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itsfate thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
congrates for 2nd thread
awesome update
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Congrats for the second thread...awesome update...eagerly waiting to know what happens next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
congrats for the 2nd thread
awesome update
lots of questions towards the end
cant wait for the next part
please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
OH MY GODDD!!!!
Unbelievable!!!!!!!!! wat really happened in a split of a second????
i dont know where to start...
dis is so amazing, thrilling, totally unbelievable!!
i mean i expected this, not exactly this,, but expected something fishy to cropin in this update,, but wen i was reading the first few parts, i totally forgot it & was expecting the couple to spend their time peacefully,,, but my goodness!!! never did i expect meredith to show up & also in such a state...
wat the hell are u planning dii???
owkaii,,, i'll go in a flow & get back to this point later, stay tuned..

VIRAT,,, he is... i dont know wat he is... difficult to describe him,,, why is he so perfect???
he's adorable, loving, smart, handsome, full of care, full of life, romantic, ADDICTED TO ONE & ONLY MANNU... he shud be fuming in anger & bursting at manvi for getting along in auction vout a word with him,, but this man,, ofcoz he wudnt leave her to dance with anyothr guy, but after winning the auction, he didnt show is anger on mannu, but is complementing "You looked lovely there baby. I just couldn't stop looking at you." wow!!! such a sweetheart,, lucky manvi.. any girl wud die to get him, gud he's imaginery..
U must be given appalauds, kisses, hugs & awards for designing his character.. a big SALUTE for u dii..
girls dream of their Prince Charming,, but now I'll tell u Virat of Addicted is THE MAN!!! his avatar as a lover, a husband & as a father is pitch PERFECT!!! i can justify this...
''We hear someone from behind us. I immediately feel Virat's hand around my waist, pulling me closer.''
boy he's so protective & possessive,, mannu shud be melting in his grab at the moment.. every girl vl love such a possessiveness from her love of her life,, here he is, embracing manvi as immediately as possible like acting on a reflex action... he is perfect!!
"Why would a winner take offense?" Virat replies with equal arrogance, smirking right back at him.
can u see him??? he's smart... his smirk, his anger, his possessiveness, clinge of sarcasm, mock, & virat, his character is just delivered thru this single dialogue...he's an angry young man now.. drool over!!
"She has actually taken art to a whole new level - for your information - she has been busy working on one of the most beautiful and magical collages there is - our small little family with our beautiful twins." Virat kisses my hair lovingly.
really its such a sweet thing to say,, dats so magical, love filled, warmth filled... i dont know from where did u pick up this lines or rather these lines cropped into ur brain,, dat explanation is heavenly,, once again she wud melt..
"..And more so tonight, because I just paid a truck load of money for this dance. So I want my every penny back."
diii... dats dreamy... for the first time im admiring a seductive dialogue??? im not a person who melt in such dialogues & moments, rather i quickly read dem & find dem pretty bore (many wud find me crazy) but its an exception in ur updates,, i go for emotions & love, romance with love is appreciable, but romance with lust, i feel uncomfortable, but u make such dialogues & situations at places where necessary & it carries its own justice.. dey are so matching the situation & perfect.. i really adore this quality of urs.. u know where to put what & how to put that same what..

MANVI,,, as the story is from her perspective, she is easily winning alot of hearts.. her thoughts are mindblowing, different & unique..
''I think I need a chair, I need to sit down.''
hilarious, she knows his husband is going to go on in auction to get her from Chris,, wait, is he the same person with whom mannu worked on her b'day at college time??? let me recall,, oh yeah!!! so dere u go again u proved urself, the characters u bring in has their own role..
from meredith, karan, blanco & now him... U never Forget!!!
'No!! You DO NOT want to mess with my husband!'
look at her, she's so cute!!!! adorable!!! i can see her red cheeks.. i cud picturise the scene,, epic!!
''I want to yell - Behave Virat! but he let go of the auction thing and I am willing to let go of this shameless behavior of his.''
she is a sweeet heart!!! she is helpless isnt she?
''Do I really want to push this? Yes I do!''
she is equally a 'yeah i can fight back' type.. she wants to let go things as she did a mistake but she also has something called limits ryt, she's proving it here..
''I am not a wife, not a mother - I am only and only a lover, his lover - and he mine.''
she often comes with such heavenly thoughts.. its dreamy & make the readers to float with her.. & she teaches alot,, from how to blush to how to be adored lol
''And the next second I regret calling for Virat''
she is an equally protective wife.. all she cares about is virat & her kids.. i love this selfless lady...

