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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: _TheBlackRose_

Awesome update dear...

Loved Kalpi's jealousy 😆
Waiting for that big push 😉


Thanks a lot ushoshi..
Glad u loved kalpi's jealousy😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjinie

still looking forward to Raghav's surprise birthday party, hope it will be before Prem leaves, lovely update


Yes it is before prem leaves.. And just one more update and then the party..😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari

beautiful update swtoo...plzzz pm me nxt time


Thanks a lot dear😃
Sure will pm u next time..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Maya is playing her part perfectly
Jealous Kalpi was funny
I like how she kept talking to herself and boi if looks can kill both Maya and Raghav would be six feet under lol...
Aww Kalpi is hurt seeing Maya kiss her Raghav
Her inner person expressing her feelings was nice. I only hope soon she accepted it as well
Damn! Things get from bad to worst between RagNa so fast
Superb update


@bold 🤣

Aww.. Loved that her Raghav u mentioned😳
Now they'll get worst to great in same speed😉
Thanks a lot natasha for liking the update😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Lovely update Arpi! Looks like Maya knows perfectly how to hit the right spots of jealousy. Kalpi is going green with envy seeing the comfort level she shares with Raghav. Little does Kalpi knows it's all part of the plan. Raghav can understand her anger but seems to be enjoying it secretly.

Loved the camaraderie between Rammy and Maya. The trio are good friends. Kalpi came in to see the perfect scene, Maya giving a peck on Raghav's cheek...lol. Kalpi didn't see Sammy, so obviously thinks Raghav is lying and he was spending time with Maya. Misunderstandings galore... Both are not ready to voice it out. Loved Kalpi having a heart to heart talk with her inner self.

Liked the fact that though Raghav wants to punish Sahil Kapoor for his misdeeds he wants to spare Prem and Pakhi.
Who will give them the much needed push so that they realise their feelings for each other?


Kiyu poor Raghav can't even enjoy the anger coz the cupids are torturing him too.. Remember Sammy torturing the poor guy😆

Chill next part atleast ek toh mu sort ho jaayegi.. Which is very soon😉

Ab tujhe pata mein bolungi toh nahi push kisne diye but actually woh push maine diya😉

Glad u liked it🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vasishna

heyylooo dear..
whoa.. longgg update uh.. I like it!
aww.. poor kalpi yaar.. she s burning so much in dis jealousiness!!! and by jus seeng dat maya kissed raghav even though its jus a peck.. it affected kalpi a lottt dat she even got tears in her eyes.. poor girl she dint know dat even Sammy s present there as she thought raghav s lying to her.. and even raghav cant do nythng as both Maya n Sammy r playing with his restlessness behaviour.. and poor guy dint acknowledge dat.. and even maya-sammy's teasing ness went too far.. that nw our kalpi s too angry on raghav n she dint think why is she feeling lyk dat.. I'm jus eagerlyyy waiting fr d party to begin..


It kind of was necessary to bring Kalpi's feelings to the surface.. Sorry if u feel it was too much.. But chill next update mein everything will be sort out..😃
Just one more update and then party🥳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
RagNa attack still on.. this is mostly the final update for the week as I need to study aubah se tp kar rahi hu and will be trying not to come on IF but I know I can't stop myself.. anyway sorry but party will be in next part for now this much only...

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"You don't own her Raghav.. she can do whatever she wants.. be with whomever she wants.."..."But ...", Raghav couldn't say anything more coz he knew the reason but it was necessary to control those feelings.. he realised that his jealousy had yet again hurt her.. "No matter what Kalpi.. today I'll talk to you..", he said in a determined tone..

On the other hand Kalpi too was fighting away the disturbing thoughts of Raghav.. she tried busying herself in work.. the intercom placed on her table rang ..her eyes were still glued to the computer while she picked it up..

And then the voice on the other side made her jump off her seat.. "Dada!!!", she excitedly said.. "Oh my god Dada.. you called .. (in angry tone) after so many days".. "Arey Kalpu I told you na the workload here has increased.. but now everything's done .. I'll be there in few days...", Pakya said happily...

On not getting any reply from Kalpi Pakya called out her name a little louder ,"You there Kalpi??".. "Umm ya dada..come soon.. i'm missing you a lot.."

On noticing the change in Kalpi's tone Pakya asked," You're fine na Kalpu.. hmm??"... Trying to sound normal and cheerful Kalpi replied,"Ya dada.. I'm fine".. "And aatya??", Pakya asked.. "Dada woh..", Kalpi was about to say something when she heard someone calling Pakya on the other side .."Ok Kalpi got to go.. and ya Aai called me .. she wanted to talk to you but your phone was off... she said its something important ..", saying so Pakya kept the phone ..

While staring at the phone Kalpi thought, "Aai called to talk to me..?? .. ofcourse its Paakhi's b'day tomorrow.. she must've called to talk about it..", Kalpi nodded her head and gave a mocking smile.. before Vitthal's death Paakhi and Prem were always Kamla's first priority and it didn't change even after Pakya and Kalpi left.. thanks to Gauri it now didn't bother Kalpi that much as it used to.. Kalpi dialed Kamla's number ..

