4 shots on Ragna:)mystery of kids..(4thshot n climax ~updated 30/6/14)

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sarusmiley

@sarusmiley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: SONIA6702

awsum saru... beautifully written.👏👏👏.. u gave it a happy ending... luved it...😳😳...

rags acted real smart nd turned it against prem...😳... nd d ending ws so perfect... ragna hug 😳... misssin it in ema😭😭

u made me pakiya's daughter😆... kavi too😆😆😆...
thnks fr d role in ur story,, although i'm a baby... not much fr screen space...😆😆😆... appreciate it...😳😳😳...

luv u saru,, kavii,,, nd monu... mwahhh...❤️

jas...ok..u know the story from the begining but this name would have surprised u na pucca..love u darling😊😊😊

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TheLifeDiaries

@TheLifeDiaries

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Posted: 11 years ago

#282

10th time huh. I read it 10 times. It is amazing. Brilliantly thought and penned.

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Honey

@HoneyFadhel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#283

Saru the Thing which made me Laugh from my Chair was Raghav whispering to Kalpi that Some people will never change referring to Paakhi... 🤣🤣🤣

Nice 1 ❤️

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@HappySmiles

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Posted: 11 years ago

#284

Oh so they were Pakhya's kids. 😆
Beautiful ending Saru, I am glad that Kalpi and Raghav got back together.
Good thing Kalpana wasn't the suffering types.
Lovely story..:)

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sarusmiley

@sarusmiley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: Sweet_chilli_gi
10th time huh. I read it 10 times. It is amazing. Brilliantly thought and penned.

he sweety sorry for the late reply..10 th time..ok first time m feeling like m writing better..thank u so much dear🤗

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sarusmiley

@sarusmiley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: Jaymaa
Nice update...👏

thanks money🤗

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sarusmiley

@sarusmiley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: HoneyFadhel
Saru the Thing which made me Laugh from my Chair was Raghav whispering to Kalpi that Some people will never change referring to Paakhi... 🤣🤣🤣
Nice 1 ❤️

he he he honey thank u so much baby..he he and true na some people will never change😆

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sarusmiley

@sarusmiley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: KReyAS
nice ending
love it

thank u so much re😊😊😊

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sarusmiley

@sarusmiley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: Pookhi
Oh so they were Pakhya's kids. 😆
Beautiful ending Saru, I am glad that Kalpi and Raghav got back together.
Good thing Kalpana wasn't the suffering types.
Lovely story..:)

he he pakya kids lol😆

he he thanks pookhie🤗