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Rakapaul

@Rakapaul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

u ar surely a writter at heart because the way u write I got instant connection with it I can vizualise it like it is happening before my eyes & I have send u a buddy request pls accept it &update soon.

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Priya

@priya_remix

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

hmmm quite captivating I must say! Loved it! Waiting for more!

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Shivanie Ramballie

@Shivanie05

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

OK I am not sure how to comment now but I'm just going to be honest I am liking the story not loving it right now but hope in the future U give me many reasons to keep glued to this FF like your previous ones ok.

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#64

thanks for the PM Raz and once again a different concept. Actually so different that I hadn't even expected it. LOL. But I am loving it, this would make the journey interesting and intriguing. Thanks for differentiating between escorts and prostitutes. I was aware of some differences. I love it that you're showing the other side of the coin, their pains and the helplessness, their dreams of still a loving man, a stable family. Also what you are showing is very-very realistic, & practical; from the point of view of two girls who are not wanted at home; and who left their home to make their own home. in search of a good life. But life is not easy for girl,s and especially for helpless, alone girls. They had to accept this profession as they had no other choice. ..

n Thanks for introducing Aira again, I have come to love this character so much. 😃

You also differentiated the love lives of Raghav and Samar Singhania (I love yo made Samar a Singhania) 😆 They already have girl friends, and they also don't seem to be going to escorts, at least right now. Then how'll they meet these two girls? I am curious to know, and loved the normal simple girl side of the two girls as well. Please do not take time to update next part, loving it so much. 😃 👏❤️

P.S.: In Love with your banner. 😃

Edited by chahat4u - 10 years ago

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Chin2_n

@Chin2_n

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Great update loved the concept👍🏼

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rani214

@rani214

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Unique n quite interesting concept

Loved d way u showed der pain n helplessness to choose der profession...live dual life... in comfort of der homes dey r kalpi n aria living a normal life n dream to have a happy ending in der life too to have sum1 to love dem n have a fly

Lik raghav n Sammy intro both having gf n lover dem a lot

Eager to knw hw raghav meets kalpi n hw der beautiful journey begins

Wonderful banner n beautiful title

Thanxs 4 pm😊

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sb1234

@sb1234

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Awesome first chapter .. Honestly I don't like the idea of Raghav and Sammy with anyone else apart from Kalpi and Aira but I am super excited to see how they end up together !!!

Looking forward to the next chapter .. please update soon :)

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Loved the beginning but do u have to have pakhi. That character leaves a bad taste in my mouth. I don't like rags with her and super hot I don't think so. But loving kalpi and aira. Interested to see how rags and kalpi meet pls update soon.

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vyshuu..

@vyshuu..

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#69

res

Unres

heyyllooo..

update was nyc n intrestng..

even though its jus a beginning I'm jus waiting fr their frst meeting bt intro s a necessary one ryt.. and u made samar a singhania dats good to hear..

waiting fr further updates..

Edited by vasishna - 10 years ago

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@smileysmile

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#70

Thanks for the PM Raz. The way you introduced Raghav and Sammy with their girlfriends, that too deeply in love with their respective GFs, I am mulling over. How will then Raghav will meet Kalpi? I know you have already thought about this. Just waiting for the next chapter. 😊

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