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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 5


Raghav ran to his house, eight minutes later he arrives. He walks in his house only to see blood stain on the wall, his nephew's body lying in the center. Both of them had their eyes open. He walk closer to them and close their eyes then when he turn around he saw his uncle body lying by the chair, water was coming out of his eyes. He's uncle that would always ask him how was his day was dead. He got up to go to the kitchen when he tripped on something; he looks at it and screamed

"AUNTY!"

Quickly he rushes to the head and hugs it, her beautiful eyes that use to shine was now dead. He cried and cried until there was no more tears. After words he decides to pile the bodies together and burn them. When he was done he was about to gather their ashes when the guards surrounded him.

"Look what we have here boys, a weak child." Says the leader

"Yeah, you not so tuff now." Says another

"I will break you in half and feed you to my pet snake." Says the one that hurts kalpi

Raghav just stood their ignoring them. They continue taunting him until finally someone mentioned kalpi "your girlfriend was strong but I managed to handle her." He says making Raghav bold his fist

"You should have seen her face when I cut her. She was crying her pretty eyes out." He says making Raghav attack the man. Raghav punch him sending him to the floor, the other guys surrounds him while the leader gets up wiping the blood from his lips.

"You son of a #$@*&" he says before attacking Raghav with the sword.

Raghav seeing this dodge the sword attack, the guy swung trying to cut Raghav but he was only cutting air. Raghav grab his wooden sword and blocks the next attack aiming for his head. They continue pushing one another until Raghav pushes him back. He swung the wooden sword over his head attacking the leader, the leader jumped back. While doing that another guard came into Raghav view, he swung his wooden sword at the second man, then turn to the leader. He continues to slip between both guards, making them look at him. Raghav quickly took a step back when the leader swung his sword up at him, which he countered the downward swing. He pushes the leader away and faces the second guard, always moving and dancing from the men's sword.

"For a little brat, you're pretty good" says the leader

"Come on boss kill him?" says another guard

"Yeah cut him to pieces" says another; all the guards kept cheering for their leader and friend. Raghav didn't let that distract him, he was already upset, and he couldn't let them win. Every emotion he ever felt was gone, he knew kalpi didn't make it because while he laid her on the floor, he was sure she wasn't breathing. She was cold as ice. He remembers kalpi face and her wounds, and then he remembers his family faces especially his aunt. Anger was all over Raghav face, he wanted to kill these mans especially sahil for ruining his life.

The leader rushes to Raghav bringing his sword to Raghav chest, but Raghav brought up his wooden sword stopping the attack, then he shoved the second guard to the leader. The leader falls to the ground, and the second guard whirled and brought his sword to Raghav face, but Raghav managed to stop the blade with his wooden sword. He took a step back as the two guards regroup, the second guard charged Raghav, but he punched the second guard in the face with the hilt of his wooden sword, forcing him to the ground. Raghav seeing his sword on the ground picks it up, he could feel the weight of the sword, it was heavy and felt different compare to the wooden sword he had, he twirls it around smirking then he Quickly he slipped past the leader and shove him, thrusting his sword into his back making him fall to the ground.

Everyone was surprise; their lying on the floor was their leader, the strongest guard in the palace killed by a fourteen year old. All the guards were angry now, Raghav with his good eye coordination saw the second guard trying to get up. Before he could rise Raghav thrust his sword into his stomach. Grabbing the sword that was now tainted with blood he watches the guards surrounding him ready to attack him. As soon as Raghav got into a fighting stance, they all attack him, Raghav with his fast legs dodge each of their attack. He charges at the person closer to his left, making him jump back trying to dodge his sword, but Raghav pursued him, by jumping against the guy, wrapping his arms over his shoulder, and pinning his arms against, and then slammed the sword into his back. The guard arched his back and fell to his knees. The two guards left were trembling with fear.

When Raghav look back up his hair falls down from his ponytail, the guards thought they saw his eye change to red. They tried to attack and Raghav pulling his sword out tackle the other guard punching him, then lifting his sword and drove the weapon into his chest. The last guard swung his sword while Raghav wasn't looking, Cutting his back, making blood ooze out. Raghav held his back in pain, but he wouldn't let that stop him, he quickly dodges the guys' next attack and kicks his foot from below. The guard not giving up came back up, and so did Raghav. He charges towards the last guard, making him step back. He spins in the air and held on to his sword to stab him. The last guard seeing this blocks his attack.