coming back to meredith,, the way u described her, ghostly, looks beaten, wearing dirty cloths etc,, she seems like a victim,, a victim of the cruel game played by rich.. i feel like she has been used by karan & that mystery lady to hook virat & is left helpless afterwards..
so dere's something mannu & us are not aware of,, virat had been searching her ryt,, i remeber reading somewhere long back, i dont know if its about Mer but virat had the idea dat she's living with her kid or something... i may be wrong forgive me if so,, but wat i want to say is,, i am clueless of this twist,, have no idea where all these things are leading to... very eager to grab more information & hence am i recalling the hints u left... & i bet the next update is gonna rock

back to u my dii,, how awesome u must be to comeout with such an update??
u brought in a party & characters Chris & Cherry & an auction..
its something unimaginable.. this is something new like beyond an ordinary person's thought..
i always adore this uniqueness of urs,, i mean u cud have arranged the couple to dance, afterall its a party, but u took some totally different path, something called fund collection for charity, auctioning, dancing with the one who won the ladies, brought Chris; the guy in flashback back to the story, triggered some jealousy & possessiveness in virat, triggered some desires in the couple then u brought the whole party thing to a halt... this is wat i love about u,, u are damn unique.. one can never imagine such things, after all one must be highly educated in such fields,, there's art, literature, fashion, fancy & richness in this piece,, how broadminded u must be to comeout with something like this & pour to ur readers the thing in the exact way u think??? u are really amazing!!!
again, to prove my point,,, i still didnt comeout from the impact of the history or mistery that virat delivered to manvi,, dat society, deir principles on family issues,, those things are very hard to be thought by a person,, its new to readers like me,, but u dared to choose that plot, explained it to us, the readers carefully, put our doubts thru manvi & cleared us the whole plot & gave us the exact issue in a very appreciable, clear manner... its a challenge & a tough task to do, but u dared & nailed it,, this is wat i call uniqueness & never fail to capture dat same uniqueness in every update of urs... u comeout with something unique, something amazing & something magical dat paves me to tell dat each update of urs is better than the previous but at the same time it doesnt mean dat the previous part is less in aspects, it merely means its adorable in its own uniqueness & u can never compare that this is the best chapter & this is not,,, dats where u stand & dats why addicted has reached to its peak... dat makes me to conclude my point,, CONGRADULATIONS!!!! for the second thread of ADDICTED... this masterpiece is magical as the mastermind behind this masterpiece is so full of love, life & miracles,,, i know u are gonna nail it!!!!

so dats it..
u know how much i love u,, but its my duty to say it,, so I loveee u,,, love u LOADS diii,,, get my hugs & kisses... Hats off!!!!❤️ ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Congratulation for 2 thread and to update is awesome he feel jealous when he see cris and what merdiths want why she want kill her and what if her dream come true don't separate them update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
hey i eagerly wait for updates on all your stories..how do you manage to write so many of them and that too so beautifully...keep it up, hope u will not discontinue ur stories even if EHMBB ends!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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|| PART 21 ||

I am standing in a dimly lit roof house in the middle of garden, there was faint music coming from the ballroom. My brain was completely blank and I repeatedly stare at the text message Virat sent me.

Am fine, will come back to you in a few min - V

My feet give up on me, I feel so weak. Martin was standing outside the roof house and keeping my guard as I had forced Blanco to go back to Virat. It has been thirty minutes since he sent me the text and I see no trace of him anywhere.

Why do we have to go through all this?

Can't we have one night for ourselves? One, carefree, peaceful night?

How are we going to survive this constant threat on our lives?

My chest was burgeoning with unconsolable agony and unshed tears. I never have any sort of idea as to what is happening with our lives.

Ten minutes later, I see Virat coming towards me. I run towards him but Martin stops me. "LET ME GO!!" I yell at him.

