Ch4 pg 31 - 31/03 - The guardian: forbidden love - Page 17

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Posted: 8 years ago
Finally u update this story thank you kalpi is heartbroken nd raghav fighting with himself superb update plz update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Its so cool
Kalpi still fears thunder n lightings
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Hanz91

Sometime is so hard to admit your in love yet if it you don't admit it in time you may be too late. Raghav gets the chance to be with his Kalpi yet he can't so sad and emotional.😭I hope Raghav soon realizes his mistake and moves on with Kalpi. Finally an update that to a GREAT one too👏. I'm sure if your pursuing to be a writer you will do Great!!!!!👍🏼 Well again great update and please continue soon and I would like to ask when will you update the untitled story. That story is so intriguing and I read it may times. Please update that story soon when you get the time.



Love is an emotion that is supposed to fill one with joy... it makes us carefree. It makes one want to celebrate it. Unfortunately for Ragav, he can't experience such joy. He once played the role of mother and father to the girl that has made a home in his heart. In fact he still does.
The guilt he is experiencing for seeing her as a woman. The guilt he is experiencing for allowing himself to use a drunken moment to give in to his desire. This guilt is nothing compared to the fear that is rooted in his heart... what if kalpi's love is not that of a lover... what if she has confused her love and affection and thinks it is that of a lover... what if it never evolved and she comes to realize it later in life.
He is holding on to his fear as a lifeline... erecting barriers... Coz he can't bear betraying Kamla maa.

Kalpi knows the depth of her love for him. She knows that her love has evolved. Her intuition tells her that Ragav's love has evolved too. She wants to celebrate it. To her Ragav has always been a friend, a confidant. She has yet to understand and acknowledge Ragav's guilt and fear. Only once she understands will she be able to break down the barriers he has erected.


Thank you for your kind words... I can't wait for the day that I can allocate enough time to actually write a book... one day inshallah I shall publish something. For the meantime I shall continue to work and improve on my skills through yours and the other readers guidance and feedback.

Now am off to read the untitled story so that I may update it. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
I read it again kalpi loves him from childhood she found him always there for her like a shadow now she is a woman and her love for him convert into as a man, a man who is always here for her who complete her and other side raghav he saw her as a little girl teen and now as a woman his world also around her her hapoiness as time changed hisove also turn into as a man loves his woman but he thinks it is wrong as kamalama made him his her guardian he can't make her his how helpless he is how hard for him to told her that he did not remember anything superb angel plesse dear whenever u have time update it


Thanku sooo much
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Posted: 8 years ago
That Was me after watching an update on this story dont know y but this is my fav among all Ur stories

Loved reading it after so long 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago


Finally u updated.. Thank you updating... Both love eachother sooo much.. Feel so bad for both...


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Posted: 8 years ago
I had not read this story which was started 2 years ago. Hats off to you for continuing it to please a sincere reader who had persevered relentlessly to make you come back with an emotional update ! Thanks to the ardent reader and the KIND writer .
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow..Thx angel for coming back and updating the story. .enjoyed the update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Glad to UD after long time ...reading RagNa after so long was literally a treat.
Hope Raghav is able to confess his feelings to himself, ASAP...poor him in a fix to love or not to love Kalpi...he needs to overcome his confusion that Age has nothing to do with love!
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Posted: 8 years ago
So eagerly waiting for ur update happy to see... Really waiting to see how rags going to control his desire...😉

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