Success:Story on Kalpi[Rachana] last part on Pg 140 [30th july]

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: yadanu
beautiful story.👏

Thank u 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#962

Originally posted by: yadanu
beautiful story.👏

Thank u.😊

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vyshuu..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#963

Originally posted by: fairylover

Aww.. Thank u.. 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Chin2_n
Very beautiful updates⭐️

Thank u for the encouragement throughout the story.. I just hope I fulfilled ur expectations.

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Shyama

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part 35

Raghav nods in yes.. Tears are flowing from his eyes.. He has lost his love forever but he has realized his mistakes.. His heart wrenched on hearing that Kalpi doesn't love him but than he looks at himself and asked how could anyone love him.. He is the selfish arrogant and mean guy.. He vows to change himself and looks at the Kalpi for the last time.

Vish,

This part and the next one brought tears in my eyes..I dont know why, but i rarely let tears in my eyes even when am heartbroken, i try to control it well, but Raghav's pain and realization was beautifully done here and so is Roy's. I could picturise Ashish's expressions for those in RED .

It was so beautiful how you brought Amrita and Mushkaan to Raghav's life and the happiness brought to Roka's...
Thanks yaar for making this beautiful story..Love u loads 🤗

Shyama

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Shyamlu
Part 35
Raghav nods in yes.. Tears are flowing from his eyes.. He has lost his love forever but he has realized his mistakes.. His heart wrenched on hearing that Kalpi doesn't love him but than he looks at himself and asked how could anyone love him.. He is the selfish arrogant and mean guy.. He vows to change himself and looks at the Kalpi for the last time.

Vish,

This part and the next one brought tears in my eyes..I dont know why, but i rarely let tears in my eyes even when am heartbroken, i try to control it well, but Raghav's pain and realization was beautifully done here and so is Roy's. I could picturise Ashish's expressions for those in RED .

It was so beautiful how you brought Amrita and Mushkaan to Raghav's life and the happiness brought to Roka's...
Thanks yaar for making this beautiful story..Love u loads 🤗

Shyama

🤗 Love u Shyama.. Thank u for liking it. I am great I have friends like u who encourages me to write. Thanks for being with me throughout the story.. M glad due to it I got opportunity to talk to u. 😊

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Burns n Trolls

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Posted: 11 years ago

#967

I need to catch up alot..!! :P

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: shahsb_26
I need to catch up alot..!! :P

Take ur time but do not forget to give ur feedback.. As the story ended now n u where the one who was with me from the start.. in fct i thought of showing Kalpi as dancer just coz of u so credit goes to u as well.😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: fairylover

Take ur time but do not forget to give ur feedback.. As the story ended now n u where the one who was with me from the start.. in fct i thought of showing Kalpi as dancer just coz of u so credit goes to u as well.😊

I had read couple of chapters.. but couldn't comment.. now let me finish this whole thing on one fine day, probably tomorrow evening or on Monday, 😉😉

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