RAGNA SS:kalpana..YOU ARE MY LIFE..(~Updated...PART:8 on 9/7/14 @ 23)

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Hello...I haven't written anything else in my life except exams
so plz don't mind if its nonsense...but I cant wait this weekend. After the precap ..its killing my mind..day n night m thinking ki what will happen n Monday..so..i have been imagining so many things..so I just want to pen all those thoughts...hope u like it...
criticism accepted...u can throw tomatoes eggs..Flowers also..holi ka moka hai..Colors too

So here is my os..

PART 1:AT THE CHAWL:

kalpi is running behind pakya with the stick...pakya smartly takes that from her while she was searching 4 him ..

pakya :hey kalpi...tum mujhe marne ki koshish kar rahe hona...

kalpi:then y r u teasing me dada

pakya :aisehi kalpi..tujhe pata hai..aaj mujhe ek mobile shop me..training our job ki bath hui..mein bahut kush hoon..

kalpi: wahhh dada...congrats...kalpi hugs pakya..

raghav is sitting in his car outside the chawl..he was watching all this...n happy to see that his angel is smiling and surprised to see her mischievous behavior with pakya..

actually he called the driver to park the car near the chawl..n then he went in the bus with kalpi..raghav cudnt even want to stand a sec..with out kalpi around...but its not safe for being long time if any one observe this na..then it will be a big problem..coz of this he unwillingly starts his car..and looks at his kalpi for one more time...she is still smiling...he will go back 2 his house..

kalpi:dada aayi kaha hai..dikhayi nahi de raha hai..

pakya:ha kalpi..aayi kuch kam se bahar gaye hai..aaj tumko khana pakana padega

kalpi:teeke me karlungi..she will keep the bag on the table..and take the heart box..in her hand..and thinks about raghavs words about it..is dil ki sahi jaga tumhare pas hai...she kisses the box..and was about to keep it safely pakya comes again

pakya:kya hai wo kalpi..mujhe dikhado na..

kalpi:kuch nahi dada..wo holi ka gift hai..aaj office ke lunch me diya hai...pakya opens it and was about apply it on kalpi..she runs away..she will come back 2 the bappa temple..finally pakya applies colour on her cheek. ..that colour is simply look like a blush on her cheek..she was looking even more beautiful .simultaneously some one in the temple rings the ganti..kalpi will be like is this bappa sign?

She will go inside the house smilingly ..then her phone rings ...raghav is calling her..she smilingly lift the call...on the other side raghav is very nervous


IF U LIKE IT I WILL CONTINUE..I KNOW SO MUCH PAKYA KALPI..IS THERE..LATER THERE WILL BE ONLY RAGNA...

part 2:updated in page 2https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-mutthi-aasmaan/3952211/ragna-ss-kalpana-you-are-my-life-updated-part-8-on-9-7-14-23?pn=2

part 3:updated in page 4https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-mutthi-aasmaan/3952211/ragna-ss-kalpana-you-are-my-life-updated-part-8-on-9-7-14-23?pn=4

part4:updated in page 7https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-mutthi-aasmaan/3952211/ragna-ss-kalpana-you-are-my-life-updated-part-8-on-9-7-14-23?pn=7

part5:updated in page 9https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-mutthi-aasmaan/3952211/ragna-ss-kalpana-you-are-my-life-updated-part-8-on-9-7-14-23?pn=9

part 6:updated in page 14https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/106729411

part 7:updated in page 17https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/108791629

Part 8:updated in page 23https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/109815220

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OmkaraKiParvati thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Continue Saru. Its interesting. Continue and update the next part soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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really its gud pls do continue..even im so restless fr Monday till then U can write dis as vr really crazy bout ragna!:)
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It iz awesum...
w8ting 2 read d next part plz continue... :)
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Plz do continue soon I really loved it
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Very Nice 👍🏼
Please continue soon
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PART 2:

kalpi:hi sir...u reachnd home safely na...aapko..kuch taklif nahi hua na?
raghav:yeah kalpi..m ok..i reached safely
kalpi:thank god sir..
raghav:acha suno kalpi..actually I wanted to ask u something
kalpi: blushes n says kya sir?

Raghav:ha that kalpi..tht nite maine jo kuch bhi kaha vo sach tha..maine kud ko nahi rok paya..Na jane kab kaise hua..lekin har pal mein tumko aapna pas dekna chahta hoon...I love u kalpi...

