unseen love of rags for kalpi part 68 upated on 101 - Page 53

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Posted: 10 years ago
SO AS PER ISHANI,MOUNI THE WRITER OF THIS FF IS CURRENTLY IN HER NATIVE PLACE
AND WILL UPDATE ONLY AFTER 07TH DECEMBER.
OK , WE WILL WAIT FOR HER TILL THAT TIME.
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Posted: 10 years ago

HI MOUNI,

ARE U BACK FROM THE NATIVE PLACE??????????
CAN WE GET AN UPDATE TOMMORROW????????
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Posted: 10 years ago

MOUNI DEAR,

WHEN U WILL UPDATE AND CLOSE THIS FF?????????
UNSEEN KHO SEEN BANADHO NAA JADLI,JALDI SEY!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh yar wr i left this story i mean til wt i udated.?? need to check it now 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
BABY,DON'T CRY.
THIS IS YOUR FF AND YOU ARE SUPER DUPER INTELLIGENT.
JUST GIVE A GLANCE TO THE LAST FEW CHAPTERS.YOU WILL RECOLLECT EVERYTHING
AND CAN GIVE MIND BOGGLING UPDATE AFTER THAT.
MY POV, MY HONEST APPRECIATION AND NO AMUL BUTTERING.
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Posted: 10 years ago
sory for late late udate actually i had been t my native so ..enjoy the udate..
part 66:
Raghav:dntworry krish i knw wr she went and u dnt feel bad she will be k . i will talk to her lets go now.
kalpi drived car in full seed and reached the raghav home and directly run to gouri room who was sad thinking that her kalpi and krish left home..
kalpi opened the door and directly went and hugged her she was crying.. gouri was shocked to see kalpi crying.
Gouri:wt hapned y u crying.. she sees around and as she nt find krish she says
Gouri:kalpi kuch tho batha .krish kaha hai .y u crying ur alright and wt abt krish wr he he .mai raghav se bol dethi hoo ki krish yaha nahi hai.
kali:ma krish is k .nothing happened to him..
gouri got relax nw.
gouri:krish is k then y u crying this much...come sit.. she took her to sit on bed. kalpi iut her head on gouri lap
kalpi:ma mai kithna unlucky hoo na..
Gouri:kya huva kuch tho bathavogi ab..
Kali said whtevr hapened and krish and raghav became one.
there raghav and krish reached the hoome.. raghav tells krish to go to his room in half an hour he willbring his mom in his room..krish says k and left.
Raghav resached near gourri room.
gouri:tho ye tho kushi ki bath hai tho thum ro rahi ho.
Kalpi:ma mai bahooth kush hoo ki krish raghav ko accept kar liya ithna kush ki mai jindhagime kabhi nahi thi.
Raghav stoped near door by listening this. he thinks if she is hapy then wt made her to come like this
Kalpi:ma they both r thinking that i am hurt becs they nt told me this before and they gave me tension by acting.. but unhe kya patha vo dono chahakar bhi muje dukh nahi desakthe hai.. vo dono tho mere sab kuch hai..
Gouri:tho kya huva
Kali:ma u knw na mai kithni unlucky hoo. unhe kya atha mai ane unluck se vaha se bhag khar ayi hoo.. une kya patha ki mai marnevali hoo..
raghav shocked by hearing this.tears came out of his eyes.he thinks kalpi y she telling like this.
he nt got streanth to stand he fel near the door.he thinks nahi mere kali ko kuch nahi hoga... nahi hoga.
Gouri:kali is karan hi thum ithne varsh se raghv se door rahi hai
Kalpi:ha ma.
Gouri:kali kyu ye thum raghav se chua rahi hai.kehe do na us se.
Kalpi:nahi mai mai ase nahi kar sakthi hoo ako tho.vo thut jayega.. vo mujse bahooth yar kartha hai. aur mai janthi hoo vo kithne strong dikhtha hai merematter me uthna hi weak hai.. ye jaan kar vo nahi sehe payega.
Gouri:then wt ull do

kalpi:dnt knw ma
Gouri:ab kuch math soch aur jaa aur jaa kar un dono ke sath enjoy kar..otherwise they think they hurted u..
kalpi:ha ma aa theek keherahe ho..and she got up to go
Gouri:aise hi javoogi.??nahi mere kalpi rothe hoove achi nahi lagthi..go and wash facwe and go.
kali smiles at Gouri and ssays k..
raghav stood u and thinks ab ye ayegi use atha nahi chalna chahiye ki muje sab atha chal gaya ki vo mujse kyu door thi and use kuch problems hai..i need to find it as soon as ossible.. at present i need to be hapy as kalpi want us to be hpy..he wipes his teares and entered room
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: laavanya4u

BABY,DON'T CRY.

THIS IS YOUR FF AND YOU ARE SUPER DUPER INTELLIGENT.


JUST GIVE A GLANCE TO THE LAST FEW CHAPTERS.YOU WILL RECOLLECT EVERYTHING

AND CAN GIVE MIND BOGGLING UPDATE AFTER THAT.


MY POV, MY HONEST APPRECIATION AND NO AMUL BUTTERING.

Thank u so much lavany in believing me that i can write good updates.it means a lot to me. 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
plezz translate in English lguage..wat Kalpi said??
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Posted: 10 years ago
Excellent update after a long time.
So.Raghav had finally come to know abt the problem of Kalpi without knowing abt her
disease part.
Pls let him know the cause soon .So that ,he has some chances to get her treated at the
right time.
PLS DON'T SEPARATE RAGNA AT ANY COST,NOT EVEN DEATH.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mouni Plz Update Tis FF 😭 😭 😭

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