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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: sharanya0011

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mein ne kaha tha na, jab tak tu unres nehi karege mein chap-2 likhna suru nehi karungi..now i wil start writing it😉


😲😲😲😲 maine soch tune mazak kiya...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Biting my nails off, while anxiously waiting for your update. Please continue. Interesting, to see 'sparks' flying whenever RagNa meet.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: premap

Biting my nails off, while anxiously waiting for your update. Please continue. Interesting, to see 'sparks' flying whenever RagNa meet.

pakka ragna will meet in 3rd update dear..im updating 2nd chapter now..enjy it dear😃.. hope i reach ur expectation😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guys..thank u for ur loving comments🤗which encourages me to write it😳.. please bear me again😭 and give me ur suggestions😊..

Here it is my 2nd update..Hope u like it😃


Mr.R reached his office.. RS constructions. Sammy was waiting for him, when Mr.R entered to office without his PA Sammy was shocked and as he know him very well he can understand the consequences..

Sammy: Mr.R where is your PA?😕

R: oh so he didn't reached here before me😳, so now ask him to leave the job in serious tone..

Sammy: what is this, what happen? What did u do now? By asking this both entered into Mr.R cabin.


At Mr.R cabin:

Sammy: (in worried tone )raghav stop it what im asking u and what are u doing tell me yaar, what happened im tensed now. Just spit it out 😕

R: what noting happened don't worry he came to airport late for 6 minutes and u know every minute is precious for me so I have given him punishment..that he must reach office before me by walking or running..

Sammy: Raghav do u know, what have u done...u know that now no one will give him job, how do u think he will survive ..I know that ur time is most precious but how do u expect him to come to office before u by using his legs..As I know u very well u must have drive very fast😡

R: (in serious tone) stop it Sammy u know I don't care for anyone.. I don't have any heart so stop discussion.. I have meeting so let me concentrate on it.. u to do the same..Its final now..

Sammy: I'm not interested to talk anything with Mr.R and yes my friend raghav will never like it..So I'm going to help him and that's final ..Now I don't want ur interference in it...

R: yes I knew u too, so do whatever u want k ... but I don't want him to be seen around me..So just keep it in mind and if u want transfer him to other place ..Now move and get ready for presentation, and make sure that no one disturbs me for some time..

Sammy : k [ in his mind I know u raghav u need some time to compose yourself, plz stop it now I can't see u in pain, god please help him send someone in his life so that he can start leaving again]


At Mumbai airport..

Kalpi has landed in Mumbai and hired a cab moved to some apartment which was allotted for her by the company.. The apartment was beautiful it is 2-bedroom flat, she can see the entire view of Mumbai by her bedroom window..

She planned to take some rest now, as she has busy schedule for evening she just want to give surprise to her close friends and also decided to see Mumbai in night..As at night the light and its illumination and crowded areas with person will give a special look to city.. That moment will be amazing, magical time, kalpi is waiting for it..


Meanwhile at Mr.R construction:

Receptionist area: Sammy informs receptionist priya that no one must disturb Mr.R as he is in busy in checking records for presentation ,,if any emergency calls are their then divert them to my cabin I will answer them and take care that no disturbance may occur here and also send Mr.prakash (PA) to my cabin..

PA: ple... Pl...Please Sammy sir save me😭..He was pleading Sammy through his eyes and he was sweating a lot , his heart beat was very high he is feeling problem in taking breath...

Sammy: tried to calm him down and asked to take a deep breath and offered a glass of water..After few minutes when Prakash came to normal sense..Sammy informed him about his job and asked him to move to banglore ..As it is new branch where his help is needed most,, he also said that his family will be moving their and every arrangement will be made by company only but he must move their now ..

Sammy gives him a reassurance smile to him😊

PA: thank u sir i will, I have full faith on u and Mr.R .,. Thank u so much .. By saying this he moves to banglore😊

A pair of eyes sees this silently and moves back to his cabin ... at same time a girl enter the office and every one are shocked to see her😲😲😲 what she is doing here😲😕


At Mr.R cabin:

R( pov):why can't Sammy and mom stop talking about raghav.. I hate raghav ..im not raghav im Mr.R why can't they understand it.. I don't have any heart ..

By taking a glass of alcohol he thinks it's my routine casually I would take it during nights, my company and my life depends on it only, past 5 yrs my everything is this alcohol.. I can't let raghav win, only mr.r has right to win whatever Mr.R does it is right..

But now due to sammy I'm taking it this time..I need to control my emotions ( he lead out a sarcastic laugh)Emotion do I really have any feelings ..No I shouldn't have it.. Whatever I had I lost it ..No they were taken from me by this city and these peoples.. I don't care for anyone.. I'm person with heart less💔.. He tries his level best to console himself and by remembering his dreadful past he is back to arrogant, angry and person who hates this city and these peoples ..


Precap: R is in full angry mode... Mr.R is mesmerized by a girl he tries to see her face😳

next part is on the way😃



Sorry for all the mistakes (spellings and grammatical😉)... I haven't checked it .. please suggest me and ur suggestion are welcomed😳



Edited by sharanya0011 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Heyy nice update ... But if i am not wrong u mentioned about Miss Kapoor... Y did u edit it.
Edited by b.baheti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: b.baheti

Heyy nice update ... But if i am not wrong u mentioned about Miss Kapoor... Y did u edit it.

yes, i mentioned it but , i needed to add something to it .. kalpi's entry will be their along with it.. so its a long chapter so i taught to make it in next update😊
thank u 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update...kalpis entry in R s life..waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Update soon dear...eagerly w8ng mr R nd kkalpiconfrontation... I want he love her nt obsessed wid her...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lolor

nice update...kalpis entry in R s life..waiting...

thank u 😃..kalpi entry is in next update.. it will be by night 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aanchal57

Update soon dear...eagerly w8ng mr R nd kkalpiconfrontation... I want he love her nt obsessed wid her...

k dear😃 he will love her more than anything😳

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