|EHMMBH|Bhawara Mann|VIRMAN FF||part 15 sneak peek||pg 64 - Page 3

niceee concepttt yr n tx 4 pm me

Its really interesting... OMG!! Virat said just tht he loves maya and all... Is there something more behind th curtains ?? Cnt soon and a long one... tada...

Hey, i m nt in ur pm list dear but ur wrk really amez me... Awsm chapter !!!!!! Luv ur idea ..!. Its diffrnt n smthng new ...intrsting !!!!!!! Luv ur veiw n qutations !!!!! Add me yaar,in ur buddy list :::)))

nice update..

awesome start

awesome concept
loved the update
felt bad for manvi
maybe she took a right decision by let go virat
like this he might know his mistake
waiting for next update
do pm me plz

hi prathe😊
both of ur stories is awesome. loved it & you are a very good write👏r.waiting for ur next update😊😊😊😊😊.

Hey its amazing. ...virat left her for maya 😡
Plz update soon

Originally posted by: Ridzi123

nice update..

i loved how to descried manvis thoughts through one song..

really hatss off for it

and yaa..that very true..and in a relationship its necessary for the 2 to show the right direction if anyone of them goes off path

will be waiting for the naxt part of the story

and somewhere i liked manvis decision of letting go her love for Virats happiness

thats true love

selfless and just wants others happiness

but at the same time she should have tried to know the reason behind it

cause she loves virat from teh dpth of her heart

and who knows what maya feels for virat..

so its also important for manvi to know maya's nature well..

and virat should also judge between the two..and think abt his own decision

continue soon

thanks a lot for u r comments dear and must say u are good reader dear...this is first time am writing stories...so am just happy that u all are liking it...and yes dear u are always welcome to give suggestion and also all sort of criticism dear...i wud never feel bad...

Originally posted by: tinni04

hi prathe😊
both of ur stories is awesome. loved it & you are a very good write👏r.waiting for ur next update😊.

thanks a lot dear...will try to update soon too