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Posted: 10 years ago
Yes!! Finally RAGNA ki shaadi hui!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update
Finally ragna marriage
Update soon next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Pureness!! I shall never comment on this, your incomplete update never again!! You are so unpredictable with this ff! You can read my other past comments on this update but now I'm commenting on completed update!!

Rags knows he's in love with Kalpi, he loves her so much that he cannot help himself! He knows she's young and have a lot to do ! Rags, although he says he knows nothing about her knows her well enough to get married to her! 😉 prem also knows rags very well! To say rags always commit and takes responsibility I think Prem is comfortable with the new marriage! And wha top it of is that prem saw both of them kissing right after the blowout LOL if prem didn't feel Kalpi love rags he wouldn't have gotten them married!! But he saw for himself! Lol and that answering back from both kalpi and rags was only love talking ;)
It only goes to show that loving someone doesn't mean you have to know them inside out! For instance rags didn't even know Kalpi's full name 😆 to funny!!
Prem only wanted them to get married ASAP because he didn't want what happened to priya happen to Kalpi 😭 now understand!! 😉 but as prem said he's sure rags will take care of Kalpi it think he reasures himself because he knows rags! And from your update I see that prem and rags spoke so rags promised tha he'll take care of Kalpi and maybe I say not to get her pregnant also was in that promise! Who knows 😃 only you pureness!! And judging from rags words he surely didnt fall in love with Kalpi becasue of her outer looks he feel in love with her! She the attraction he saw in her at first and was always there from the beginning! Surely it wasn't the way she dressed but the individual herself!! She took his heart! Loved when rags said that!! And from what I saw prem knows rags so well he warned him about hurting Kalpi and making her shead tears!! I'm sure that was one of the demand from prem to rags! Prem loves Kalpi so much he will be there for her and also to help rags along the way!!
I can see Kalpi trust Prem fully and went along with whatever prem said!!
Placing of the mangulsutra and the sindoor was scarey for Kalpi I can feel it! Loved when rags said its to late Mrs KRS sounds really nice!!
Everything happened so quickly I myself never thought you wud get them married at this stage but I see now how much they love eachother! You surely described that clearly to me 😉 now Gauri has to do some explaining!!
Pureness you really out done yourself this update!! Awesome you are! Salute!!
Edited by DiVirgo - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh Fuzz! How do you always write the most amazing things ? I simply loved your update. It's just fabulous. You never cease to amaze me... Love you sweetie!
The wedding... It happened after all! Raghav having thoughts in his mind about how to cancel the wedding though a part of him wants to make her his. Kalpi thinking she's too young to marry and wants to go away so that she doesn't have to marry. Raghav knows he loves her but surprised that how he can marry her when he knows so little about her.
Pakhi and Priya questioning Prem if he has taken the right decision. Everyone except Prem and Gauri are unsure of everything. Gauri thinks Raghav needs to be responsible for the mistake he has done and hence marry. But it's Prem who steals the limelight with his logical thinking. I'm really liking him in this. He's everything a sister can wish for. Loved how he explained to Pakhi why it's the best decision for both Raghav and Kalpi.


Prem knows Raghav will always fulfil his responsibilities and so will take good care of Kalpi. But he's yet to see the love in Raghav 's eyes for Kalpi that Priya had witnessed. He suspects Kalpi has some feelings towards Raghav , maybe because he knows she's not the girl who sleeps around with anybody.

Loved how Kalpi became a bride dressed in jeans, with chunni on her head. How Raghav teasingly said 'we are modern and she's a girl after my heart'. I think he deliberately wanted to keep it that way so that she feels comfortable and didn't want any pressure on her. Kalpi was still hesitant and, gazing at Raghav she was thinking yesterday she danced with him and today she's marrying him! Poor confused soul!

Sensing her hesitancy Raghav walked up to her, took her arms in his and brought her to the site, his smile assuring her everything is going to be ok. Both thinking about their dance the previous night in the moonlight, under the stars with ocean as the background. It was the most romantic scene in the whole update and the wedding was the just perfect. Both lost in each other, they took pheras.

When Raghav told her he didn't know her name is Kalpana, it was a shocker for her as it struck her that they don't know anything about each other. He mentally curses himself for the slip up and calls Prem for help. Loved how Kalpi was curious to know what he discussed with Prem. I think Prem has made him promise not to have sex with her till she finishes her education at least... lol. Is that why Raghav 's gaze hardens when Prem reminds him of his promise? Am I reading too much into this? Prem knows Raghav will let her grow up and will support her in her dreams. But he also know about the sexual attraction between them .

Loved the camaraderie between Kalpi and Gauri and how they kept teasing each other about the adoption. Raghav is happy to see them laughing away. I think he's happy to hear Kalpi laughing , for he holds himself responsible for all this. Can't wait to see what you have in store for them.

