RagNa SS: Demons [Last Part, Page 41 updt Dec. 16th]

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: sweet_aditi
awesome update shona👏👏👏
loved ur writing skills.. u presented kalpi's pov very well
eagerly waiting 4 next part.. update next part asap😊

Thank you so much! Glad you liked things from her perspective. Working on Part 5 at the moment, so will update as soon as we're done with that =)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: incredible96
res fore part 4
unres

act that it was sooo long and you described each detail so well! could i plz request a pm for the next update as i am afraid i may miss it

Thank you! Don't worry, I will shoot you a PM when I update next part for sure =)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: eishe10
Amazing update!!! Loved it every of bit of it. Continue soon😃

Aww thank you! Glad you liked it =)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: shikha-aggarwal
Amazing update
continue soon😊

Thank you Shikha! Will do 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: mariee
Now that was simply a masterpiece !!
In all respects
👏
Loved each & every word of the update.

Aww Masterpiece? Thank you for that awesome compliment! =]

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: Anjinie
loved it

Thanks! Glad that you did =)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: priya_remix
Awesome! amzingly written!

Thank you so much! 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: lovelybubbly
Hi Shona,
Just found ur SS. How did i miss it???? 😕
Thank you Shona for writing wonderful SS.
The story is amazingly beautiful and the writing even more beautiful.It was real treat 2 me.
Eagerly waiting 4 your next update.

Keep posting such wonderful stories 😊
God bless,
Niharika :)

Hey Niharika!

First, thank you so much for reading and liking our SS.

I am really glad to receive such feedbacks because it gives us the encouragement to continue.

Will continue as soon as we're done with the part.

Loved the wonderful comment =)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...
Kalpi is a fighter, she went through hell since childhood but never give up
Raghav advice to her when she was a teenager was awesome
I like that she follow then and until now
Kalpi name for Raghav is hilarious lol
I like that she found a great friend in Sammy someone who is there for her
Hmm... Raghav trying to shut Kalpi out is awful
But now I bet he will realized his mistake and try to fixed it
Wonderful update, I love it

Kalpi is definitely shown to a very strong girl and I admire her for that!

We have always felt that their relationship is so special majorly because of the connection they shared since childhood. Glad that you liked the names. We thought to add some humorous bits in such a serious part! lol

Coming to Raghav, let's watch what he does now. Is this enough to give him a push to right direction? I so hope that lol. Thank you for the detailed and wonderful comment =]

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Posted: 11 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: smileysmile
I think Sammy's POV is missing. I am curious to know what is in his mind. Liked the flashbacks. Would really like to have Prem in the picture.
Thanks for the update.😊

Sammy is a very interesting character to play with. Only time will tell what he's up to =P haha

As for Prem, well I don't want to comment on that bit just yet.

Thanks for the comment and glad you liked it! =)

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