But he has his hand in front of me and would not let me move even an inch away from the secured area. Tears were threatening their way out. "Please, let me go." I beg him.
Virat signals him to release me and I run into his arms and hug him tightly with all my life. I just cannot control myself, I am sobbing loudly and tears were storming out of my eyes. He pulls me in and strokes my back gently.

"Maaanvi?? Heeey….." he cups my face "….everything is fine sweetheart, don't cry…" he wipes off my tears from my cheek with both his hands "Manvi, kuch nahi huva..look at me."

I see him look around as a few people were gathering around us concerned. I don't care. I just don't f**king care about where we are and who is watching us, I hug him tighter and let it all go. "She had a gun…." I tell him.

"I know baby…not here, let's go home."

"What were you doing with her?" I ask.

"We will talk at home. It was such a mistake coming here." He mutters, puts his hand around me and walks me out. I don't let go off him, I hold him tightly with my hands around his waist, resting my head on his chest.

~~~

"What did you do with her?" I ask him in the car.

"I sent her to a hospital, she was in pretty bad shape. Her five years old son is kidnapped by someone. She wouldn't say who, until I get him back to her. She says that those are the same people who forced her to pose with me on that night. They black-mailed her and they have threatened to kill her son - that was why she did what she did."

"But why did she have a gun?"

"I have told you this Manvi, I have a lot of people looking for her from the day she lied to you about the bracelet. I was furious - she was the only one I trusted in the office. Anyways, we spotted her a few times, but somehow she always got away with her son. I think she thought I will hurt her for what she did, but more than pay-back, I was looking for answers.

"Does she wants to hurt me?"

"She is being black-mailed to kill you if she wants her son back. She was the one who tried to break into our house the other day, when we at the kids interview."

"But Virat, you were going near her, when she was determined to shoot. How could you do that? Do you know how scary that was? Please don't ever do stuff like that again."

"She wasn't going to shoot me Manvi. She is not a criminal. She is just a lowly employee, a desperate mother – she wanted to talk. But, just in any case, I didn't want you to be around her.

"People who want to talk don't go around carrying guns!"

"She is very emotionally unstable Manvi. If I get her son back to her, she will tell us the names of the people involved. "

"That is crazy!!! How can you trust her? What if all this is a game?"

"I am not trusting her blindly Manvi, I have proof. Her son is missing since 10 days. And look at her, she is just too unstable, she is going crazy. Just imagine what we would do if someone took our kids from us Manvi.

"Even if we assume that she was forced initially, is she expecting us to believe that she did not get a single chance to come clean to you? In the last three years?"

"Manvi, she didn't know the whole story and we still don't know how deep this plot is. She might have been under constant surveillance."

"That's bull-shit!"

He takes a deep breath and he is exasperated with me. "I know what I am doing Manvi, nothing is more important than getting to the bottom of this and knowing the people who are responsible. I am willing to take a risk – you need to trust me on this."

"It's not you that I don't trust - it's her. I am NOT willing to take a risk when it concerns you. And why are you so worried about her anyways?"

"Because I need to gain her trust! I need information from her."

"Couldn't you have done that without touching her???" I turn my face away. "She lied to us! I don't have a good feeling about this Virat!" I tell him firmly.

"This is the only way to get to those people. I have no other way to know for sure Manvi." He doesn't concede.

Inspite of all his explanation, I am not satisfied, I don't want Virat to have anything to do with Meredith, that lady gives me the creeps. But who am I to argue with the boss? When does he ever listen to me? I just feel so helpless. I move away from him and look out through the window, we were almost home. He holds my hand but I ignore him.

"Who was the lady wearing the blue dress? She was on the stage with me. Did you have anything to do with her?" I ask.

I feel his grip tighten on my hand, he doesn't reply immediately "Nobody of consequence." He finally says.

His voice is unusually sad and I feel his pain. I immediately know she must be one of those girls he was with before. It pricks me deeply and opens up an unhealed wound. But I decide not to follow it further. Some things just have a way of going round and round – in a vicious circle – in a never ending hurt game.

"Manvi please." He says. I push back all my emotions, I do not look at him. If I do, I will breakdown for sure.

"Manvi! Don't go there. It means nothing."

"MANVI!"

"DON'T! JUST DON'T 'MANVI ME' VIRAT!!! I am fine, just let me be, for a few minutes. All this is just too much."

Blanco pulls over in the driveway and I open the door and rush inside. A fresh batch of tears were threatening to spring out. Virat doesn't stop me. He just follows me silently. Right when we were at the door, I see someone sitting there in the dark. I immediately recognize her.

"Swetha? What are you doing here so late? And why are you sitting outside?"

"Mannu.." she stands up and comes to hug me. "I couldn't stay alone Mannu, I was going crazy, he cheated me, he lied about everything, you were completely right." She cries.

Oh! She told me that she was going to confront Ishan earlier in the day. Looks like it went badly. I don't ask her anything further. There is nothing worse for a girl than being lied to, being cheated – it just shakes her very foundation.

Her face was swollen and looked like she was crying her eyes out all day. I hug her tightly. "Its going to be okay Swe, its all for your good." I pacify her, I don't know from where I got the strength to console her, I was feeling so vulnerable a minute ago.

"Take her inside." Virat tells me.

