Ragna SS-Hold me closer, Tiny dancer

Baljodh

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Prologue-

Kalpana Vithal Jadhav is a beautiful and flexible dancer of 22 years. She has her own dance classes in NYC. But what will happen if Raghav Singhania, A suave dancer of 23 years, comes in as a dance teacher in NYSD?

Kalpana Jadhav- A dancer of 22 years. She is smart and enthusiastic. She is a dance teacher and teaches dance in New york School of Dance for 5 years. She teaches dance to young kids from 5- 14 years old. She has a well-toned body, like that of a dancer. Her dusky skin, Makes her more attractive. Her unconditional love for children, Makes her more beatiful. She has a golden heart. She has a new competitor, Raghav Singhania. Who also teaches the kids Dance.

Raghav Singhania- He is a Dance teacher of 23 years. He loves teaching kids dance and wants them to become a great dancer like him. He has his own purpose of teaching in NYSD. (Mystery)

He is attracted to since the day he had met her for the first time at the coffee shop. He loves dancing to the core.

Mrs. Jones- She is the owner of NYSC. She loves Kalpana as her own daughter. She had lost her biological daughter in an accident, thus, she treats Kalpana as her own. She is of 43 years. She was the one who taught Kalpana how to Dance.

Mr. Jones- He is mrs. Jones's husband. He is a very supportive husband. He loves Mrs. Jones to the core and will do anything for her. He treats Kalpana as his own daughter and loves her dearly.

Coleen- She is Kalpana's best friend since childhood. She is a theatre actress. Loves Kalpana dearly and will do anything for her. He has a great sense of humour. She never forgets to bring a smile on Kalpana's face whenever she's sad. She's a prankster. She has a huge crush on Travis.

Travis- Travis is Raghav's best friend since childhood. He always loves to pull Raghav's leg. He's Coleen's love interest and'll soon fall in love with her.

Kylie- She is a very cute girl of 5 years. She is Kalpana's younger sister. She is staying with Kalpana at their apartment. Kalpana wants her to become a great dancer. She loves to call her sister "Mish" (Miss). She loves her Raghav sir and treats him like her Brother In Law, He always loves to pull both Kalpi and Raghav's legs. She is also known as Raghav and Kalpana's cupid.

Richa- Kalpana's Mom (Deceased)

Sudhir- Kalpana's Dad, He's a deadbeat, He left kalpana and kylie's mom and didn't even went to her wife's antim sanskaar. he is hated by Kalpana.

Note:This FF is completely different from the serial.

If you like it I'll continue.

INDEX:

Prologue & Characters- Pg.1

Ch:1-Pg.1-2

Ch:2-pg.3

Ch:3- Pg. 4

Ch:4 (A)-Pg. 6

Ch:4 (B)- Pg.9

Ch:5-Pg.11

Ch:6 (A)- Pg.12

Ch:6 (B)- Pg. 14

Ch:7 (A)-Pg. 16

Ch:7 (B)- Pg. 18

Ch:8-Pg. 20

Ch:9 (A)-Pg. 22

Ch:9 (B): P. 24

Ch:10:Pg. 26

Ch:11 (A)-Pg. 28

Ch.11(B)-Pg.32

Ch.12- Pg.34

Ch.13- Pg.36

Ch 14 (A)-Pg.41

Ch. 14 (B)-Pg.44.

Author's Note-Pg.44

Ch.15-Pg. 48

Ch.16 (A).Pg 51

Ch.16(B).Pg.54

Ch.17 .Pg.57

Edited by -HeyJude- - 10 years ago

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donwannaone

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Posted: 11 years ago

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wow diff concept

plz continue soon

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sharanya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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wow, rags and kalpi are dancers loved it... plz continue😃

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incredible96

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Posted: 11 years ago

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great prolohue! cant wait for the updates! btw when will you be updatinf you fate ff???

