I am silent reader n admirer of your story even though i never gave my comments bcz i was poor in writing n also poor in expressing my feelings through writing...but i love ur writing alot reading ds story again n again...
One thing which attracted me in ur story is d way u presented n developed friendship between Roy,Payal n Kalpi...I respect both Love n Freindship alot n equally...but EMA made fun of these two n i dont want to talk ab8 it n i was reading ur story n feeling lyk kalpi n raghav char r ur own creation n not of EMA cvs...v r still in a society in which still most of d people feels there is somekind of affair or love whenever they c a boy nd a girl talks freely r helps each other...but a very few people understands there can b a relation called Friendship also b/t a boy n girl n notnly love... ...
I love how u described d friendship between Kalpi n Roy...but coming to d jodi i strongly want Raghav-Kalpi at d end bcz raghav eventhough made abig mistake(cant even call it as a mistake,its more than mistake) but his love fr kalpi is not fake n he loves nly Kalpi n he also realised d mistake he had done...Along with Kalpi,Raghav too suffered lots of pain...He too deserves love,hapiness n chance aftr his pain n realisation of his mistake...n I also want Raghav-Kalpi at end becz i want Kalpi to get best in both love n friendship through Raghav n Roy respectively ...so that both beautiful things called Love n Friendship can b justified equally ...i want Roy-Kalpi to b best friends forever,giving true meaning for friends n friendship...
Payal n Roy r d most loved char in ds stry...these all r my opinions nly...i also respect ur POV for RoKa...i will b happy if u give RoKa or RagNa at end as i trust ur writingskill...
As i said earlier,i was poor in exprssng my feelings thrgh writing,plzz dont take my opinions in wrong way n srry fr my 1st longgg comment...n hope u write more beautiful stories lyk this.