~~~

I am fixing the guest room for her and she was sitting on the bed silently staring out from the window.

"Can I stay with you for a few days Mannu?" she asks.

"Ofcourse Swe, you felt that you had to ask me that? You can stay with me for as long as you want. Ria and Nikki will be ecstatic tomorrow morning. I go and hug her again.

"Its all going to be okay Swe. This is just a passing cloud." I tell her with a smile. And I know it applies for me equally.

"Do you want to talk about it?" I ask, stroking her hair. She just lies in my lap and starts crying like a small baby. "Swetha!! Come on, you are stronger than this!!"

"Kya strong hu Mannu, hamesha apni haath jalathi hu, kitni bewakoof hu. I really, really liked him. I even started seeing my future with him."

"Oh honey, everything happens for a reason Swe. You remember what you used to tell me? What doesn't kill you, makes you stronger! Right?" She cries harder.

She was just unconsolable. Nothing I was saying made any kind of effect on her. All this took me back in time. There were so many times when I used to be this and Swetha would patiently sit with me all night and console me. How far have I come from there? I am back with Virat now. My kids have never been happier. I should appreciate what I have with me.

I just lay there sitting on the bed with her until she cried herself to sleep. I had no energy, I was just emotionally drained. It has been one hell of a day.

It was almost 4 in the morning. I hear a small knock on the door. I carefully get up without disturbing Swetha and open the door. It was Virat, he was dressed up in a fresh white shirt and trousers and Blanco was carrying his laptop bag out.

"Sorry baby, where you sleeping?" he asks.

"No, are you going somewhere?"

"Shhh.. " He takes my hand and closes the door of the room from outside.

"Manvi, I will be gone for the whole day. I have a meeting in Chicago, it was kinda last minute and its very important, otherwise I wouldn't be going."

"You will be back by tonight right?"

"Yes or tomorrow morning, in the worst case. Kids are still asleep, I will call them in the morning."

"Did you get any sleep at all?" I ask. He seems very worn out.

"How is your friend doing?" he asks ignoring my question.

"Pretty bad. I don't even know how to console her."

"Well, you should use your magic." He smiles.

"I am out of it." I look down.

"I have some stored up with me, do you want it back?" he asks.

I try to smile.

"Still mad at me?" he asks, coming closer, lifting my chin up.

"I am not mad at you Virat. I am worried – extremely." I tell him sincerely.

"It is all going to be okay baby. Trust me. Now give me one of that sweet smile of yours, because I going to be gone the whole day."

I smile weakly.

He puts his hands around me and kisses my forehead. "You will miss me?"

"No!" I mope but I hug him, tightly. He in return, squeezes me in his arms. I feel heavenly and safe. We stay like that for a few seconds. How nice would it be to never leave his arms!!

"Tell Ria that I will get her magic wand and Nikki that I will get him a boxing glove."

"I will not let you back into the house." I frown.

"That's ok, my kids will sneak me in.." he grins.

