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DiVirgo

@DiVirgo

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#141

I'm smiling here! I loved this update 😃 wow!! Papa? I just love it 😃 the way you brought it out!! He have seen his fathers pics 😛 love Kalpi's expression! And my sexy?! yummy!! Love the way he questioned! Instantly he was concerned! What do we expect more from a father right?! I just love his reaction and his tone was to damn HOT!! He wanted to take control at once!! Vithal'so reaction towards him was icing on the cake! Cause sexy knew he had to leave because of his anger! And leaving without Kalpi being able to clearly explain herself and both coming to a decision is too too good! Now I really can't wait for next update!!
Cannot wait for next interaction im gonna picture Khadoos sexy;) yummy;)

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Cinderella

@Cinderella81

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Awesome update. So finally Raghav Raveer met each other. Will Raghav again come back or Kalpi will know go to Raghav? Waiting for next update.

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Foram

@foram.

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#143

thankgod I came stalking here...otherwise would have missed the update...
nice update... finally he know the truth he saw his son... what I liked most is kamla told ranveer about his father and also showed him his pics... this kamla is 1000 times good then the one which we saw in the show. .

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Shivanie Ramballie

@Shivanie05

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#144

Wonderful absolutely wonderful no more comment on this just simply amazing

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#145

I know I'm late. Sorry, had work. Hope you understand. Read both updates together. Must say, you have done a fabulous job. Kalpi wanting to tell Raghav about Ranveer but got carried away by his passionate love making. Finally when she mustered up the courage he took her to have dinner. Rags decides to talk later thinking that they will have their whole life ahead. They indulge in lovemaking again, making up for the lost time. But reality strikes her when she receives her mother's phone call telling about Ranveer's injury. At that moment she completely forgets about Raghav, her guilt as a mother riding high. She feels guilty for forgetting her son and enjoying the day by herself.

Raghav on the other hand was so shocked not to see her there. He is thinking how could she do it even after him saying that he loves her many times. He finds out her address with the help of Sammy and go there. But the sight that awaited him there shocked him to the core. Ranveer calling him 'papa' was emotional for him. . He understood everything , why she left him five years back. It's understandable that he's angry. He needs time to digest the information. He needs his answers which are affecting Kalpi. But Vithal's comments were the final straw for him. He must be feeling what Vithal told is right. She doesn't need him anymore. So he left.

Now eagerly waiting for the next update. But you are busy 😭 It's okay. We will wait. But don't forget to pm me.

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incredible96

@incredible96

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#146

WOW!!! is all i can say after reading every single update!! you r sooo good!!! would it be possible to get pms if i buddy you??????? dont want to miss out on any chappys! :D

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Chin2_n

@Chin2_n

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#147

One more update that was totally unexpected as you were cautioning of heavy work load,😉 But thanks for the surprise and it was awesome update as Ragav found Kalpis where abouts.😆

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Anjinie

@Anjinie

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#148

how do u do it, you put us on a high and just leave us hanging, loved it, I am sure Raghav is not going to sit still with the way he left Kalpi's home