Love has its strange ways- Part-34 pg 147 - Page 72

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow i just love their frndship yaar! So innocent and so pure!
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Posted: 10 years ago

The second part too was written beautifully.

So ,Raghav was a cool dude in his college days.And had a crush on Naina too.
Did she reject him or he didn't propose her at all???????????.
I had really liked that part,When Kalpi was feeling jealous ,When Raghav had told her
abt Naina.
She is so smart in catching up with the flow of the contents despite having a fragmented
memory.
She is proving in all her attempts ,that Raghav is her world and his pain should be healed
at first and the happiness to be brought back,
WAITING HOW THE CAREFREE RAGHAV HANDLES THE CAREFREE KALPI ON THE BEACH.
YOU DESERVE A MILLION CLAPS FOR THIS FF:👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow.. Nice update... Ragna feelng sumthng sumthng... Hummm... Aawww...i luv it... Finaly rags ne apne dil ki baat kalpi bol di... Aawww... Plzzz B di plzzz nxt part romantic ;););)
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update👏...thanks 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Barkha di it was really amazing update.
Raghav was so much happy when kalpana ask about her life...I think he is happy because he had realised there is someone who wanted to know about him...he share all his feeling with her...&how kalpi cheered him was nice
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update dear
Liked that Raghav revealed his past to Kalpi... N Kalpi tried to soothe his pain...
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Kalpi is simply the best
Even though she has so many questions about her past she still find time to look at Raghav closely and see the underlying pain in his eyes...
I love the way she call "Rag...hav" whenever she wanted something and she knew he may not agree lol
Kalpi asking Raghav to open his heart and share his thoughts and feelings was amazing
I love that Raghav share his past with Kalpi and she didn't push him to say what he didn't want to say
Oh uh! Someone is feeling jealous hearing Naina name ;)
Love the way Kalpi cheer Raghav up :)
Beautiful update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shoonya9

Wonderful incomplete update Barkha.

Now comming to my first comment was so late becoz I practically started following this FF after u had given nearly 24-25 chappys. It was love n revenge tht I accidentally read and then was curious for this one nd started following.
I actually like the summary with analysis of characters and situation u give at the end of choppy which clearly explains ur POV. And somehow there's something I like about ur work, what is it I will tell u wen I realize more.
BTW which is he third FF? I don't know about it.

Comming to today's incomplete chappy is like the night and the beach nd atmosphere is fuelling and witnessing the changing RAGNA relation. Both Raghav nd Kalpi raised as orphans have nurtured Only one emotion of survival till now. Kalpi had the opportunity to nurture friendship but Raghav is leading a robotic life, and suddenly the music of Kalpana enters his life in disguise nd they are enjoying small small things of life, like exexperiencing the touch of sand, sitting on bonnet enjoying Sky fully of stars, the vastness of sea and quiet yet musical midnight at beach.
my god girl where did u get the musical Ra... Ghav idea of Kalpi calling whenever she wants to ask something and he too knows it very well by now.
Both these souls hv probably missed the simple yet precious moments of childhood like playing in sand, making sandcastles, dancing on the ttunes of sea waves, enjoying tender coconut On the beach and many more. So are u going to give some more such moments in later part of chappy? ( or we need to be contented with bonnet chat?) life ahead is going to b tougher for Kalpi once she knows her truth n wud be difficult for this half humanized Raghav too to handle, so it wud be a good idea to let them hv some more innocent moments before they find their mutual feeling of love nd attraction for each other.overall though incomplete but a lovely chappy. So I have followed ur orders, and will keep following. Hope m not crossing the limits.


Firstly Shoonya you are not crossing the limits. 😊 Suggestions and feedback is always welcome. It helps me to write better.

Am glad that you have started following this ff. 😃 My third FF is 'LOVE & MYSTERY'

The analysis at the end is something that I didn't plan but just thought to put it to give gist of what I felt while writing the chappy.

The musical Ra...ghav came into my mind when I thought of carefree Kalpi who feels Raghav is her best buddy and she has every right to behave kiddishly,maturely and wierdly with him. Thats the bond they share.

The night is still on and some moments are still left to be shown.

And lastly thank you so much for following my orders. 😉 😛 😊
Edited by b.baheti - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Rakapaul

hi dear sory I don't know ur name y didn't u pm me pls pm me from next time & the story the way it is moving I 'm loving every bit of it hey r u writing any other ff or ss pls inform me if u r pls.



Hey ya I am writing two more FF's 'Love & Revenge' which is my version of EMA and other one is Love & Mystery'
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet1308

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Kalpi is really sweet show rag how t feel peace n really cute the way she say rag name ragh...havvv they already understand their unsaid language n kalpi want t know about rag
She feel jealous on hearing rag crush n also feel his pain she just want him out of pain
She knows how t make him happy feel light even if she is in darkness update soon plz plz😳



Thanks Sweet 😊 and will try to update soon may be Sunday I guess
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