virman os __ Zindagi Ruswaa Kar Chali... part 3 (ii) updated pg 22

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FlowerHater

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

it was really sweet dear!Virat really has a heart of gold his heart started to beat for manvi from the time she left but 4 his bro he suppressed his feeling nd never let it turn into love nd even now he is only giving without any expectation and even can understand maanvi's dilemma!!! continue next part soon!!!

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naina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

18 likes n 3 comments...

Cmon u can atleast give a one liner comment guys...

It would just make me feel good...

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nagaraju

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

its just awesome naina, really sad how virat still waiting for manvi love, and how kushal died in accident...and the pain virat and manvi facing now u clearly described it, really felt bad for them...manvi is also in love with virat, and virat also, but they not telling each other, so i know u going to bring something that time they reveal...hats of to u naina...u r a wonderful writer i have ever seen

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

amazing update

loved their pov

virat is so sweet and caring

plz cont soon

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nrithyao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

awesome again
loved the bond btw virat & kunal

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Jannat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

AWESOME NAINA 👏 😊 😃 LOVED IT❤️ 🤗 KEER ROCKING...ITS A TREART TO READ UR PIECE OE WORK👏

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nahaananya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

dis is an awsum piece of writing naina...
u hav bridged between the past and present so well
d dilemma both r having regarding der feelings wer too well written
i loved how virat is taking care of kunal... virat... how balanced as a person he is ...
i really respect virat a lot here
he is d mature one here ...manvi is mature too... but still women needs a far more deal to settle in life completely and contently ... she is d bridge between every relationshp... i really feel her pain... and virat gave evrything in dis relationshp he cud... without ne xpetations...
but manvi is still stuck up wd her dilemma... its natural fr women...
ladkiyo ke liye rishta jodna aasan hoti hai lekin rishta todna utna aasan nahi ...
hats off nain... i really hope god bless u as a writter and many more
stay fit ... and b happy ...
my eyes r really watery today... dont knw ... r they mere tears , emotions, respect for u ... or else...
love take care
anne

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roshreb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

awesome update...beautifully written..u have portrayed their turmoil perfectly..manvi is not able to let go of her past..waiting for her to get that sign so as she can embrace her present.. virat deserves to be loved back too...thanks for the pm

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kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

sorry yaar naina just got kinda buzzi couldnt comment ...

this one sacchi is making me hell confused on what to comment ...there is no negative character its just that both virman are caught up in the situations and past...even though they wanna move ahead but the past is not letting them ...and another game of time with virat he started falling for the girl who loved him exactly wen she got over him started falling for his bro and for his bro he could just do anything...
virat's relation with both kushal and kunal was tooo good specially the possessiveness and etreme love and care for kunal just coz he found mini kushal in him also coz he was bought up by him like his own son ...loved their bonding its special 😃
waiting for the next update ..make it soon plzzz 😃

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.Yamin.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

i m sorry i m late to comment !!! my lappy was crushed :(
This is beautifully written Nainuu !!!! awesomely portrayed of emotions !! :D i really loved every bit of it !!!! manvi pov virat pov very well written !!!!⭐️⭐️ i really wish manvi gave a chance to virat !!!! i could feel virat n main pain !!!! it was superb Nianuu !!! BRILLIANT !!! loved it !!! ❤️
the concept is really amazing !!!
looking forward for next update !!! will be waiting !! continue soon Nianuu if possible !!! :)🤗

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