Kalpana The vicious Girl updt on new thread(24th Nov)

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 10 years ago

#891

Originally posted by: eishe10
Amazing update!!! Kalpi is finding many things now to prove Raghav's innocent and Raghav feeling restless for Kalpi which is interesting. Continue soon 😊

Thank u dear... m glad u liked it. Will try to continue soon.

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 10 years ago

#892

Originally posted by: angelpureness
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Gosh I just love the way you have led us through the clues... U r an awesome writer... Mwah

I look forward to the final unveiling... Omg who did Pakhi call... Please let Kamla not be on it... I hope Pakhi has not emotionally blackmailed her or threatened her... Ooh can't wait for the next update... Take ur time no rush...

Gosh I could go on gushing😆

Fuzz.. u know u made me super happy once again... after all m getting compliments from an awesome writer whom i admire.

Ur fear might be correct as Pakhi's biggest weapon is Kamla and kalpi's weakness as well.. but chill this isn't the same Kalpi who had any weakness...

I will try to update whenever i will get time.. As u know my exams r near so m not concentrating much on FFs.😆

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 10 years ago

#893

Originally posted by: sampa79
Amazing update
Update soon next part

Thank u.. Will try to update asap.

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 10 years ago

#894

Originally posted by: sweet1308
Awesome update

Thank u dear,

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 10 years ago

#895

Originally posted by: _TheBlackRose_
Superb update Vish!! 👏
Love the way ur unraveling the story... I simply love crime thrillers...
Will be w8ing for the update...

Thank u dear.. glad u liked it though I was not able to carry the mystery the way u do.😊

Will try to update asap.

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 10 years ago

#896

Originally posted by: priya_remix
Nice update dear!!!! Very nice however one doubt I think you changed Maria into Maya!!!!!! LOL😆
Well all the best for your exams!!!!

Thanks Priya...

Exam hangover u know... n m really poor in remembering names n this Maya maria sounds so similar. Thanks for pointing it out. edited it.

Thank u dear.

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 10 years ago

#897

Originally posted by: riaka
Wow Wow kalpi , prem and maria seems like trio works for cid.
Nice update dear. Continue soon

My CID effect transferred to them.😆

Thank u dear... will try to write soon.

BTW Rachu is looking pretty in ur DP.

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 10 years ago

#898

Originally posted by: singhania
Hi Vish, awesome update. U made Kalpi, Maria & Prem turning into Sherlock Holmes new version. It requires lots of imagination to write such a story and to capture the readers' attention also. Bravo!
Poor Rags, he feels bad about Kalpi's unknown boyfriend and also for betraying Kalpi by sleeping with Pakhi, but Im waiting when he will learn the whole truth to make him a happy man again. Pakhi must rot in jail. BTW the name is Razia. Plz dont 4get to PM me. Thanx for pm last time & Im glad to have received other ff from u. Gonna read all of them. Update soon b4 your exams & gud luck also.

Thank u dear... m totally flattered by ur comment... m glad u realized that I am really giving lots of efforts in this update.

There is a twist in the story.. so Rags will take some time to know about Kalpi n her whole truth.

I have something in my mind for Pakhi... but will make a poll to know what u all want for her.

Will send u pm for sure n happy to know that u r going to read all of them.

Thanks for good luck.. i really need it.😆