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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 10 years ago

#301

Originally posted by: eishe10
Great😉

thanks eishe😃

Originally posted by: lolor
nice update...
I hate kamla...she shud neven been called MAA...

thanks dear.
itna gussa ...calm down dear.
picture to abhi baki hai in next update😉

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari
beautiful update dear update nxt chappy soon

thanks tiwari ji

Originally posted by: niru04
Nice update dr.make ragna bonding more stronger

thanks niru.
ragna bonding will get stronger by time.😃

Originally posted by: sampa79
Nice update

thanks sampa

Originally posted by: Anjinie
awesome update, I really hope Kalpi teaches Paakhi a lesson never to snatch what does not belong to her,

thanks dear.
hope so.

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...
Lovely update

thanks natasha

Originally posted by: jiya007
Nice update dear

thanks jiya

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 10 years ago

#302

Originally posted by: sweet1308
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HoW can that🤢 do that she snatched the pen from kalpi n kamla that definitely not defined a mother how can she do that poor kalpi suffered from lack ofother love n really lovely how the trio celebrated kalpi birthday n backfired for prem trying t insult prem n plz do something that pakhi return that pen t kalpi
Emotional n awesome update
Update soon

thanks sweeti
kamla blind love for pakhi do this to kalpi.
glad you like trio celebrated kalpi's birthday and rem's lan backfire on himself.
no pakhi will not return this pen to kalpi some reason behind it.
glad u like the uppdate

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 10 years ago

#303

Originally posted by: sunyy
Loved the update. Hate pakhi and prem . Not a big fan of Kamla either. Loved rags and how he stood up for kalpi. Continue soon

thanks sunny
glad u like the update

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 10 years ago

#304

Originally posted by: mariee
ok zindgi ...my 1st kaam after my exams are done
read this ff of urs ...har baar kuch na kuch beech mein aa jaata hai & i am unable to either read / complete reading ur updates
Its indeed after a long tine that i'm reading ur ff ..the only ff which is focusing so much on childhood ragna ...kudos to ur patience firstly😉😉
kyunki if i were in ur place ..ekhaad chapter mein hi maine unko bada kar diya hota 😆😆

& like i said i am reading an update of ths after a long time ...i can openly claim that u have excelled a lot ...a lot lot lot lot lot lot lot lot lot lot lot lot lot lot !! Then may it be ur writing or the way in which u r presenting the story ..commendable !!👏👏
So proud of the ascending graph of ur skills zindgi ...😃😃
Continue aisehi ...
u will pakka get a chapter vise comment after the 26th ...pakka !

MARSH 😆😆

MARSH...its u na..😲 ok let me digest this comment😆 itni jyada tarif ...thanks dear😳

i will wait for ur exams to get over😉
@bold: 🤣
yes...i myself doubt on my patience 😆 to show childhood ragna to this extent and there is still on more update of their childhood.

thanks for appreciating me and my efforts😳.its only writer like u can tell that i how much i have improved in writing.😃

i will eagerly wait for ur chapter wise comment😉

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 10 years ago

#305

Originally posted by: appyK
Abhi tak padha nahi so will unres later😉
Actually tere unres ke baad unres karungi😛

then read it whenever u get ur time.😃
which unres of mine😕

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 10 years ago

#306

@ Reezafathi
@ charvi
@ brika tiwari
@ sweet 1308

i will update after 2 jan

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charvi3

@charvi3

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Posted: 10 years ago

#307

It's okkk dear but please update soon

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SUGANDHII

@suggii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: sugandhii
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shall Unres baad m😉

ok finally unress sorry to keep u waiting deary but office office n moreover my ff n ss 😆 bht kch start ho gya anyways let's start 4m d updare itself

I lyk this update n u were ryt Kamlaaa😡

I think she is not a mother even this is not d way yr I mean she not even think about kalpi once she n her paakhi baby hadh h n paakhi gosh she is dash dash dash n dash here... These two r actually useless

Ok happy birthday kalpi i lyk vithal n pakya n offcourse milK cake very nyc... n most imp what u written about kalpi's silence girl u deserve 👏👏👏 perfect kamla actually deserve her silence

n 11.55... Aww poor kalpi feeling really bad 4 her 😭 n yes pakya ka gaana😆😆 ek rasgulla deva woh kya th...😕 bt it was funny😆

Ok finally pen thing comes into d picture paakhi Hush ab mere paas gaaliyaa b nae h DENE ko bt I lyk kalpi she atleast try to deny Paakhi's wish afterall it's her APPRECIATION GIFT👏 loved it.. n prem 😡 one more namuna is here who is ready to dikaao nicha to kalpi n offcourse smjhaaoing raghav to stay away 4m this chawl girl... n then comes ssnappy raghav hmm I quite lyk him 4 this...

Ritu one more thing only a suggestion could u pls change her name befizul Ki ziddi is vry nyc bt dat factor is missing😳 lyk he tease her with this name n her anfry look... thing something apne ishtyle ka deary u r too gu d in giving names😉 just my pov no offence sorry if u feel bad really sorry... if I hurt u with this

N last d chori sequence prem😡😡😡 kutttaaa

but that's ok raghav was there for kalpi I actually felt a connection which is slowly hi sahi but it's actually visible I don't know y But I felt their connection no doubt he would have help any stranger in that situation but she is kalpi n I lyk that he stood for her..

Nyc update ritu👏⭐️

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Kiaraah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#309

Nice update Ritu. Kamala unknowingly making Kalpi insecure by showing more affection towards Pakhi. The pen incident was just another example of how much she favours Pakhi.

Birthday was such a sad day ... Whole day of her birthday , a daughter kept waiting for her mother. All she wanted was her mom's undivided love and attention. Is that too much to ask for?

However hard they tried Vithal- Pakya couldn't make Kalpi forget her sorrows. Glad that at least bappa gave her such a wonderful dad and bro.

Smart of Raghav to handle the Prem fiasco nicely. I think it was Raghav's pity for Kalpi, the girl yearning for her mother's love that made him help her. Prem though wouldn't have learned his lesson .

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 10 years ago

#310

Originally posted by: appyK
Abhi tak padha nahi so will unres later😉
Actually tere unres ke baad unres karungi😛

Finally..

As promised I'm unresing..main reason kal se no forum (this time seriously) do din mein exams and thoda revision baaki hai..

Ok mera rant khatam ab update.. the way u described Kalpi and Paakhi's relation was awesome.. Frankly I hated paakhi right from start (after that pen incident..)

Kamla kabhi nahi sudregi.. Poor Kalpi.. Glad that she atleast has Pakya and vithal with her..

Aww.. Befizuul ki ziddi.. Childhood RagNa scenes were cute in ema and are cuter and more awesome here..😳

Ok so you wrote it nicely and beautifully but I caught a RagNa fever right after watching the maths problem waala scene in actual ema.. I loved RagNa right from when they were kids ... So tu kuch bhi likhle I'll always see RagNa bonding😆.. Guess so jaldi psychiatrist ko consult karna padega but abhi ke liye mein aisi hi rehne waali hu😆Sorry..😛

So iske baad leap ya iske baad part d.. Mujhe toh kuch bhi chalega..😃

glad u fibd kalpi nd pakhi relationship description in the update awesome.

And thanks for saying that ragna childhood is cuter nd awesome here in this ff.😳

Look like so. But this ragna fever is awesome nd impossible to get its medication😉