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Ushoshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Asyalover
aww such a killing update

Thanks dear 😊

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Ushoshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: chahat4u
You know I really love this story. Mysterious, thrilling with a tinge of romance. Ram is becoming intriguing day by day!!! What is he in real, Ram, Raghav, or Rocky or all!!! No doubt poor Kalpana/Tina could not help but ask him about it directly. 😆 What was that past incident in Tina/Kalpana's past which brought tears in her eyes? Are both Ram and Tina's pasts inter-linked? Pakhi is returning, oh nol😆 more trouble for poor Tina in her mission. In short more than fabulous. 😃 🤗 ❤️ do update soon dear.😃 n yes, I can understand your outburst, writers do tend to feel hurt and outburst like this at times,😆 Muah, love.❤️

Thanks dear 😊

I'm glad u like it 😉

Secrets are secrets 😉 😉 all questions will be answered in due time 😉

Thanks for understanding 😳 ❤️

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Ushoshi

@_TheBlackRose_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: vyshuu..
Heyylloo dear..
Frstly I dint even knw dat u decided to discontinue the story! 😕 its wonderful story with different concept dear and im glad dat u choosed to continue it.. 😃
Update was nyc n intrestng! So her past made kalpana turn into tina.. curious abt her past nw.. 😆
And ram.. one thing is sure that he is there cuz of mission only.. bt still he seems mysterious lyk we still dunno much abt him ryt.. nw next ll be pakhi's entry.. lets see hw things ll change.. 😉

Thanks dear 😊

Past revelation would be slow, n most of it wud be revealed in a later on situation 😳

Ram will remain a mystery until later 😉

Pakhi... Just an irritating addition...

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Ushoshi

@_TheBlackRose_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: sampa79
Nice update

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Ushoshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: Kiaraah
Glad to hear that you decided to continue the story. Just give it some time and you see the response.
Ram is not Rocky? 😉 Chalo, I'm not guessing... 😆 Pakhi is coming. .. Oh god, the tantrum queen!

What is in Tina's past that brought tears to her eyes? What happened to her sister?

Loved the scene in the garden. Ram is a real player. He knows her name is Kalpana. What's his mission? Exciting story it is!

Thanks dear 😊

Questions will be answered in the updates itself, but in later ones 😉 😉

Actually, no he doesn't know any detail abt her... He's cunning, so he has accurately guessed her intentions...

For the Kapoor khandan n all, her name has been revealed as Kalpana, though the rest of the world now knows her as Tina...

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Ushoshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: rani214
Read all four chap...brilliant updates d story is interesting
So tina is kalpi n guess ram is raghav...also curious to know the connection between Ram and Rocky...or both r same
Love Tina/kalpi n ram interaction n how he gets on her nerves
Kalpi has a bad past whc had made her turn to Tina...curious to knw abt her past
Ram is way intelligent dan kalpi n is on mission n knows abt her mission too...eager to knw wat is ram's mission..
Cont soon 😃

Thanks dear 😊

All questions will be answered in the later updates 😉 😉 till then, secret 😉

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

I love this story! so intriguing. So Pakhi ki entry! n Tina/Kalpi was earlier Samaira's mentor! Interesting. Nice update, loved every bit of it.😃⭐️👏

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Nice update dear. Kalpana/ Tina met the arrogant Pakhi and almost had a tiff with her. She stopped suddenly remembering who she was in the house.

Kalpana went down the memory lane when she heard Ram calling her Kalpi. She went from there before he could see the tears in her eyes . Obviously he noticed and was concerned. He feels something for her?