Ragna SS ' arranged marriage' need suggestions plzz help

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Aruba

@sweetcherry95

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Posted: 10 years ago

#211

plzzz guys I need suggestion how to further continue this story
plzz help me

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: sweetcherry95
plzzz guys I need suggestion how to further continue this story
plzz help me

dear sweetcherry

i love this story of your nd waiting for its to be update since long..the way u portray a a arranged marriage in this ff of ragna just love it..

nd about suggestion..u r the writer of this ff ..u know better than us..just be confident..

but if u want further suggestion ,here is my suggestion..

you can bring a understanding track to ragna to know each other better..as their are lots of new twist say love come in two life slowly..nd then some trip for ragna

Edited by zindgidilse - 10 years ago

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sumasridhar

@sumasridhar

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#213

Dear u r awesome I my view take the story as it flow 4m ur thought n 4m ur brain coz as everybody said
V r ur fans v like as u write bt make it asap
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plzzz guys I need suggestion how to further continue this story
plzz help me
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I like to have pm plz cherry

Edited by sumasridhar - 10 years ago

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#214

You have already started update with honeymoon so on trip have them open up more and rags appreciate her beauty and then when they come back y not have kalpi
Join work she is educated she shouldn't be house wife.

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Cinderella

@Cinderella81

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#215

Sweetie I was waiting for ur update but today asked for suggestion, I loved the way u started it as u were planning for honeymoon let both Kalpana and raghav open up to each other their love start slowly as they know about each other understand each other let Raghav encourage Kalpana to fulfill her dreams.

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laavanya4u

@laavanya4u

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#216

Why do you want suggestions now???.

As u have given an appropriate title,"ARRANGED MARRIAGE".

Though Raghav and Kalpi are married,they don't understand so well,their likes and dislikes are different.And Raghav had spent most of the time being alone and stubborn too.And Kalpi is more chirpy but not so open due to her mother.

For me,marriage is not only abt physical relationships but should be an union of two totally different soulls.Pls proceed the FF in such a way that Kalpi removes the loneliness from Raghav's life and make him more sensible,lively and fun loving guy.Whereas Raghav should try to remove her troubled childhood memories and make smile always.Also instead of portraying as a home maker,let her achieve her own success on her own merits by Raghav on her side.

Pls include the nok jhoks between them and how they convince each other.And also how Ragna is an ideal parent to their child.

BASICALLY RAGNA SHOULD STAY TOGETHER HAPPILY,CHEERFULLY,SUCCESSFULLY IN THEIR WORLDS .

I am very very confident abt your thoughts,the style of writing.You have started this Ff having a clear cut idea.So don't worry.have a chill pill and start giving good updates to us that too soon and continuously.

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ovee

@ovee

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#217

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sampa79

@sampa79

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#218

Read all part in one shot

Superb update

Update soon next part

Eagerly waiting for next update and do PM once update

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laavanya4u

@laavanya4u

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#219

We have given ur views and suggestions,then too u haven't updated as yet.

Have confidence in urself,take the name of Lord and start updating.We have read abt Ragna's love and then marriage.

Urs is a very unique one.After marriage,though the two being totally opposite to each other.how they accept each other and most importantly who starts loving the other first is worth reading.

Pls don't leave it at this stage.