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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it... wanna read it again before I say anything more πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finaly ragav met his son.cntnu soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
poor raghav ...hvnt even touched or hug his son...awesome updates...pls update soon...cant wait
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Posted: 10 years ago
Frankly I was apprehensive for this UD πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† as I was dreading Kalpana's After reaction πŸ˜› πŸ˜† at any moment when realisation will dawn upon her she might end up slapping Raghav πŸ˜›πŸ˜†πŸ˜† or with Kalpana's revelation about Ranveer...Raghav's anger wud be exploding πŸ˜† but wonder if that gonna happen considering Raghav busy romancing πŸ˜†... (we are not minding it) 😳

DejaVu for Raghav...once again his kalpi disappeared πŸ˜›πŸ˜†...guess sooner we can expect his temper Volcano to erupt πŸ˜†πŸ˜›πŸ˜›...All the best to Kalpi darling πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† & even for Raghav hope he finds his kalpi soon & easily πŸ˜†

Hoping separation doesn't last long for them & they Kiss & Make Up πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

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p.s. -- Fawad's singing 😳 "Dilbar mere" seems to be his fav song πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† sang it on Jhalak too 😳😳 "main aag dil mein laga doonga woh pal mein pinghal jaoge πŸ˜† As if any more melting is left for us πŸ€ͺ

BTW thanx for PM πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ...
Edited by -purnima- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG... Finally the revelation!! Loved the way Rags come to know about it.. Not the OTT!! The anger the convo... everything was perfect.. Mind blowing.
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Posted: 10 years ago
So awesome! U left me with my mouth open! So is kalpi going to stop him and talk to him and explain things to him? Waiting so eagerly
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Posted: 10 years ago
Read both the updates together and loved both so-so much. Last update was a surprise though. I liked the way you revealed the truth of his son to Raghav. Little scared by the ending, but I hope and know you have shown it for a good reason. I loved the dialogues and attitude of Raghav soo much in the last update and the previous one is one of my favourite parts! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³ Hope you update soon and don't kill us with the suspense till then! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
I read ur all updates in 1 go bt ignored little bit adult content...anyway!! I loved ur all updates...I m loving raghav character here alottt...till now he seems veryyy understanding nd calm,i hope he doesn't loose his coolness. ..continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ragz being silent is an indication is some storm
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG OMG OMG I mean Oh My freakkin God!!!!
What the hell??? I am such a vain!!! I was so lost in updating my ff's that I missed out on such a wonderful SS!

Ahem! Sorry! Supriya btw I am Priya! Nice to meet you! Errmmm I mean nice to read ur SS!

The story is mindblowingly wonderful and awesomely well written with such perfection that I could not but resist myself reading all at one go flipping through pages patiently searching for them!

Okay apart ftom the cliche'd "Where were all these days?" I would like to ask you to please never to stop writing! I was hooked on to it the moment I started now if that is not talent then what is it tell me?

Loved each and every update and loved the sensuous writing too! Sigh wish I could write so well!

I am a lazy bum who doesn't even bother to proof read her stories before posting them here!

But your SS looks so preofessional that mind you I almost thought you are a professional writer. You do know the knack of holding your reader's interest and where to pause and start again!

Ur SS gave me a high and I am enjoying the level of toxication effect it has had on me...if you noticed I have been blabbertyping non stop.

Waiting eagerly for the next part ! You have beautifully portrayed the emotions of Kalpi and Raghav in words and now I am dying to see Raghav's reaction to the fact that he had been kept away from his own child! Heck even the child recognised him and he had to ask his own child's name to Kalpi!

Love RagNa and love you sooo much to make me fall in love with them all over again.

Rating to ur SS: I am no one to rate you but still wanted to give ur story some stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️!

And a big fat Priya hug to you! πŸ€—

And loads of applause for every chapter! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘


Okay keep up the good work and thank you for this beautiful SS!


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