Raghav was feeling the pain on his back; it was starting to affect his movement. The guards seeing this laughs evilly, he jumps at Raghav, but he ducked under the mans blade and plunged his sword into the mans belly killing him. Once the man falls on the floor Raghav drops on his knees, with blood coming from his back. The rain started falling washing the blood from his back; he looks at the sky and screams his heart out, with Tears running down his cheeks.

Meanwhile, the priest was trying to help kalpi. He knew something like this would happen, the boy was bad luck. While watching him that night he could see darkness around him. The boy's future will be full of killing and despair. He thought some of the monks came in the temple telling the priest to hurry up and look outside. When the priest came out he could see the wind blowing very hard and the rain falling even harder.

" this has never happened before" he says

" what do you think this could mean?" says the monk

" I don't know for sure, but I think it has something to do with that boy that came to drop kalpi." He says

Elsewhere, sahil and prem were busy discussing strategies his army, when the other guards came in.

"What is the meaning of this?" says sahil, one of the guards bow and says "sir, I have a message for you." He says

"Speak now" he said

"Well sir, we killed the boys' family, and we found out something interesting." He says

"And what would that be?" he asks out of curiosity

"The boys' aunt informed us that king Singhania son is still alive." He says making sahil scream out loud.

"WHAT!" he says "I thought he was taking cared of." He says

"True sir, he was. No one could have survive that cliff." He says

"Then she must have been bluffing so you would spare her." Sahil says just when he was about to dismiss the guards, the balcony door slammed open. Everyone turned to look; they saw the wind blowing really fast. But what made them stood up was someone yelling.

"SAHIL!" he says with hate making them come to the balcony. When sahil looks down he saw the boy that he told them to kill. The wind making his hair fly everywhere, he had some cuts and bruises and also his clothes were ripped.

Paki was talking with kamla and his mother, when they heard someone shouting. They went outside only to see Raghav shouting. Paki was shock to see his appearance like that, she wanted to run to him, to help him but Neetu held her back. The only thing she could do was stand their watching him.

When Raghav saw sahil, he threw the rock he had in his hand. Making it cut sahil cheek. Everyone was shock especially prem. "you insolent full, are you mad" he says making Raghav turn his cold eyes to him "I will advice you to shut up fatty" he says before turning back to sahil. Sahil wasn't faced by this; he was more fascinated by the boys fighting spirit. I sent one of my best guards to kill him, how did he survive? He thought

"PLAYING WITH PEOPLE LIFE IS NOT ENOUGH, YOU HAD TO GO AND DESTROY THEIR SPIRIT TOO." He says angry making sahil smirk, this just made Raghav madder.

"Tell me boy, what happened to my guards?" he says calmly

"I KILLED THEM ALL." He says surprising everyone

"YOU'RE LYING, THOSE GUARDS ARE STRONGER THAN YOU, THERES NO WAY YOU COULD BEAT THEM." Says prem

Raghav ignore him and continues talking to sahil. "I promised to my dead family sahil kapoor, I will kill you with my own hands. You will not get away with this murder you've committed, I will make sure of It." he says with hate

"If you think you can little boy, try me. When you're stronger come and find me." He says before turning around to leave follow by the guards. Prem look at Raghav and says "as long as I'm alive you will never touch my father." Then he walks away making Raghav glare at him. Paki was about to say something to Raghav when kamla and Neetu drag her inside, making her cry.

Unaware to Raghav, vitthal was watching the whole thing from the window. That boy, reminds me of someone long time ago. The hate in his eyes is filling with thirst for blood. He thought "if he wasn't crazy, he would have made a fine leader to my army." He says to himself while watching Raghav just stand their in the rain looking at sahil balcony.

To be continued...

Preview

Scene 1: A man was walking when he met a boy about 14 walking and fainting on the road

Scene 2: a girl was singing in the water falls when group of guys came to harass her.

Scene3: a man walk in the town, with his sword on his side. He was wearing a black cloak which was hiding his face

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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
story is going gud😊, continue soon i want to know whats nxt? wat will raghav do😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Amazing update
continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
wow beautiful updates..
rags family is dead😭
fighting scene was fabulous..
plz continue soon ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
sharanya if you read the beginning his family members at the palace were already dead. the once that died now was his aunts family. he has two family left but he doesn't know yet. abhi is alive and so is his mother. and thank you for your comment lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Thank u for clarifying dear😊
waiting for next update.. plz continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
too awesome...so the story is taking a leap??? exited..
dont be too late to update ur next chapters wanna read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Read all d parts story is awesome👏
Fighting scene is amazing
Interesting precap
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
I m sure kalpi is alive and the man in cloak is raghav ...plz cont soon nd pm me too plz

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