"Acha?...your kids? Aaisa hai kya?" I shake my head but I smile back at him sweetly.

"Ah, there you go…that beautiful smile. I am going to go happily now."

I smile some more.

"Tell Swetha that I am going to kick Ishan's ass after I come back."

"You better."

"Bye baby!!" he gives me a quick kiss on my lips.

"Bye jaan." I whisper.

He doesn't go, he just stands there looking at me. "I don't feel like leaving you when you are like this Manvi."

"I am fine Virat. Swetha is also with me for company. I will show her the school."

He cups my face and gives me another swift kiss on my lips. It reminds me of the wonderful time we had before we got interrupted by the psychopath. I close my eyes and absorb his pleasant touch. He runs his fingers through my hair, raising my face to his. I open my eyes and he leans in to take my lips again and this time, he doesn't stop, he deepens his mouth on mine. He pushes me onto the wall behind and kisses me passionately exploring every inch of my mouth with his tongue. I could feel the wild charge running through between us - its electrifying. His hands travel freely around my bare waist, threatening to explore up and much higher.

He breaks off from me and without any warning, pulls me into our bedroom and locks the door. "Virat!!"

He is in no mood to talk. He comes closer, his eyes were darting from my lips to my neck and down at my heaving chest. I squirm under her gaze. He kisses my neck and in this process pushes the top of my saree off and moves back to my lips, his hands simultaneously unwrapping the rest of the saree off. I try to move away from him. But he pulls me back and carries me onto the bed.

He places me on the bed gently but doesn't come to me."I don't have much time Manvi.." he says standing over me.I was lying on the bed in front of him in just my short blouse and lehenga. He is standing over me, fully dressed and his gaze travels down my body slowly and sensuously setting it on wild fire. My heart starts thumping out of my chest and I am extremely shy, my throat had dried up.

"You should go then." I say but my tone defeats my words.

I try to cover myself but he pulls away the sheet. "You.look.so.beautiful.." he says unbuttoning his shirt. My face flames up red. He moves on top of me and starts drowning me in his kisses while his hands travel up my body, slowly and sensuously - and the whole world stops around me for the next few minutes as I get swept away in his wild and passionate love.

~~~

"Blanco will stay with you and kids." He tells me while getting dressed, I am still in bed wrapped up in a sheet, my whole body flushed in warmth.

"Alright Mr. Protective husband of the year. I get it, you love me."

"More than my life." He smiles sweetly and kisses my forehead.

"Come back by tonight." I request putting my hands around his neck.

"I will"

"Promise?" I ask smiling coyly.

He smiles shaking his head. "Promise. waise, ab kyu sharmarahi ho?" he asks making me blush all shades of red.

"You are very late Sir." Blanco tells Virat at the entrance. It was almost a scolding.

Virat gives me one last hug. "Take care of her." Virat tells Blanco.

"Yes sir!"

"Bye Blanco. Do you want a gift too?" he teases him.

"Just come back safe sir." Blanco gives Virat a rare smile.

~~~

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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
thanks for this update 😃..
im happy that virat is safe😊

but i do feel sorry for manvi..is really difficult for her to digest that virat has been wiz other women...

but thank god she is not that mad wiz him..
i just love this virman...there love for each other is just sooo great!!!

anu well chosen title..im truly addicted to it... already read part 21 four times 😛

update soon


Edited by roshreb - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
RES
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Firstly, thank youuu for the update!!!! Eeekksss!! 2 Updates in less than 24 hours!! Am sooo happy u dint make us wait too long!! That Psycho meridith was freaking me out too!! BUT THANK GOD nothing happen!!! The Hug after that was Awww I Liked the way Manvi was pissed off 😛 And Manvi's concern in the car about Anything happening to virat was super sweet!!
HAHA! Virat can never control him self! :P Loved the updated as always!!! 😃 PS: one more thing! I love the convo's u make between VirMan they make me go "Awww" ur just amazing!! Waiting for the next surprise update! 😛😉
Edited by Dina_VirMan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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*res

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I am glad that Virat got away unharmed... trust... important word and feeling
Swetha got finally to know the truth!

Wonderful job! Do continue 👍🏼
Edited by Kiekeboe - 12 years ago

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