VM ff -To be loved by you (Ch23/pg129)

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floral

@floral

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

wow ayesha u are back i would love to read ur updates. it was an awesome update i just loved it to the core of my heart plzzz do continue soon and plzzz pm me when u update dear😊😊

Edited by kusharberry - 12 years ago

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Shivani Rajput

@ShivRajput

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Omg awesome update.. Crush or I can she love him frm last 4-5 years.. Awww its Virat who yelled at her hai na.. I cant even ask for update for next 10 days 😔 u made it clear already bt still continue soon.. cant wait.. loved it.. U rock girl..!!!

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

OMG Ayesha
welcome back after a long time. 😊
and what a come back with new FF
Just superb
so we can a chance to again read ur piece of writting
now come to the update
it was bang dear, loved it Ayesha
eagerly waiting 4 next part
try to update soon
loads of love❤️

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

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this is called back with a bang...undoubtedly its and awesome start view and interest capturing start you have given to this work of yours /...👍🏼
manvi having crush or love watever we call it on this guy from 5 long years and that too love at first sight woww that sounds dreamy and cute types tooo just to get a glimpse of him daily so that her day goes good no expectations from him no demands just one look at him and everything goes perfect for her she is even ready to bear her bestie pooh with whum she shares the best relationship can do anything for her besties from childhood she is ready to bear her all long lectures ...this i feel is love...
and how she wanted atleast one person to just understand her situation her listen to her convo abt him we all do want sumone as such besides us and today her frend did that and she felt kinda relief...😃

and that guy am guessing its the same guy whum she has crush on...waiting for his reaction so that we can see wat he feels ..😉
waiting for the update 😊

Edited by kulsum_virman - 12 years ago

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Welcome back ayesha...i missed u alot

concept the trully fab...manvis fall head over heal in her teenage crush...n i m sure that man is non other than our handsome hunk Virat...but i think he is quite rude n arrogent n moreover not aware abt the manvis feeling...its like '' mere samne wali khidki me ek chand ka tukda rehta he''...love shuv with padosi ha...i like it...bcs i even hv a crush on my neighbor...lolzzz...but that the only crush ha...bcs i m in love with a HULK...lolzzz...i knw its sounds crazy...but he is so handsome...rofl

any ways cont soon...as i cant wait after the 1st chappi...cont asap

Edited by rasp_berry - 12 years ago

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mridula

@-Minion-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

concept was nice and different.manvi love someone from 5 years.the man must be virat.u stop in a wrong point.waiting for the next.

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Ayesha I am so so glad that you are back with a new Virman FF!! 😃 🤗 'Beyond Control' is one of my favourite FFs.. Excited to read your new story 😃.. Superb start!! 👍🏼Manvi is in love with a guy from her neighbourhood! And it was love at first sight for her.. I hope that guy is none other than Virat! 😳 Pooh is a nice friend.. Really eager to know about the man who came out of the car.. Will be waiting for the next part.. Please do pm me.. Take care 😊