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Posted: 11 years ago
The entire update was marvelous
I love it. U did a fab job
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update yar
every moment of this update was lovable
every ragna moment was supereb
raghav jealousy towards ajju was good
i feel bad for raghav who missed the chances to see the childhood of his kids first step in life,their first touch after birth, i was feeling his pain while reading those lines in ff..it was an emotional moment..
besides this ragna romance in the room was very good nd after that kalpi said jangli kahi ke was nice😆
nd kalpi blushed two time in this update was awesome..👏

hope u update next part soon..it is difficult for me to wait for long time
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Posted: 11 years ago
pls pm me next time when u update this ff
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Posted: 11 years ago
appyK,
shikha-aggarwal,premap, eishe10, turypriya, sharanya0011, lolor, ragna_luv, riaka,
Cinderella81, sweet_aditi, mounishree, sunyy, TheBlackRose_, ...Natasha..., zindgidilse
thank u so much all od your lovely reply's...hope u all liking the story..update next part read and reply.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter-24(A)

(raghav and kalpi start journey towords mumbai/..ajay also come with them..the all three in car..ajay driving car, raghav sit with ajay and kalpi sit backside)

raghav- kalpi now u told me what happened?? and why are u so worried after that calll???

Kalpi- its aai call raghav..she said that darsh was missing from last 4 hours..i'm to worried..kaha hoga wo???[where is he.???] maine bola tha naa ki aai unko nahi sambhal ppayegi phir bhi apne meri baat nahi maani. [i told u..its very hard to handel them] ye meri sab meri galti hai..mujhe usko aai ke pass chodker aana hi nahi chahiye tha.. [its all my fault..i wish i'm not come with u and not leave them alone...]

(kalpi talking like this but stop by ajay)

Ajay- lo phir se suru ho gayi tum??? [plz stop it kalpu you start again]..its not first time when he go somewhere like this...yaad karo unke birthday ke din kya hua tha?? [u fought that what happen in angel's last birthday]

Raghav-kya hua tha?? [what happened last time]

Ajay- nothing...darsh was missing from morning..pura din hum sab usko hi doodh rahe the [ we all serching him hol day]...its more then 6 hours we did not find him...

Raghav- toh phir wo mila kaise?? [then how did you him]

Ajay- humne usse nahi doodha balki wo khud apne app gher laut aaya [we not find him...he come back home his own]

Raghav- but wo gaya kaha tha?? [where is he gone???]

Ajay- he wants to see who honey bee's working so wo humari soceity ke paid pe chadhke honey bee's ka video shoothing kar raha tha??? [he wants to see honey bee's working so he going to our soceity's garden..sat up to tree and shoot the video]

Raghav- what??? no...(to kalpi) kalpi kitni unresponsible ho tum??/tum uska dhyaan nahi rak sakti??? ager madhu-makkhi kaat leti toh usko [how inresponsible kalpi u r???why you not take care of him???if something happen to him then??]

Ajay- oh..hello..where are u scolding her for this??its not her fault..she is very good mother.pichle 5 saal se tiya aur darsh ko usne akele bada kiya hai [she is alone scene last 5 years and alone take care tiya and darsh] she is never ignore them for any reason and i proud of her for this...and you talk about darsh then i told you that he is very smart..wo hai 5 saal ka lekin uska dimaag bahut chalta hai [you talk about darsh then i told you that he is very smart..he is only 5 years now but his mind working to much]...apko pata hai wo honey bee's gher dekhne gaya tha toh aise ki gaya hoga bina protection ke??[what do you think he is going to see honey bee's and not take any protection]

Raghav- means???

Kalpi- means ye ki wo sapce shoot pehme ke honey bee's ko dekhne gaya tha. [means he is wearing space shoot when he going to see honey bee's]

Raghav- what??? no..you are joking with me raight???

Ajay- no she in not joking raghav..he really wear space shoot..

Raghav- awwwooo how cute..