Kalpi:she is blushing smiling and mesmarised to listen all this..in the bottom of her heart she also want to tell him that she loves him so much..but she couldn't..

Kamala ma enters the house..she looks all tensed...kalpi saw her and cuts the call..

Raghav goes to kalpana seat in the office and sits there..n watch all the things in her cabin mesmarisingly..he opens the draw surprised to see the hankerchief ..he realizes she was keeping it safe..coz of that incident..that menas.she has also feelings for me for sure..but not admitting..bcoz of the differences..

Kalpi says to kamla that aayi mujhe abi mandir jane ka man kar raha hai..aaj dada ko naukri ka moka mil gaya na..mujhe bappa se thank u kehana hai..kamala says acha teek hai beta tum jao...khana me pakhathi hoon..chal .. Kalpi takes bath .and changes her dress she will wear a blue Patiala and white top and goes to temple..(actually she wants to go to that bench..and enjoy some time alone..and wanna think about raghavs proposal...)

Kalpi will reach the temple..she is looks at the bench..she is surprised to see.that..raghav is sitiing there alone..she goes running there..and ask raghav..

Kalpi:sir aap yahan..kya hua sir?u r fine na?

Raghav:wo actually...I knw that u will come here..isliye..

Kalpi:she is actually very impressed and touched by his actions..she simply smiles
raghav:ha kalpi..tell me what is your answer?

Kalpi: sir pehle hum darshan karlete hein..baad me bath karenge...

Raghav :oh ok...he is very impatient but what to do?he cant so no..

raghav and kalpi enters the temple

then kalpi will be praying to bappa..raghav was praying to kalpi..i mean..looking at her thinking that..yes kaho na..plz...
then pandit ji..gives teertham..kalpi takes it..raghav doesn't know how to take it...kalpi will make him drink it...again mesamrised both.share a eyelock ..they will take prasadam...
they will sit in the bench near the temple...

raghav:ab batao..please I cant wait any more kalpi
kalpi:sir ye hai ki...maine aapse pehle bhi keh chuki hoon..we are two diff poles... raghav:but I also..proved u that we are not all the different..i don't want all this..just tell me..yes or no..
kalpi:sir but I am a normal assistant and u r the boss..people will think that I did this for your money
raghav:I don't care about what others think...tell me ur opinion kalpi

kalpi:sir I should think about my aayi baba also na...I should tell them rite first
raghav: first tell me..ur feelings then its my duty to convince evry one
kalpi:sir what are u talking about?

Raghav: what else our marriage?
kalpi:no sir..shadi is too far..m talking about our love
raghav:oho ..our love..ohk that menas u love me...he asks her teasingly
kalpi:no sir..meine aisa kab kaha...she blushes
raghav:so u don't love me...u hate me rite..yeah I scolded u many times na..
kalpi:no sir..i haven't taken them seriously..
raghav:then tell something kalpi
kalpi:sir I like u..i really like u..but there are many things which will not allow us to take another step forward..so pls understand..n I still cant believe that u love me

Raghav:it may take only few sec 2 tell u that I love u...but it will take my whole life to prove that..n I m ready 2 do that..

Kalpi:sir..she cant control her feelings

Raghav:in the same way it will only take u secs to say no...ut to digest it I need another life..plz mana mat karna..i know u love me..
kalpi: there are tears in kalpis eyes..she never expected in her life ki some one in her life love her this much..still she controlled and said in a low voice..

I will answer this question later sir.abhi mujhe late ho raha hai..i nee dto go.warna aayi meri chinta karti hai

Raghav:same excuse..tumko kuch bahana chahiye na..teeke..take ur own time..but...be with me for sure..always..he smiles

Kalpi smiles..raghav again offer lift..she denies..kalpi says I will go in auto sir..raghav says ok then I will also come with u in auto...I will drop u der..its not safe this time 2 go alone...sir but u hate autos na...but I love u rite..its ok for me.. They both will get into an auto..both looks at each other and smiles..



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful storu loved it
Naughty Raghav blushing Kalpi awesome :)))
plz keep writing more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: blackdollphin

Beautiful storu loved it
Naughty Raghav blushing Kalpi awesome :)))
plz keep writing more


thanku dear..m glad that u liked it..this is the first time m writing somethng..so m jus writing whatever comes to mind..
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wow dear beautiful 👏olz continue soon

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