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Sevenstreaks

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Posted: 11 years ago

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liked the concept...its nice...pls continue soon...😳

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Baljodh

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter : 1

~Flashback~

Raghav was going to the coffee shop to buy a cup of coffee. He ordered a cup of black coffee. Then, A Beautiful girl with a dusky complexion entered the Coffee shop to buy a cup of coffee. As soon as he saw her, He just can't take his eyes off her. It seemed like she was a magnet, He's so attracted to her. From that moment, Raghav just can't stop staring at her. He kept on admiring her looks. So, He thought of making a scene at the coffee shop. He took his cup of coffee and purposely bumped at her, Making it to spill on her shirt.

"Oh no! What have you done! Can't you walk properly" Said Kalpi with an exhausted look. " Im so sorry miss, I didn't do it on purpose" Said Raghav.

"By saying sorry, You won't change this whole situation" Said Kalpi very angrily.

Soon, Kalpi left the coffee shop with her clothes wet, She was too exhausted.

"Oh god! Why does this always have to happen to me, And I shouldn't have yelled at him, Now what should I do? I think I should go home and dress up quickly, The kids must be waiting for me."

Raghav was following her the whole day, He also knew that she's a dance instructor at NYSD. He thought that he should become a dance teacher in NYSD just to see her all the time. Raghav thinks he's so stupid because how can he be so attracted to her? He doesn't even know her well..But what can he do, This love at first sight was making him crazy..

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~Flashback ends~

"Hmmm, Now I'll see her 24/7", By saying this, Raghav was laughing like a lunatic..He kept thinking of that girl he saw at the coffee shop, Her eyes, Her dark complexion, Made him to fall for her looks..

To be continued...

Note:Sorry for the grammatical errors! I hope you like it.

Edited by baljodhdhanesar - 11 years ago

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Awesome concept
Lovely starting
I'm looking forward to read more

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idonkno

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I am already hooked to this story 😊 Continue soon

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Baljodh

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Continuation of Chapter 1:

It's morning. Raghav is getting ready for his interview at NYSD. He was hopeful that he'll brag up the job. He was nervous, Because this was his first time teaching dance. He went downstairs and told his roomate and Bestfriend Travis, That he's going for an interview..

"All the best Bro! (as travis treats him like his very own brother), I hope that you'll interact with her more, And, don't forget to ask her name, you Coward! "Told Travis sarcastically.

"Ok fine,And, Im not a coward, It's just that yesterday, she was so angry at me that I didn't want to add fuel to the flame. And don't worry, I'll find a suitable girl at NYSD who can control you!" Said Raghav laughing sarcastically

"Ok whatever bro, Just Go for it! You have all my best wishes! Bye!" Said Travis..

"Okay Bye see you later", Wished Raghav..

Raghav was walking down the aisle. There, he saw the girl he met yesterday at the coffee shop, He Brag an excuse again, Just so he can talk to her.

"Hi, Im sorry, For what I've done yesterday," Said Raghav feeling bad for what he have done yesterday.

"No, It's okay. And I'm sorry too, I shouted at you, I know it was just a cup of coffee, But I was really fatigued yesterday, You know, Hectic schedules," Said Kalpana.

"No.No, It's okay..By the way, Whaa...

Raghav was just about to ask her name, But someone from behind called Kalpana. It was her bestfriend Coleen..

"Kalpana, Let's go! We're getting late" Coleen shouted.

"Im coming!" Kalpana exclaimed.

"Ok, So, before leaving, May I ask what's your name"? Kalpana asked eager to know his name.

"Raaa..ghav." He said shyly.

"Nice name, Well,my name is Kalpana, By the way, nice meeting you, Im off to work now, So, Byee" Kalpana said with her eyes beaming at his..

"Bye" Raghav said breathtakingly..

"Kalpana, Oh, So her name is Kalpana, Wow! What a beautiful name, just like her, She's so beautiful, and her smile, Her beautiful big sparkling doe eyes, Whenever she looks at me, I feel butterflies in my tummy, And why is it that whenever she talks to me, I always feel my face become so hot and my ears become so red, She brings chills in me!, What is it in her?" Raghav thought..

Next update: Kalpana recognizes Raghav, Raghav is happy that she recognizes her..

Guys I hope you like this update and Im updating really soon.

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Baljodh

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Posted: 11 years ago

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