Virmaan : Ek jid Ek junoon : 2nd : Part-52+ note on 154 - Page 71

Originally posted by: sha19

Superb update 😊
Waiting for the next one

thanks...
Next will be soon...

Originally posted by: jannat89

wow khushi
Mind blowing update
Virat anger n passion was super hot
Loved it
Waiting to next part..

thank u dear...
I will try to soon...

Originally posted by: jannat89

hey dnt end this story here khushi... This ff gonna more interesting one... But its upto u and ur wish
But plz makes more chp in this

i will try dear...
Thanks..

Originally posted by: ArthyV

<font size="2">The update was awesome didi...👏</font>

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<font size="2">But I just don't love this Virat... I didn't say I hate him... but I don't like him either...😕</font>

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<font size="2">He is just proving that he's more powerful... And he is forcing Manvi...😒 But why don't he understand that force can never create even a single drop of love in one's heart...😔</font>

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<font size="2">And he was saying that this is a demo...😡</font>

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<font size="2">He thinks that he won't do anything that would make Manvi hate him all the life... but what he done is not right...😲</font>

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<font size="2">I love his passion... but...</font>

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<font size="2">Love is about loving di not hurting...😊</font>

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<font size="2">Whether he agree or not...what he done is wrong...</font>

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<font size="2">Love is not about overpowering... it is about understanding...😊</font>

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<font size="2">And di... this is in no way offence to your writing or this ff...😳</font>

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<font size="2">Its just my point of view on Virat...</font>

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And as I already told I love this ff and the update was fab...👏<font size="2">👏👏</font>

thank u dear...
Yeah.. I know he was wrong... Nd u r right too...

Originally posted by: JESMY143VIRMAN

AWESOME UPDATES.👏👏👏

thanxx..

Originally posted by: millee18

amazing...
cont soon!!!!:-)

thanks...
Ii will try..

Originally posted by: monikaksl

Amazing update👏

Virat is so passionate😉Are manvi ab toh accept karlo

Kya demo tha😉

Update soon

thanks...
Try to soon...

Originally posted by: nixdix

<font color="#333333" size="5">WHHATT????😲😡</font>

<font color="#333333" size="5">YOU'LL END IT IN COMING 2-3 PARTS?</font>

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<font color="#333333" size="5">BUT WHY??💔</font>

<font color="#333333" size="5">WHAT MADE YOU THINK LIKE THAT?</font>

<font color="#333333" size="5">YAAR, THIS IS THE MOST HEART-THROBBING</font>

<font color="#333333" size="5">STORY OF YOURS!!!!👍🏼❤️</font>

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<font color="#333333" size="5">PLEASE GIVE IT A GRACEFUL END!!!!</font>

nothing just feel that i m not good in this kind of story line...
Try to be gve good end...

Originally posted by: Purufk

Part-38 +39...
Both parts r superb... Awesome... Mindblowing... Outstanding... Out of world... No words...
U write superbly... I loved it...
Superb...
Yaar he was too scary... Poor my mannu... How he behave with her... So so so bad...
Thank god he stop...
He didn't want to cross his limits then why he hurt her...
So so so sad for her...
Plz;plz;plz;plz;
continue soo...
Nd
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plz don't stop this story...
I knew u thinking that u r not good with this kind of story but saw our msg ... U r fab one...
U can write very well...
So plz don't feel bad or else...
Ur story going to be fab...
Plz
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plz
plz
continue soon...

thank u so much dear
really... Its means a lot...
I will try to be soon...

Originally posted by: Purufk

Di please please please please continue soon..
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Di...

i will...
Buri after my one story.. After marriage...