Kalpi- haan cute toh hai but uski iss cuteness value mujhe chukani padti hai [ya its very cute but i'm the one who pay for his cutenees]..jab wo aise bina bataye gayab ho jata hai naa tab meri kya halat hoti hai main hi janti hoon [when he despire like this only i know how i feel]

Raghav- bilkul tum per gaya hai isliye baar baar aise bina bataye gayab ho jaata hai [he is just like u that's why always missing like this]

(kalpi give him a angry look..and want to say something but stop bocz of ajay.she don't want that ajay learn about her and raghav's relationship so she control her anger and don't utter a word...now all the way kalpi, ajay and raghav are saty quit..raghav understand that kalpi angery on him that's he not say a word and ajay think that bcoz of darsh she was quit and don't reply)

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chawl:

Night: 2:30 PM

(after 5 hours all reach mumbai...ajay stop car in front of chawl..kalpi run towords house ..raghav follow and ajay follow her..kalpi knock on door and kamala open the door)

Kalpi- aai kaha hai wo??? thik toh hai naa wo??? [aai where is he?? he is alright naa???]

(Kamala points towords darsh..he is sleeping beside pakya...raghav and ajay also reach there...raghav relive when he see darsh sleeping

Kalpi- ohh.thank god he is fine...(kalpi go and sit beside darsh..he is sleeping peacfully...kalpi kiss his forehead and smile..then turn to kamala)..aai dasrh mil gaya tha toh tu mujhe phone kar ke bol nahi sakti thi..pata hai main kitni preshaan thi..aur kaha mila ye tumhe??? [aai why didn't you call me when you find him...i'm so worried about him...where you find him???]

Vitthal- chawl ke pass wale garden main [he is in garden]

Kalpi- what??? what is he doing in garden???

(darsh wake up that time)

darsh- mom...

Kalpi- darsh..(kalpi hug darsh) why are you going garden in night darsh..i told this many time before that aise bina bole kahi nahi jaate [i told you that if you want to go anywhere then 1st told to someone and go]

Darsh- ya mom i remember and main bol ke hi gaya tha [i told and then i'm going to garden]

Kalpi- kis ko bol ke gaye the tum?? [whom you told about you going to garden]

Darsh- Mr.paid ko [mr.tree]

Kalpi- hey deva...darsh ..i mean that told a person not a tree...

Darsh- but mom you only said to told someone..you not said that told a person..that's not fair mom...why didn't you told me properly...

(darsh angry on kalpi)
kalpi- i'm sorry its my mistake...now told me why are you going to garden at night???

Darsh- you want know why i'm going to garden???wait a min..

(darsh come to near his bag and open the bag ...darsh point pakya to switch off light throw his eyes)
Pakya- ok.(pakya switch the light off)

(ajay and raghav watch this all from door away)

Kalpi- dada light kyun band ki [dada why are you switch off the light???]

Darsh- mom isliye...

(kalpi turn and see darsh..1 jar in his hand and its sparlking like star]

Kalpi-wow... darsh its to amazing..tum iske liye gaye garden gaye the??? [you going to garden for this???]

Darsh- yes mom

Kalpi- its to beautiful darsh..

Raghav- ya its beautiful but ye hai kya?? [what is this darsh.]

Darsh-oh..ho mr.singhanai its a lighting bug...wo aaj chawl ki light gayi thi..aur aaji ko candel light main kaam karne main problem ho rahi thi isliye main garden jakar inhe leker aaya [ today a power cut in chawl and aaji is trying to work in candel light but she is not working properly in candel light so that's why i'm going to garden to collect this light bug's]

(kalpi kiss darsh)

Kalpi- its very sweet darsh but pehli baat aage se kisis ko bhi bina bataye kahi mat jana and dusari baat i know tumne inhe badt muskil se pakda hoga but aise inhe jar main rakhna thik nahi...ye baher hi ache lagte hai...ksis bhi animal ko aise bandh kar rakhna think nahi [look darsh 1st next time if you going somwhere then told mom or anybody then go and 2nd thing..i know you did hard work to collect this lighting bug...but its not right sweety...you want to free them..they look more beautiful when they fly on sky..]

Darsh- ok mom as you wish..i free them..

