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nandini menon

@MandyTheBlogger

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: athniamanvi
outstanding concept dear.. very beautifully written... i liked the last scene very much.. pls continue it and pm me !!

you 'll have a lot more if u want me to continue !!! 😃

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Ankita

@-ineffable-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

that was just wonderful... 👏👏 such a long part just loved it ❤️ both wrote the same letter too wohaa what a co-incidence 😃
that tokri wala part was hillarious 😆🤣

and virat not letting her enter the train hahaha 😆

want to read more of it so update asap 😃

and pm me too 😊

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Polo_s

@Polo_s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

This was nice. Plz update next part.

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Aastha

@..BiLlY..

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Aweumm 😛
Loved the concept..
Update soon 👍🏼

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nandini menon

@MandyTheBlogger

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Ankzmishra
that was just wonderful... 👏👏 such a long part just loved it ❤️ both wrote the same letter too wohaa what a co-incidence 😃
that tokri wala part was hillarious 😆🤣

and virat not letting her enter the train hahaha 😆

want to read more of it so update asap 😃

and pm me too 😊

phele add me as buddy...

and thank u for liking my work...

😃😃