CELESTIAL LOVE - New ff Chap 8 updtd on pg 27

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Priya

@priya_remix

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Posted: 10 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: AmbroseFever

I did read previous updates and me still kinda confuzzled. 😭😕

My dear Sulochana cannot pass away! It was kamla who had passed away!

Sulochana is the celestial nymph who is a courtesan in the celestial court of Lord Indra the king of Gods

Raghav was the celestial musician to whose music these courtesans performed. Raghav fell in love with Sulochana and asked help from cupid who struck his arrow on Sulochana and she became lovestruck for Raghav so much so that she forgot she is supposed to be a dancer and dance for Lord Indra. Instead she denied dancing for him inviting his wrath and fury.

It is normal for the celestial musicians and nymphs to marry but here they were cursed becsuse blinded in their love for each other they forgot their duties.

Now once Raghav got cursed Sulo prayed to God who gave her a boon saying whenever Raghav meets Sulo when she will be reborn as human he will tend to develop human feelings for her if he has truly loved her. Also he gets a choice to choose between a human life or going back to the heaven!

Samjhi????

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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

oh! ThanX Priya... this clarification was gr8. It did clear some doubts and assumptions for me.

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Priya

@priya_remix

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Posted: 10 years ago

#153

It seems nobody follows this ff and maybe I am confusing my readers.😕😔

I am not getting requests to update this ff nor am I getting comments on this one!😭

Please let me know what I can do to make this story better? Is it boring? Or the pace too slow? OR the fact that Kalpi is still young is keeping the readers away?😕😲

Edited by priya_remix - 10 years ago

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Baljodh

@Haisisterz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#154

awesome update priya!! But I don't know who this goddess indira is, Is she the goddess goddesses?? 😆 and I loved it that raghav needs to collect 10 lac skulls before converting himself into ahuman and that he must stay away from Kalpi..Butab kalpi ko kyaa ho gaya?? I hope that raghavendra will help her!! Anyways, Continue soon!

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Priya

@priya_remix

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Posted: 10 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: -HeyJude-
awesome update priya!! But I don't know who this goddess indira is, Is she the goddess goddesses?? 😆 and I loved it that raghav needs to collect 10 lac skulls before converting himself into ahuman and that he must stay away from Kalpi..Butab kalpi ko kyaa ho gaya?? I hope that raghavendra will help her!! Anyways, Continue soon!

Indra is the king of Gods!!!😉 n LOL Raghav doesn't collect skulls but collects souls!!! LOL

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sweet1308

@sweet1308

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Posted: 10 years ago

#156

Well Priya i just love this story yet if ask u t update soon u won't be able n that I can understand since u have other engagement 😭 yet I got t wait t know wat happen next s waiting impatiently till u update

Till its just superb do update soon n pm me 4 ur stories plz

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Anjinie

@Anjinie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#157

interesting, did Raghav hear Kalpi call him,wonder if he will find her

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Baljodh

@Haisisterz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Indra is the king of Gods!!!😉 n LOL Raghav doesn't collect skulls but collects souls!!! LOL

I really thought that he collected skulls OMG!! 🤣 Haha, And Oh Indra is a boy, I thought he's a girl ahah! 😆

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#159

Hi! I'm back . Sowieee, was having net connection problems through out. It kept going on and off. That's why I was late. Itne mein upset ho gayi ki nobody likes it. Kya yaar! How can it be boring! I loved it.

Samrat took Raghav to Thumburu ( haven't heard the name before) to find answer to his queries. Finally it's confirmed that Kalpi is Sulochana. She was also cursed by Lord Indra. But Lord Shiva has given her a boon. If their love is true they can unite as humans. Also Raghav is losing powers when he is near Kalpi. So he's been asked to stay away from her. But he will be able to hear her when she's in danger or pain. Now that her accident occurred he will definitely hear her.

I love the feeling... They are so much in love. Now poor Raghav has to collect 10 lac souls and then only he will be free from the curse. Can't wait for the curse to be lifted and Kalpi to grow up. Little Kalpi is so adorable but I want her to fall in love with Raghav as an adult.

Since I'm typing from my phone and net is acting weird, this is the fourth time I'm writing the comments. So the essence is lost now, I think. My first comment was so much better. I'm almost sure that this one sucks. But I don't really remember the first one word to word. Guess you will have to do with this one for now. Hope to give better comments next time. A small token of appreciation for you 👏

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#160

Aww Kalpi missing her Raghav
I like that Raghav finally got some of his questions answer
Even though he was not so happy with the answers
I love that he can feel when kalpi is in trouble
Lovely update

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