Kamla- Hello..
Kalpi- Aai..
Kamla- Kalpi.. beta kaisi hai tu?? how are you??
Kalpi- Mein theek hoon aai.. I'm fine aai.. Tujhe mujhse kuch baat karni thi?? You wanted to talk to me about something ??
Kamla- Ha beta woh kal Raghav baba aaye the ghar.. Yes beta .. actually yesterday Raghav baba came to our house..
Kalpi- Raghav??
Kamla- Woh .. dekh agar mein pakya se ye bolungi toh woh meri baat toh kabhi nahi sunega ... Raghav baba maafi maangne aaye the.. jo bhi hua uske liye... Look.. if i say anything to Pakya then he won't listen to me .. Raghav baba apologised for whatever happened in the past... Beta humme unhe maaf kar dena chaahiye.. Beta we should forgive him..
Kalpi- Aai hum iske baare mein dada se baat karenge.. mujhe kaam hai abhi.. bye We'll talk about this after dada comes back.. I've some work now.. bye..

"First Paakhi and now Raghav.. she would never ever think about me ..", Kalpi thought .. Placing the phone back in its place she glanced at the clock.. time had ticked by very fast .. she had to go to party venue to check the final preps as Prem was busy so she quickly packed her stuff and left the cabin...

Everyone had left but still Raghav waited in his cabin as he saw Kalpi's cabin lights on.. On seeing the lights go off he immediately got off his seat and headed outside...

"Oh no its already late.. first need to go to venue then gauri ma's home..", Kalpi was muttering while looking at her watch and suddenly she collided with someone and before she could strike the hard flooring a pair of hands held her waist protectively..

She slowly opened her eyes to look into those chocolate brown eyes which she could recognise anywhere anytime.. "You ok", Raghav asked while still holding her by her waist.."Hmm", Kalpi said while nodding her head..

Her heart as always started running marathon and her voice was stuck in her throat... Raghav helped her stand properly , he couldn't help but notice Kalpi's nervousness and smile inwardly thinking that he affected her so much.. quickly shuddering away those thoughts he came to the main point," Kalpana .."

Before he could even complete his statement Kalpi said," Sir I'm getting late.. sorry but can we talk tomorrow.", she was about to walk past him but then she felt a pull.. "Mera dupatta??", Kalpi thought while holding her dupatta on her right shoulder which was about to slip off..

Without looking behind she said," Si... sir.. my .. my dupatta..Sir please leave my dupatta.", she didn't get any response and so she turned back to give Raghav a good earful but was quickly calmed down on seeing Raghav who had held his hand up showing that the dupatta tangled in his watch..

Within seconds Kalpi was near him trying to remove the dupatta out without tearing it.. Raghav had two of his top buttons unbuttoned and due to the proximity he could feel Kalpi's breath there making Raghav almost loose the final bits of his self control.. of the urge to claim those rose petals and tell her to never leave him..

"Enough", he said to himself.. he placed his hand over Kalpi's making her look up.. his touch always gave her some weird yet pleasant sensation.. "Done", Raghav said .. Kalpi looked at him with a confused expression .. "Your dupatta..", he said and then Kalpi came back to the real world... She flustered on realising that she was so lost in his eyes that she didn't even realise when Raghav was done...

"Gosh.. why do I always have to get lost somewhere when he's so close to me..", avoiding his gaze she moved away but again she was stopped.. this time by his hand..

Raghav held her upper arm in a strong yet delicate hold.. "I'm sorry..", he said and further continued.."I don't know what got into me .. yesterday... I.. I ..", he's heart urged to say those three magical words but he blurted out another story..

The momentarily forgotten kiss came back in her mind making her breathe heavily and heart skip many beats.. Raghav further continued," Weren't you the one to say that If someone commits a mistake unknowingly and tries to mend it then that person can be forgiven (had mentioned in previous chapter.. Sorry too lazy to see which part 😛) It wasn't a mistake for me but still just as an effort to mend our relation I'm saying sorry.. I don't want you to leave me.. please..."...

Raghav didn't even realise what he said as her eyes just held his gaze hypnotising him and he blurted whatever came to his mind.. both stayed just like that for few moments and finally Raghav's trance was broken by Maya's phone call ..

Kalpi was standing close ans hence could see Maya's name and felt her temper rising but soon a tiny involuntary smile came on her lips as she saw Raghav disconnect the call.. "Sorry Maya but this is little more important..", Raghav thought.. (Dost dost na raha..😆)He looked back at Kalpi who still stood close to him.. he slowly left her arm without moving his gaze which asked a silent question to her..

She lowered her eyes and nodded her head in a yes.. she couldn't anything much as Ragav's words had given rise to a storm in her heart.. "Does he?? then why??", all the questions remained incomplete as the answer to those were the one which she had no right to accept..


P.S I know its bit short but couldn't control the urge to type it all.. now no update atleast till 10th november ..

Sorry if by mistake kisiko pm nahi mila just pm me or comment if u didn't get it and want it..

Edited by appyK - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really nice update. Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
👏 lovely update dear... Well ashish/ raghav sirf tumhara hi nahi humara bhi heart beat berha deta...😳 😳 😉




nd this kamla the damla again only thinks abut others.😡 well i m littl happy that this time its not pakhi or nd kapoor...its rags...



Wish ragna jaldi sath ho 😳

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