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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Omg kalpi is confused . I feel bad for her rags using her. Atleast he has a conscious and stopped himself. Continue soon so eager for more

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Sevenstreaks

@Sevenstreaks

Trailblazer

+ 46

Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Read 7,8 &9 chapters in one go...its

Continu asap🤗

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#223

It is amazingly and so gracefully written Fuzz. You are so good at it, I can hardly manage anything close to it. That's what I love about you. You bring out every emotion and scene so brilliantly and in so beautiful words. 👏 Terrific, never for a second I felt it to be vulgar or embarrassing. Kalpi's inner turmoil is so apt, from a girl's point of view. Amazing that two different nature people, both fighting their inner demons in their own ways, for each other, fighting their feelings for each other and both denying. With Raghav hell-bent on revenge from Kamla, wondering what shall he do now with Kalpi, and once he realises that he really does care for her. When will Kalpi know that she is in fact his wife? 😃

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rani214

@rani214

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#224

Amazing n sensual update

Loved d way his conscious stopped him

Both ragna inner turmoil beautifully written

Raghav in denial mode dat he has fallen 4 her

Continue soon 😃

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Priya

@priya_remix

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Wow fuzz I read the completed part and trust me I had goosebumps all over me! And hell was I shocked to read Kalpi's POV! Wow we got some bold woman here who is not shy of her newfound sexiness! And she plans to be just friends with him!! Ha Ha good joke! How naive could she be! Silly girl!

And loved the way Raghav was pacifying himself and convincing himself that it is not love but because she is just his employee LOL!

I think he is already feeling that he can claim his rights on her because in his subconcious mind he is aware that Kalpi is his legal wife! So she belongs only to him! And he can have her any way he wants to! So how will he resist his desire for her!?? This will be an interesting thing to read!

And yes fuzz my expectations were very high but you exceeded them!!! mmmuuuaaah dil khush kar ditta darling! Love you for this update!🤗

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lovely

@smileysmile

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Kalpi POV was fantastic. Fighting the battle between logic and desire. And Raghav is not accepting that he has fallen for her.

Thanks for the update.

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DiVirgo

@DiVirgo

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Awesome! Read last 3 updates in one! I love when I don't have to wait for another update when there is a "hot" scene going on!! Man this is too good! I'm loving both! Especially rags and his battles with himself! Great update!

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incredible96

@incredible96

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#228

great update!!! cant wait for the next and dont forget to pm me! :P

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angelpureness

@angelpureness

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: priya_remix
Wow fuzz I read the completed part and trust me I had goosebumps all over me! And hell was I shocked to read Kalpi's POV! Wow we got some bold woman here who is not shy of her newfound sexiness! And she plans to be just friends with him!! Ha Ha good joke! How naive could she be! Silly girl!
And loved the way Raghav was pacifying himself and convincing himself that it is not love but because she is just his employee LOL!

I think he is already feeling that he can claim his rights on her because in his subconcious mind he is aware that Kalpi is his legal wife! So she belongs only to him! And he can have her any way he wants to! So how will he resist his desire for her!?? This will be an interesting thing to read!

And yes fuzz my expectations were very high but you exceeded them!!! mmmuuuaaah dil khush kar ditta darling! Love you for this update!🤗

Lol I erased the last line I wrote for rags where he tells himself tht she is his wife and he can have her as many time as he wants. Thought you all might hate him for his thoughts... Lol

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Priya

@priya_remix

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: angelpureness

Lol I erased the last line I wrote for rags where he tells himself tht she is his wife and he can have her as many time as he wants. Thought you all might hate him for his thoughts... Lol

No no you must add it that line perfectly defines his character! And who doesn't love bad boys???