in happiness and kalma telling her to calm down wheras on phone raghav was listing all these which brings a smile and as soon as kalpi told to kamla that raghav's parents agreed kamla and others starts doing arrangement for the function whereas kalpi called her parents and informs them about her ring ceremony which is day after tomorrow and told them to be on time but her dad told her that they cant come as day after tomorrow they had a very important meeting in their office but kalpi ordered them to come on time by hook or by crook and told them that she wants her parents besides her on her special day otherwise she would cancel the function to which her father reply no need to cancel the function and they will their on time which brings a smile on her face and after doing a lots of chit chat with her parents kalpi cuts call then she goes out for a shopping with raghav family and in the mall whichever dress gauri selects for kalpi,she checks that dress in front of mirror and raghav kept on rejecting that dresses by showing his hand then finally he selects a dress for her and kalpi tells gauri that she wants to buy that dress so gauri buys that dress only after that both the family starts doing others arrangements like give invitation to their relatives,booked hotel,Carters,DJ for the function whereas on other kalpi and raghav tried a lot to meet each other secretly as their parents had resisted them to meet each other till marriage but fails so at night before their engagement raghav secretly comes to the chawl and straightly goes to the terrace and their he called kalpi and tells her come and meet him but kalpi denies so raghav told her that he was at chawl's terrace and she wont come to terrace he will come down to meet her to which kalpi reply no please dont come down and wait I am coming on terrace to which raghav said ok I waiting for you so come fast after that they cut the call and after that kalpi somehow manages to come out from her home then she fastly goes towards terrace and after seeing raghav she just run towards him and hugs him tightly as she was seeing him and feeling him for the last time and raghav too respond the hug after that both of them spend their some quality time together at terrace and soon they both fell asleep in each others arms at terrace only without knowing that pakhya is watching them from afar and getting happy seeing her sister happiness...