Kamla Ma, I love your Daughter. - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is beautiful!!!
m in tears
this lines touched my heart

"Raghav: (holds her hand in his hand) Tumhe kya nahi pata tha? Ki main tumse pyaar karta hoon? ki meri zindagi tumse shuru aur tum par hi khatam hoti hai? Ki apni life ki har subah aur har raat main tumhare saath spend karna chahta hoon? Kya laga tumhe? Ki main bhag gaya? Jo aadmi zindagi bhar rishto se bhagta raha, vo fir se bhagora ho gaya? Kalpana, I love you. Aur main ye tab tak kehta rahoonga jab tak tumhe vishwaas nahi ho jata that i really do love you. I want this. Ye commitment, ye rishta, ye sab kuch. main ye sab chahta hoon.. tumhare saath. Aur main tumhe chodkar kabhi nahi jaonga. kabhi nahi. I will love you forever."


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Kalpana lost it. She couldn't stop her hysteria. She started crying and couldn't believe the irony of her situation. She couldn't take it anymore... All her emotions took an overload and she gave in to those scars that were given to her by none other than her own Mother.. She fell on her knees and started sobbing. She knew this would hurt her kamla ma because pakhi would be hurt. She knew this was the end to everything. She could foresee everything.

Suddenly RAGHAV's arms her around her and hugging her. She turned her face to his chest and held on to him for support. He stood up and kalpana clutched him like he was her anchor. She knew if he didn't hold her, she will fall.Raghav: Kamla Ma? Main aapki beti se pyaar karta hoon. Aaapki beti jiska naam Kalpana Jadhav hai. "



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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
I liked kalpi's rxn. i m so afraid. this is wat is going to happen.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
wow... can we get some more??😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
well this is awesome...khas agar seria mein bhi aisa hota...i would be very hapy n that too infrt of pakhi...amazing...thk u..:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's very beautiful! LOVED IT TO THE CORE! continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Thank you sooo much guys for the amazing feedback.
Hahah a you guys want more?
Ah... okay that will take some time and a lot of brain storming cause I had only thoughr up till here lolol

But okay I will figure something out. And I will update asap.

Please do look forward to it :))
Edited by tvfiction - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Nicely written! 👍🏼
Please update as soon as possible. Would love to read more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Nicely written... I hope it happens this way... both paakhi n kamla get a slap on their faces with raghav's words n also raghav realises that kalpi is taken for granted by her mom... he needs to give her lot of love n b her pillar of strength
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Wow... Nice ff😳
Plz continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
That's wonderful, I wish it really happens this way
Dee
Edited by drdee142 - 11 years ago

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