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Neha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Its awesome Di!
Raghav plan of scaring kalpi & reassure her worked; though for sometime!!
Love it!
But, I can't help complaining about length!
It finished as I started reading!
Update little longer, please Di!

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Megha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Yeh sab Raghav ka plan tha! O teri! 😲

Bechari Kalpi! 🥺

Go Raghav, apna pyaar pa le! 👏

AUR YEH TERE LIYE MERI SHONU! 🤗 I LOVE YOU! ❤️

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ShaNak_RagNa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

nice update shona

waiting for next part

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

well written..continue soon..😊

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Aggressive Raghav is full in action
I like how Kalpi push him away realizing he is married
But then I love Raghav reply to her question lol
Fabulous update

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Jinro Soju

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

i have started new story on RAGNA
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RAGNA IN SUPERNATURAL
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warning ** it will be a dark story **

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Pooja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

awesome update shona ji

moi love this raghav 😳

angry young man 😆

continue soon

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Jinro Soju

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

TEASER

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Kalpi- what the hell Raghav ask them to move I need to go now...

Raghav came near her and said "I already told you Kalpi you will not go away from me... For whom you are doing this your mom or Paakhi???? Stop being so immature..."

Kalpi- what is wrong with you Raghav go your wife must be waiting at home...

Raghav saw red and he shouted at her "that's it... she is not my wife... we are not married... the paper she signed was of property papers... and she is so dumb that she did not check it... when I said I love you to you from that time for me you are my wife... and as you know it was just for revenge..."

Kalpi was shocked as she got new piece of information... She was numb gathering each word what Raghav said...

Kalpi "you are lying right... Just for revenge you destroyed everything Raghav... I cant accept you... you need to accept Paakhi as wife... Forget me Raghav..."

she turned and started walking away from Raghav... she reached downstairs near Sammy was standing... She looked at him and shocked to find that he was standing pointing gun at her...

She took two steps back. Kalpi in meek voice said "Sammy sir... you..."

update after 17th 😉

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Jinro Soju

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

abbe ye to aadha chapter ho gaya 😲

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ArlequinAJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#120

res for teaser 😉

unreswa ..tere kehne par 🤣

amazing teaser jaani ... 😳 aaj hoga sach ka samna ...dumb pakhi bina dekhe sign kiya 🤣 pakka yeh kamla ki beti hai 🤣 ...jaan waiting for ur gugli update 😳

chal abhi update karde chapter shona 😳 ..aur aayinda wa pe dhamki mat de 😡

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