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Introduction...
This is a different type of story fully on Virat's Pov. Its basically a dairy written by Virat and dedicated to his love of life i.e. Music, dance, party, masti, frndz and last but not the least . . . Manvi. How they meet, how they come close, and how they apart. And if fortune shines upon them they will be reunited again...




Frndzz its my new OS Please tell me whether I shud continue it or not..
Please Read and lev ur precious comments...

Thank you 😊

Contents :-
Story Banner - - - page2
Chap 1 - - -page2
Chap 2 - - -
Chap 3 - - -
Chap 4 - - -
Chap 5 - - -


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice
update soon
love ur story
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Hey.. Nice..Waiting for the update..!
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waitin update soon u r story
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hey plz continue and do pm me
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Time For banner :)


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---1---

Probably it's not Love


I am in third year now...Studying law as my family wanted. But I have something else in my mind. Music is my Life.

Today is the first day of my 3rd year... The same collage... The same friends... But newcommers are the ones that actually excite me...

So far I have meet hundreds of girls but none of them...did that to me. Please dont take it in anather way. Well I m still a virgin to be very honest. But I had never experienced Love. All my girlfriends so far are not that type, Infact they are much more sophisticated. Hard to handle.

Ok so where was I... in my collage.. It was The first day but unfortunately everything was just the same... No such interesting changes so far. So I headed towards my class-room.

And then it happened...

I meet her... She was new.. Probably in first Year. And I saw her. Well I wasnt falling in love or felt anything for her. What attracted me the most is her dressing style and her way of talking. And she was...

While every girl in college prefers jeans and mini skirt, she was in a salwar or whatever the girls name it. It was yellow-red combo and probably the girl beside her was wearing jeans, that I dont remember. She was busy with her talks and it was an one-sided conversation. The girl herself was taking the full credit of wasting all her energy through her non-stop bak-bak...

Suddenly I forgot where my steps were taking me to... and then...

Ouch

Oh it was Nitin, my classmate. And we hit each other.

Nitin – Kya yaar larki k chakkar me kya hosh kho baitha hai??

Me – What?

Nitin – usko dekh raha tha? (Pointing to that girl)

Me – Are nehi yaar wo toh bas aise hi...

Nitin – Ha ha dekha maine.. Kaise ghur ghur ke dekh raha tha tu. Waise aaj to tera record tut hi gaya.. Abhi tak to sirf larkiya hi tujhe ghur ke dekhti thi par aaj to. . .

Me – Kya bakwas kar raha hai tu! Dekhi us larki ko.. I mean is jamane me sab discount dena pasand karte hai.. I mean larkiya. Or wo hai hai ki salwar pehenke ghumti hai.. She's not my type..

Nitin – Wohi toh ek problem hai..Abhi tak hum yeh nehi jan paye ki tere type ki hai kon!!

Me – hah. Chal bohot mazak ho gaya abhi k lie class me entry marte hai nehi to Pandey sir humhe kahi or entry karwa denge..

Both of us headed towards the classroom.

Well Nitin is one of those friends among our group who understands the inside of me. Thats why he is my closest buddy. Apart from him there are 4 more boys in our group excluding me. Names will be revealed slowly.

Class started and after that the whole day was normal. Nothing much happened. I didnt get to see that girl anymore on that day.

Next day I didnt came to college as I had promised taani that I will visit her that day. Well Taani is also my best friend, the only difference between Taani and nitin is Taani is a girl. We are childhood friends and Taani is a year older than me. She belongs to a very conservative family. Though she was brilliant in studies but next week she is getting married according to her parent's choice. After marriage she will continue her studies as per told by her sasural-wale. So today she is giving a party and I promised her that at any cost I will be present there..

I was already late... It was already 11.30 AM.

My phone rang...

'here are you????' aani literally shouted over the phone.

Me – Taani sun na I m just leaving. Bas adhe ghante me phhoch jaung..

Taani – Dumbo!!! Humesha late hi karta hai tu.. Kabhi v time pe nehi aa sakta tu. Thik hai car dhere se or dekh ke chalana..

Tinggg...

Dressed in black Ts with white jacket and blue denims, around 1 PM I reached Taani's house.

Her house was full of people. I was not able to find her. Then someone from behind patted me hard. I turned around and there she was Taani.