Sorry for the late comments dear, but was busy in Diwali preparations, puja and stuff. Forgive me please 😕 Still busy but couldn't resist the temptation to read the story 😳 Guess I was eager to know whether they got married or not.

Mwah!

Edited by ragna_luv - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mattieram

I just don't have the words to express my thoughts on the chapter. Jokingly, at home my husband and I, to express our feelings on something that is beyond amazing, we add freaking. So, this chapter was freaking amazing!!!!!!! I loved it when Raghav said to Kalpi: "kiss me back!" Oh too good, you've captured Raghav Singhania's arrogance to a T. Kalpi is mush in his hands!!!! Girl, you need to start you novel soon, I would be your first buyer and promotor.



Awe thank you hun... You have paid me a very high compliment... I am an average writer... Every time I read an update I find errors.

Your love and acceptance makes me want to believe. Hopefully I find the time to start working on a novel next year.

Mwah
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sunyy

What an update girlee! LOVED it! Rags inner voice saying yes he wants to marry kalpi surprising him? Beautifully done. Kalpis views so beautifully written. But prem stole the show and his explanation to pakhi about why he took this stand and rags standing by his commitment and letting kalpi prosper with her dreams was awesome. Angel this is the best Diwali treat ever. And as for their SR that was just a fling now u need to show the real SR the one after marriage!!!!! 😉 🤗 big big big big big bear hug and ❤️ lots of love. 😃



No SR for several chappys... Hope ur not expecting flower decorations and a bride sitting on the bed 😉
Edited by angelpureness - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mattieram

Ok, I will put myself in withdrawal mode for two weeks. I've become so addicted to your SS, I hope I make it! So I checked the date, 2 wks from today is Nov 6th, this is just as much for me as it is you. Keeping you honest (LOL). I absolutely enjoy reading your SS immensely. Enjoy your 2 wks away.😭


You won't have to wait 2 weeks... I have two hours right now before bed... Am going to work on an update... Or maybe half a update... Am beat.😊

Edit: just completed comments...mind is blank... Exhausted... I will give a last update tomorrow... Then until 6th.
Edited by angelpureness - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chahat4u

Oh... what an update it was. 😃 Ragna married, that too under the stars.😃 This must be the most different and most romantic wedding shown in any FF till now. 😃 loved the way Raghav stood up and took Kalpi with him to the group, to the altar. Arm in arm, remembering their beautiful moments. I actually loved Kalpi in jeans and Gauri's chunni to drape her to giver her a bridal look. I am still n daze of this wedding. I can't believe Kalpi didn't even try to do any other drama to get saved from marriage. 😃 I can understand their feelings, they don't know much about each other, the most shocking part Raghav didn't even knew Kalpi's full name! It seems Raghav still is on e better footing in this, and happier than Kalpi. Since Kalpi's whole life has changed and affected by this one step. Poor girl, so young and frightened to start married life all of a sudden with practically a stranger, who only knows you well in bed! Curious to know what promise Prem took, but I'll wait for two weeks. 😳 For now I am satisfied and happy with this dreamy wedding. 😃 I have to add I just loved Prem here, such an ideal cute brother he is, especially when Kalpi is not his real sister. But loved him a lot for this, acted like a responsible, protective brother, for his sister's benefit. He really knows Raghav and Kalpi so well, and he knows they'll be perfect for one another in the long run.

I can go on and on, for this update and FF. But it is after 2AM here and I have to get a clear head to write more. Maybe I may return to comment again after Bhai-Duj, that is Saturday. 😃 love you for this update and FF. 😃 🤗 ❤️ Muah.


Charu hun... Your beautiful words always make me feel so tiny... I can always sense your warmth... Love u loads... Mwah
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sunyy

So the wedding took place. Modern wedding for a modern couple. 😆 must say rags was much calmer since he got what he wanted - kalpi. 😆 the way he walked her to mandap and took pheras under the stars was so romantic. And looks like raghav is the one who is happiest and how long it takes kalpi to become truley happy with this marriage is what I m curious about. I also want to know what promise prem took from rags. But awesome update. Also still want the real SR but after the vocal I love You. So now we will see ragna getting to know eachother and I m looking forward to that.


Your wish is my command... Vocal I love u before SR... Oh gosh!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aryagr

Mmm so, RagNa got married in small ceremony. Loved the update. It was superb. I guess u ve decided to finish each of ur ff 1 by 1. Its ok for me. Eagerly waiting 4 updates of all ur ffs.


I thought I would work on two at a time... But the demand for this one and the feedback.has made me forget all other ffs.

Every chapter I update... I have only one thought... Will you readers like it... How do I keep ur excitement intact... Which is why I have no idea where the story is heading... It is fun, but a scary feeling... Coz I am always blank when I start my next update.

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