RagNa FF ~ A Twisted Cinderella Story (To be continued..:) - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb update plss ..continue soon👍🏼
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Am so in love wid this FF... Plz update soon.. Ad please dnt forget to PM me...
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wowww...I just love it...too good...
getting goosebumps while reading it...too awesome...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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IMPORTANT NOTE

>Sammy is NOT Raghav's cousin or something like that, he's Raghav's childhood best friend and is just LIKE A BROTHER

>The mysterious woman, the Gajini as you call her, will enter the story for sure and she'll be playing an important part.

Kalpana has whole heartily accepted Raghav's love, so there will be no uuch-neech ka fasala between them!

Thanks
Bhavika
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85

Hhhmmm...so the 6th part is here! Well, as I have converted this into an FF, I would like to know, if you have some suggestions regarding the story, as in any kind of particular/specific sequence you want. I am thinking to start a different thread, titled, "My Wishlist". There you can drop your wishes regarding which scene between which characters do you want to happen, you can drop some suggestions too.


Here's the link(who said that I was still thinking) : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3965456#p103610380

P.S. I don't know, if I am breaking any forums rule by doing so. If I am, then please inform me about it, I'll do what will be the best. Thanks!

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Coming out of the hug, Raghav smirked, kind of teasingly and said, "Now now Miss Jadhav, get ready to face me. Now that you have confessed it all, I am going to make you mine, in all ways. Get ready Miss Kalpana Jadhav, you're soon going to become, Mrs. Kalpana Raghav Singhania."

"Ahaan..I am loving it!" shrieked Sammy, making Raghav chuckle and think, is Sammy really a guy, then why does he make girly sounds! *winks*

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Pyaar, ishq, mohobbat, love..ek aisa ehsaas, jo zindagi ko sirf sawarta hi nahi balki ulat-palat kar deta hai! Ab khud hi dekho, neend nahi aati hai, chain kho jaata hai...wait a second, thoda filmy ho gaya na? Uh-oh.

Kitna ajeeb hota hai na pyaar, do alag logon ko iss tarah mila deta hai ki koi fark reh hi nahi jaata. Sukoon bhi hai, par dil bekraar bhi hai. Dil dhadakta toh hai par dhadakne ki speed bohot fast ho jaati hai! Heart-attack aane ke chances bad jaate hain, doosron se, apni pyaar bhari baatein chupa chupa kar pet (stomach) ka dard badh jaata hai. Pyaar ke side-effects! Waise Kalpana is now experiencing another side-effect of love..Mujhe neend na aaye!

Kalpana turned here and there, trying to enjoy some sleep after the hectic holi but was only awarded with Raghav's images, whenever she closed her eyes, and this made her heart beat faster. Isse kehte hain, dil-o-dimaag par kabza karna. Admitting her defeat against her restlessness, Kalpana got out of the room and came outside in the lobby, enjoying the night's chill air.

"Ek sapna lag raha hai yeh sab! Bilkul princess stories jaisa! A beautiful Cinderella story!" sighed Kalpana, and opened her arms wide, taking in the air. Glancing around she saw, the most unexpected. Her eyes widened, she gasped and then tingles ran through her spine.

Well, there, at the Chawl entrance gate, was standing Raghav-the tease-Singhania, wearing a button-up white t-shirt, ripped jeans, his hair in a messy state, his eyes full of love and lips, showed off the teasing smirk.

"Kalpi tu bhi na! Pagal ho gayi hai, ab tak toh band aankhon se, unka sapna dekh rahi thhi, ab toh tu khuli aankhon se bhi...eehhh.." Kalpana said, shaking her head.

If I wrote, that Raghav was smirking earlier, he was now, grinning, in the same teasing way. God Kalpi, you really said that loud! Uff! Taking his phone out of his pocket, Raghav texted Kalpana, who was fortunately carrying her phone with her. The moment she got Raghav's message, she realized that Raghav is indeed here. But why he's here at midnight? Raghav baba, ky airaada hai aapka?

Gesturing Kalpana, to read the message, Raghav leaned against his car, and watched Kalpana read the message, with blush on her cheeks and shy smile on her lips. The message read, "Come downstairs!"

As if, possessed by something, Kalpana, made her way downstairs, holding Raghav's gaze. Once she reached in front of Raghav, she was pulled into his arms, tightly, in a passionate hug. Kalpana reciprocated the hug by wrapping her arms around his waist. Both of them had their eyes close.

"Tumhaare paas aane se khud ko rok nahi paya. I..uumm..saw the whole Sammy's movie of-course" said Raghav, who received Kalpana's light chuckle, encouraging him to go on.

