VirMan SS: Something about you ~ character sketch page no 2~on hold!!:

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys i'm new!!not new i'll come here some time!!N love virman like anything!!

So here is my first ss in this story about friendship relationship lots of naughty talk N romance!! Sorry for grammer mistake

prologue:

running as fast as she could,finally reached to her room.taking the phone from her friend with lots of excitement!!(taking deep breath said in low tone)
G:hello!
?
?
?(no reply)
G:hello?
?
?
( after a long paused then finally he said)
:hello! Virat here (after a long time he explain her everything then disconnected the call)

after 2Days
at there wedding night
(he was waiting for her,N there she enter the room with glass of milk he started walking toward her)
V:look i'll explain u everything!!i can't accept u as my wife (hell he will never accept her as his wife he was goin to say something when she said)
Girl:chill maar yaar( saying this she slap him on his shoulder N walking toward the table N keep the glass there,remove the veil from her face trun around to face him)

(for him it was shocked did she said that or he is dreaming,did she slap him just like long lost friend,never in his life he hear that a girl said chill maar to grooms at there first night)

precap:
G: are not u goin to sleep with me
(he was goin to take extra blanket when he hear that)

howz it good? bad?
Its my first ss hope not last:D
chappy 1 coming soon don't know when i'm very lazy :D!!
I think u all guess it who is she!! so who guess the first next chappy for he/she:D!! i can't pm u guys 1 i don't know how to 2 i don't have lappy here with me after some 3 4 update i'll started pm kk!!

If u like N loved to read more plzzz hit the like N comment!!




for hint scroll down:D
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SNTG thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
the girl is maanviii...lol...okay i liked ur story do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow...~!!I guess the Girl is Maanvi..~!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start~~~i guess the girl is manvi😉...looking forward for next😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The prologue is very interesting. Plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks to all my reader for like N comment!! Did u guys really like it am i dreaming or what!!:/ i most say we have a awesome writer here i'm nothing infront of them!! Still u guys like my peace of work!!thank u i'll try to update chappy 1 very soon!! I really need yours help not now but very soon be'cos i don't know how to pm huh!!for now this
future hint:
after 2month manvi mms
Edited by 1lyf1luvdance - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Prologue is fun ...an no doubt the gal is manvi ...
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome concept

woah virat is soo right to think lyk that wich girl does that to her groom on the wedding night lolz obviously manvi does who else can do that waiting eagerly for the nex part plz do continue soon 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Haiii!! OMG This is so awesome! To see VirMan in this avatar, the bindaas attitude of Manvi is amazing as well 😉.

I can't wait to read the rest 😭. PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!

The prologue was great and I just know this story is going to be amazing.

After 2 months manvi mms ?? Kya? I didn't get the hint ... 😕 Sorry, please help my stupid brain understand.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice and funny concept but manvi mms OMG.waiting for next part.

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