Falling in Love With The BADBOY!! (New FF)-Part4 Updated page-18 28/10 - Page 14

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Posted: 10 years ago
How I love your writing style and how I am loving this story!! Too much. great going. Raghav-Kalpi; and Raghav's gang-Kalpi seem to have formed too comfy and good a bond for only one day. On top of that Raghav is her neighbour and I am loving it. BTW I loved that sexy looking Raghav.😳 😃 brilliant update. 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nyc update
Plz update soo
Rags is awesome
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Posted: 10 years ago
Heyy Neha I am completely in love with this FF of yours. Especially coz the way you write it makes it stand out different from others.

A girl should always memorize four phone numbers.

- Your own
- Your mum's
- Your best friend's (in my case it's Vihaan's)
- And finally, Dominos

Lol 😆

And the one liner was awesome

l'm hungry."
"l'm Raghav."

I was laughing badly when Kalpi was getting scared while watching the film and got scared when the door bell rang immediately after the door bell scene and Kalpi was afraid of opening the door and who came Delivery Boy 🤣

All in all hilarious update 😆

Am eagerly waiting for next. Update soon dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely n wonderful update👏👏😃
Really hillarious..
Luvd it to da core..
Plz update soon dear...I will be waiting eagerly pleaseee
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Posted: 10 years ago
Neha, brilliant update darling! I'm so much in love with this ff of yours. The way you write, especially from Kalpi's point of view makes it all the more adorable. Awesome it is!!! I already know you are a talented writer as I always used to say when you were writing ' your love is my life', again one of my favourites. This story is so fresh and Kalpi is fun, bubbly and most importantly not someone who needs to always live up to her mother's expectations. That appeals a lot to me plus no Pakhi in her mom's life.
So, Kalpi had fun with the boys in detention room. She's really had a nice rapport with Samrat. Loved how he called her ' little K'. Raghav is sure that she won't tell about them to principal. Hmm. ... interesting! Her thinking Raghav is stalking her was hilarious. Sexy delinquent. ... hmm. ... that he is! LOL means lots of love ... lol.

Reading about Oscar, made me remember my german shepherd . I too got him when I was 13 years old. He left us a few years ago. He used to kneel beside me and I used to pat him on his head. Gosh, I miss him.

Sexy Raghav in a towel!!!!! Temperatures are soaring high! He knew she was checking him out. Loved how she makes herself at home in his place and orders food too. Yeah, definitely should know domino 's number. It's priority. ..lol. He knows she's the relationship advice expert. What else he knows about her? He guessed correctly that a man is behind her expertise.

You have left us hanging there... ' No one knew about Prem Kapoor'. What a way to end it! So sad you are not going to update immediately. But it's ok. Your priorities should be studies now. Glad to hear you are going to update the other ff too.

Love you my dearest buddy. Take care. Have a safe trip back 🤗❤️
Edited by ragna_luv - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update. Totally loved rags and kalpi spending time together.
Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dat was wonderful UD 👏 ...read two together 😆😆... Raghav doesn't seem too Bad 😛😆 just mischievous 😛 college senior 😆😆😆
Kalpi seem to have enjoyable whole day 😆😆😆 first experience of first detention 😛 & meeting her Sexy new neighbor 😛😆 who is well informed about her who for sure has gone through her diary 😆😆😆 [a bad boy in that context] 😆😆😆
But Kalpi indeed have a sexy humourous neighbor 😛😆😆 its gonna be fun ahead to see their future interactions 😛😛


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Posted: 10 years ago
heyyllooo neha..
update was good n super cool one!
kalpi kind off njyng d detention thing lol.. and ragna scenes were cute n funny.. lyk kalpi challenging raghav and he njyng by teasing kalpi n all was good! so raghav was d only one was to find d reason behind kalpi being lyk dat uh.. intrestng!
waiting to read more..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ha I also forgot to wish u for a safe n sound journey dear..
Enjoy there n please please please update soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Both parts were superb n hilarious
Detention room scene was awesome
So ragna neighbours n got along d first day was superb
M in so love wit ur style of writing n specially d way u write kalpi's POV
Pls update soon both ur ff's😊
Edited by rani214 - 10 years ago

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