"So you confessed! Finally!" he sighed and, "Jaan toh gaya hoon ki tum mujhse pyaar karti ho, phhir bhi ek baar poore hosh mein, yahi baat tumse sunna chahta hoon. Your behaviour hint that you love me, your eyes tell that you love me, your heartbeat prove that you love me but I want to hear these words coming straight from your heart to your lips. Say it, please!"

"I Love You Raghav" there she said that. Raghav just responded by, "I Love You too" but they didn't moved out of the hug, their eyes still close and both of them, listening to each others' heart beat.

After five minutes, exactly! "Waise, you really sing very well, I am impressed! Even your dance wasn't that bad!" giggled Kalpana, moving out of the hug, but she still held Raghav's hands in hers.

Blushing and smiling sheepishly, Raghav replied, "Woh bas..aise hi!" to which Kalpana giggled more, and reply, "Chaliye, ab ghar jaiye. De bohot ho gayi hai, mujhe bhi chalana chahiye."

"Kal milenge?" asked Raghav, to which Kalpana placed her hand on his left cheek and kiss his right one, "Kal Milenge!" she answered. Grinning out of happiness and love, they both parted and went towards their respective houses.

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"Sammy, uth na..arre! Office nahi jaana kya, uth abhi!" Raghav pulled Sammy's comforter off his face. Sammy just groaned and sat up after tolerating Raghav for 10 more minutes.

"Kya hua? Tujhe toh neend aati nahi hai, ulluon (owls) ki category ke jo ho tum! Mujhe bhi sone nahi dete. See, it's still dark outside!" said Sammy, looking out of the window, of his room.

"God Sammy! Subah ke 4 baj rahe hain. Office nahi jaana kya?" squeaked Raghav. Who's making girly sounds now?

Sammy's nostrils flared, he pushed Raghav down on the other side of bed and himself sat atop him. "You idiot, pyaar mein log itne bewakoog ho jaate hain, yeh mujhe pata nahi thha! Gadhe, subah ke 4 baje bhi koi office jaata hai kya? Day-time watchman bhi 10 baje aata hai, aurr tu hai ki..!" Sammy was dangerously close to Raghav, when the room's door opened and the servant came inside with few formal and few informal suits/shirts-jeans in his hand. The moment, the servant, Ram-Aasra spotted Sammy dangerously close and atop Raghav, the dresses fell from his hands and he gasped loudly before running away.

Both Raghav and Sammy looked confused until they noticed their positions and posture! Maa da ladla bigad gaya!

Both of them moved as fast as they could, Sammy went inside the washroom/bathroom, and Raghav went towards his own room. Gosh! What a morning.

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"Kalpi..uth jaa beta!" Kamla Maa said.

"Sone de na Aayi! Raat ko dhang se neend nahi aayi.." groaned Kalpana.

"Uth jaa beta, 8 baj gaye hain. Office nahi jaana kya? Raghav baba kya sochenge tere bare mein?" chided Kamla Maa.

"Raghav.." Kalpana's eyes snapped open and she smiled widely. She kissed Kamla Maa on her cheek and went inside bathroom to get ready for office and for Raghav Singhania.

"Kya baat hai, aaj toh madam par saj-dhaj ke office jaa rahi hai?" teased Pakhya, seeing Kalpi dressed up.

"Kyon pareshaan kar raha hai meri rajkumaari ko!" Vitthal hit Pakhya's head lightly. Kalpana giggled and Kamla Maa, shook her head.

"Aayi, tunne mera tiffin pack kar diya na!" asked Kalpana.

"Haan..yeh le, aurr.." Kamla Maa handed Kalpana, her tiffin and before Kamla Maa, could say something, Kalpana ran outside, downstairs.

"Yeh ladki bhi na, itni kya jaldi hai office jaane ki?" Kamla Maa slapped her forehead, and both, Vitthal and Pakhya just shrugged.

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This is just the start, pyaar inse kya kya karwata hai, yeh dekhna baaki hai! Kalpana aurr Raghav ki zindagi mein badlaav to aaya hai, but phhir bhi sab kuch pehle jaise hi lag raha hai. Pyaar karna mushkil nahi, but pyaar mein jo mushkilen aati hain, unka kya? Agar bhool gaye ho, toh ab yaad kar lo, Paakhi bhi karti hai Raghav se pyaar, jiska kar chuki hai, woh bohot pehle izhaar. Kya Paakhi, Kalpana aurr Raghav ke rishte ko accept kar payegi?

Edited by its-bk - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
awesome dear.. Love it.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
pls update soon:) U write so well:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Awesome update dear, do continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
Awww so cute
Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanx for the PM Bhavika. I loved the chapter, especially Raghav-Sammy part 🤣 . Totally hilarious. Update the next part soon and do PM me.

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