(darsh go to free lighting bug and kalpi touch her forehead)

Kalpi- hey deva..ye ladka kabhi nahi sudhrega...pata nahi bappa apne mujhe hi aise bache kyun diye hai??[oh god..this boy never change...why only my child is like this]

Kamala- kyunki tum aise ho..jaisi tum ho waise hi tumhare bache hai.[bcoz of you..your childern just like you]

Ajay- agree with you aunty..jesi ye hai waise hi ye dono hai [agree with you aunty..her childern just like her]

Kalpi- what??? now you also??? (kalpi throw a pillow on ajay's face)

Vitthal- kalpi ye kaun hai???[kalpi who is he]

Kalpi- baba ye mera dubai wala friend hai..ajay..ajay bajaj...he help and support me when i'm alone...he is very nice guy.

(raghav feel jelous to here kalpi's words..darsh come that time and notice ajay)

Darsh-mom maine unko chod diya..dekho..[look mom i free them} (darsh see ajay and go and hug him)..ajjau uncle..your back..i'm happy ki aap wapas aa gaye...main aur tiya ne apko bahut miss kiya..[ajju uncle..your back..i'm happy that your back..i me and tiya both miss you so much]

(raghav is angry on seeing this bcoz he ajay is more close to tiya and darsh..he is angry on himself bcoz he is not close of his kids like ajay)
Ajay- i miss you to champ and princess also...btw wo hai kaha [btw where is she???]

(darsh point towords tiya..how sleeping peacfully in beside kamala and she not listen the cono between all bocz she hide her head under the pillow...kalpi see this)

Kalpi- oh god not again..again she cover head by pillow...

(kalpi want to side the pillow on tiya's head but stop by kamala)

Kamala- rehne de so rahi wo..ager tumne use haath bhi lagya toh wo jag jayegi [let it be beta..don't disturb her...if you touch her then she wake up by your touch...kalpi agree on thia..that time raghav's phone alram start ringing]

Raghav- oh..no.main itni badi baat kaise bhool gaya?? ab eo mujhe pakka mar degi..aur ager wo bhi bhool gaya hoga toh???? no..ab hum gaye kaam se [oh..no how i fought this?? she never leave me and if he also fought this this then???now we both pay for this]

Kamala- kya hua raghav baba app tina pareshaan kyun lag rahe hai??? aur kaun nahi chodegi aapko???[what happend raghav baba???? and who don't leave you]

Raghav- aapki beti??? [your daughter]

Kalpi- ab main kya kiya?? [what did i do now]

Raghav main tumhari baat nahi kar raha haoo..main pakhi ki bat kar raha hoon..aaj uski aur sammy ki wedding anniversary hai..and main unk wish karna bhool gaya aur i think sammy ko bhi yaad nahi hoga ki aaj uski wedding anniversary hai..i need to do something...mujhe abhi gher jana hoga..bye..baad main milte hai [i'm not talking about you...i'm talking aboutpaakhi..today paakhi and sammy's wedding anniversary and i fought to wish them and i think sammy also fought that today his wedding anniversary...i need to do something...i'm going home bye..meet u later]

(raghav not stop to listen any reply...he left the chawl in hurry and called his driver to pick him)

Kalpi- chal aayi ab min bhi chalti hoon...[ ok aai now i also want to go]

kamala-anb tujhe kaha jana hai??? [where are you going now]

Kalpi- gher aur kaha??? [home]

Kamala- nahi abhi nahi kal chali jana...abhi bahut raat ho gayi hai [no in night your not going anywhere..stay here go tomorrow whenever you want]

kalpi- ok..toh main ajay ko gadi tak chod ke aati hoon [ok then i'm going to see off ajay]

(kalpi see off ajay and then come back to house and sleep)

Precap- wedding anniversary party..and tiya and darsh learn about raghav.

note:hey all jitna likha abhi utna update kar rahi hoon..hope u like it..pink line for those who not understand hindi...i write this in hindi bcoz some time i never found a write word..sorry for mistakes...plz read and comment..don't know how is this part..hope u all like it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fabulous update.. 👏
excited to read next one where tiya and darsh get to know the truth..
continue asap..
Edited by appyK - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aru its awesome dear sorry last update mein like kiya comment ke liye time nhi tha
BTW loving ur writing way
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome
daksh is too cute and very caring
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Posted: 11 years ago
Darsh is cute. Like most kids they are taken up with the lights emitted by fireflies. Beautiful thoughts in your FF. Thanks.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice update! Do continue😉

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