FF..Is this love? Final part updated

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Abhita

@abhita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

I like how you write... my strong kalpi was superlative an this one is going to beat it...

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bhaironnath

@bhaironnath

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: abhita
I like how you write... my strong kalpi was superlative an this one is going to beat it...

Thanks a ton abhita!!

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Barunash

@Barunash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

I like this kalpi more wish cvs can learn some from this

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mishti058

@mishti058

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Yea...loved it...its hw u want potray kalpi...u rock 😛

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@HappySmiles

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

This is such a wonderful story! I like Maya & Kalpana's bonding.
Please continue soon! 😊

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Beautiful update
I love Maya and Kalpi bonding
It's a starting of a great friendship
I can't wait for Kalpi to get all the happiness she deserve

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Dee (Daisy)

@drdee142

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

That was amazing, this is how I wanna see Kalpi.

Strong standing up for herself and working towards her goals, I think she will achieve more without kamala's poisonous presence in her life.

And you are right Raghav gift of Maya's friendship is yet another gesture of his love.

And Pakhi still being selfish, self centered and delusional as usual, she & kamala deserve each other

Please do update soon

Dee

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bhaironnath

@bhaironnath

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

@ barunash ,meena ...Kalpi will always be the strongest character for me. i am in love with her and cannot bear any taint on her. so in all my stories ,she will be strong ,all white with no black spots at all. Difficult to believe ,but that is a reflection of my love for her

@ pookhi,natasha...Always felt that Kalpi lost out on friends to turn to in times of trouble,hence brought in Maya and Sammy.

@ drdee...am unable to sympathise with Paaki so will probably never apint her in a good light

To all of you thanks once again for your comments

Am updating the next part hope you like it as well

Sorry that it is a short one

Will do a better one as soon as I find the time

Edited by bhaironnath - 11 years ago

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bhaironnath

@bhaironnath

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Part 4

To the outside world,Kalpi was happy.She had a good job,a roof over her head and wonderful friends.Sammy was a frequent visitor to Maya's house.He genuinely liked Kalpi and had started regarding her as bhabhi a very long time ago.The two always made it a point to take her out,try to distract her...they were very careful not to mention Raghav in her presence.What started off initially as a favour to Raghav,now was a genuine friendship.For in Kalpi,they found a soulmate.They felt a oneness...they wanted to do everything possible to make her happy.Kalpi had also registered for her masters in business administration at Maya's insistence. She had told her that it would take her up the corporate ladder faster.

Raghav was happy that his friends had developed a fondness for Kalpi.He was not surprised. such was her nature. There were times these days,when he felt the two were more Kalpi's friends than his...yet he did not mind.Anything that would bring a small smile on her face,anything to erase the pain he had given her.

" she fools us to think she is happy,Raghav,"said Maya,"but deep down ,she still cries for you.She loves you very much" For unknown to Kalpi,Maya had seen her hugging Raghav's photo to her chest,the silent tears streaming down her cheeks,at times when she thought she was alone.

Kalpi was thinking of the happier days . How her dada never missed a chance to rile her, how her baba would hug her and proudly call her his rajkumari. It pained her that even they had spurned her. They never received her calls...Dada had used foul language , he had told her she was ungrateful to the best parents in the world.Kamala had never allowed her to speak to Vitthal. Everytime it was the same talk of how she had ruined poor Paaki's life...she had stopped trying to contact them. It only depressed her more

At the Singhania household,Paaki's confidence was waning.Even Kamala's words seemed empty now.It was three months now,but things had not changed.Raghav refused to acknowledge her presence and Gauri showed no sign of softening in her dealings with her.Neetu's constant phone calls that she demand a divorce was also irritating her.She grasped her mangalsutra tightly and told herself not to lose hope.Raghav was hers and hers only.Did not guruji predict that she would always get what she wanted.And she wanted Raghav.What Paakhi wanted she got.Was it love or obsession?