Tanni – 1 baja dia ane mei... chorungi nehi mai tujhe.. Sab log aa gaye hai bas ek tu hai ki ab aa raha hai. Aane ki kya zaarurat thi??

Me – Are yaar ab chilla mat mujh pe. Waise hi aaj college ka 2nd day tha or mai absent karke yaha aaya hu sirf tere lie. I wish you a happy life ahead.

I gave her the gift that I had brought for her. And hugged her.

She then took me to a big room and started to introduce me to them and vice-versa.

The party started... Everyone was enjoying.. And I . . . I was busy noticing girls. Nothing left to do. Suddenly a girl came towards me with a drink in her hand and sat beside me.

Hey I am Sonam.

Oh that's great. I have an aunt whose name is also Sonam. (I mocked)

The girl was wearing a sleeveless top and short skirt. But she was overloaded with makeup on her face which ultimately landed her up in looking like a churdhail.

That so funny. Wanna rock the dance floor with me?

Sorry but I dont dance with auntyjis.

I got up from there and took another seat. Beside Taani.

Me – Taani tere friends kitne chipku hai yaar.

Taani – Kyu?? Ab kisne line mar dia tere upar?

Me – are wo larki hai hai na..waha..

Taan – Oh she is Sonam.

Me – haa jo v wo..kitna..matlab.

Taani – Samajh gayi. Dekh Virat is party me bohot sare tarah tarah ke larkiya milenge tujhe. Agar pasand aaya to pata le.

Me – Kya pagal ho gayi hai kya tu???? Kya bevkuf wali bate kar rahi hai..

Taani – Are yaar I m serious. Ab tera ye jo single status wo chor de. Its high time that u should choose...

Suddenly The music began...the lights were switched off...and there was a single spot of light that also spoted on a girl. She was wearing a saari orange coloured. And I could see only her backside which was bare with a single strip of her blouse. And she was looking soo hot.

Taani said something which I could not heard and then she took me to the front..

Woh Manvi rock it baby..the stage is yours.. Taani screamed.

I look at Taani and probably I could guess her name was Manvi. But she was busy shaking her hands and feet with the rhythm. So I focused my eyes on the girl only.

Then the girl turned around...And for that moment I was...totally blank...My mouths were wide open with great astonishment..I could'nt believe my own eyes.

She was SHE. I mean that same girl wearing salwar in first day of college. Now one thing strike my head again.. What is she doing here??? No I have to go and find this out. Soon I rushed towards Taani..

Me – Hey Taani sunna.

Taani – just enjoy the music and dance. (She was nodding her head)

Me – Who is She?

Taani – Manvi!

Me – Maaanvi.. kon?

Taani suddenly stopped dancing and facing towards me gave a weird expression. She probably sensed what was going in my mind.

Me – Kya??

Taani – Party k bad bat kare is bare me?

Me – Taani dekh...tu na bilkul galat soch rahi hai...mai to sirf pooch raha tha...Taani sun tooo...

She already left.

Me – kya yaar maine aisa kya puch dia..Ajeeb hai.

When I again looked back at her dance was done. Everyone gathered around them. I could hear the praises that they were giving her and the applauses as well. I thought whether I should approach her or not. When I was fixed in this dilemma she was heading towards Taani. Taani was standing right beside me.

Taani – Mannu U were looking sooperbb..

Manvi – thankkkuuu

And then both of them hugged. OMG I have never seen sooo pyar between two girls before.

Manvi – See I kept my promise. Now I have to leave re.

Taani – Ab kya karu I toh cant force you na..

Manvi – Dont worry ya mai rat ko milti hu na.. bbyee

And they hugged again. And I just stood there. This was the first time I have not interacted with a girl who is very much on my mind. I dont know why but it stuck me hard on my head. Why??? I was'nt in love... Or was I? But she is not my type.. When I first saw her She was obviously noy my type but today... She was...hot. But then why didn't I flirt with her...like I used to do before. After that I just left having ate the food. I didn't even bid Taani good-bye. Probably because I was a-lot confused inside.

Edited by Nishal_mOoN - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow superb banner i loved now plzzz update and do pm me iam dying to read it okay😆😆
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the concept sounds goood and the banner well done with it .👍🏼 was trying to get a hint of the story from it ...
waiting for the update pls try and make it fast 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice banner
continue soon
thanks for pm
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